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* AmbiguousAge: It's believed by fans that the author is actually ''21'' years old. Though by taking a look at her Fanfiction.net profile, where she mentions that she just turned 13, it's likely that this was just a RougeAnglesofSatin moment. Still funny to think that an adult woman would write something like Fanfic/StarkitsProphcy in earnest.
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* {{Gayngst}}{{Gayngst}}: After being rejected by Jazzsong's inspiration in real life, she goes through a bout of angsting over why she didn't love her. She gets better, though.
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* KnightTemplar
KnightTemplar: She's essentially a StealthParody of the surprisingly large subsect of Literature/WarriorCats fans who were overly-millitant conservative Christians.
*LargeHamLargeHam: Much like [[WorldOfHam everyone]] in Starkit's Prophecy, a majority of her dialogue is either written in all caps or is overly dramatic.
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* PsuedoRomanticFriendship: With Stargleam, despite the author's (initial) claims against this. Even with Stargleam's ever-growing amount of boyfriends and "mats", she's the one constant in the purple cat's life.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: In a similar fashion to Fanfic/MyImmortal, Jazzsong is based off of Stargleam's best friend, and they even have a PlotMandatedFriendshipFailure (in the real world) nearing the climax of the fic.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: In a similar fashion to Fanfic/MyImmortal, Jazzsong is based off of Stargleam's best friend, and they even have a PlotMandatedFriendshipFailure (in the real world) nearing the climax of the fic.
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* AmazingTechnicolorWildlife: She has purple fur.
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Incest Is Relative is an index, not a trope
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* TheChosenOne[=/=]MessianicArchetype: Among many other things, [=StarGleam=] was chosen to hand out the "Ten Commondents".
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* TheChosenOne[=/=]MessianicArchetype: TheChosenOne: Among many other things, [=StarGleam=] was chosen to hand out the "Ten Commondents".
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* IncestIsRelative: He falls in love with Stargleam, his great-granddaughter.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Her purple fur.
** The "ALLIANCES" actually describe her as 'graysh-blue-and purple'.
** The "ALLIANCES" actually describe her as 'graysh-blue-and purple'.
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He is also pining after Gleamstar, but goes evil upon her rejection. He also decides to "mack our" with Hawkfrost at one point, [[FoeYay even though they were fighting.]]
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He is also pining after Gleamstar, but goes evil upon her rejection. He also decides to "mack our" with Hawkfrost at one point, [[FoeYay even though they were fighting.]]
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TRS has decided that Schoolgirl Lesbians is no longer a valid trope. Removing all links to the page and changing them to more appropriate pages if one can be found
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: With [=JazzSong=].
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: With [=StarGleam=].
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: With [=RedFur=].
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* SchoolgirlLesbians: With [=LakePool=].
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* InvincibleHero: [[MarySue Naturally.]]
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* InvincibleHero: [[MarySue Naturally.]]
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* EmoTeen: The author and, [[AuthorAvatar consequently]], [=StarGleam=] stray into this when the author's real-life best friend rejects her ([[SuddenlySexuality extremely sudden]]) love.
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* EmoTeen: The author and, [[AuthorAvatar consequently]], [=StarGleam=] stray into this when the author's real-life best friend rejects her ([[SuddenlySexuality extremely sudden]]) (extremely sudden) love.
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One of Stargleam's sisters. At one point, she dies but later is just fine. She joins [[RougeAnglesOfSatin [=SatinClan=]]] upon saying she is [[BiTheWay bisexual.]]
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One of Stargleam's sisters. At one point, she dies but later is just fine. She joins [[RougeAnglesOfSatin [=SatinClan=]]] upon saying she is [[BiTheWay bisexual.]]
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* BiTheWay: [=FlamePelt=] casually announces that she is "by", and that it doesn't matter. [=StarKit=] and [=NightStorm=] are shocked and try to tell her how "bed" it is, but she just ignores them and goes to join [[RougeAnglesOfSatin "Satinclan"]]
** DepravedBisexual: It's treated as though she's this, however.
** DepravedBisexual: It's treated as though she's this, however.
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The main character and namesake of the story. She is the daughter of Jayfeather and an {{OC}} named Dawnsparkle, and a prophecy says she will rid the forest of the evil tiger and holly. She also ends up in a LoveDodecahedron with Firestar, Blackstar, Graystripe, Ashfur, and Hawkfrost until settling for Jazzsong and [[HomosexualReproduction having her kits.]]
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The main character and namesake of the story. She is the daughter of Jayfeather and an {{OC}} OriginalCharacter named Dawnsparkle, and a prophecy says she will rid the forest of the evil tiger and holly. She also ends up in a LoveDodecahedron with Firestar, Blackstar, Graystripe, Ashfur, and Hawkfrost until settling for Jazzsong and [[HomosexualReproduction having her kits.]]
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* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn]]: For a chapter or two.
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* [[spoiler:FaceHeelTurn]]: FaceHeelTurn: For a [[spoiler:a chapter or two.two]].
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*** But if she didn't, that would mean the author failed both [[YouFailBiologyForever biology]] [[MindScrew and]] [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex sex ed]].
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*** But if she didn't, that would mean the author failed both [[YouFailBiologyForever [[ArtisticLicenseBiology biology]] [[MindScrew and]] [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex sex ed]].
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* BackFromTheDead: She dies twice in the space of two chapters, but doesn't stay dead either time.
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* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: She's on Stargleam's side in the beginning, temporarily becomes evil when possessed by Hollyleaf, cooperates with Stargleam for a while before joining [=SatinClan=], then becomes good again in the end.
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* BackFromTheDead: She gets killed protecting Stargleam from possessed Lakepool, but shows up alive and well three chapters later.
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* DudeMagnet: Graystripe, Firestar, Blackstar, and Hawkfrost are ''all'' in love with her.
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* DudeMagnet: Graystripe, Firestar, Blackstar, and Ashfur,and Hawkfrost are ''all'' in love with her.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Oddly, [=StarGleam=] views him as this, despite his immense fandom popularity.
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* TheChosenOne / MessianicArchetype: Among many other things, [=StarGleam=] was chosen to hand out the "Ten Commondents".
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* TheChosenOne / MessianicArchetype: BadassPreacher: "ACCEPT JESUS MOTHERFUCKERS!"
* TheChosenOne[=/=]MessianicArchetype: Among many other things, [=StarGleam=] was chosen to hand out the "TenCommondents".Commondents".
* DudeMagnet: Graystripe, Firestar, Blackstar, and Hawkfrost are ''all'' in love with her.
* TheChosenOne[=/=]MessianicArchetype: Among many other things, [=StarGleam=] was chosen to hand out the "Ten
* DudeMagnet: Graystripe, Firestar, Blackstar, and Hawkfrost are ''all'' in love with her.
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* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Performs [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice]]: [[spoiler:Performs one.]]
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* AmbiguouslyGay / SissyVillain: He wears pink nail polish and hangs out with other gay cats.
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* SatelliteCharacter: She has no personality outside of being [=StarGleam=]'s best friend and mate.
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* SatelliteCharacter: SatelliteLoveInterest: She has no personality outside of being [=StarGleam=]'s best friend and mate.
* SatelliteLoveInterestmate.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: He wears pink nail polish and hangs out with other gay cats.
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* AmbiguouslyGay: AmbiguouslyGay / SissyVillain: He wears pink nail polish and hangs out with other gay cats.
* DesignatedVillain: He's not quite as much of a threat as he's made out to be.
* DesignatedVillain: He's not quite as much of a threat as he's made out to be.
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* SatelliteLoveInterest
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* ShallowLoveInterest: For [=StarGleam=].
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* ShallowLoveInterest: SatelliteLoveInterest: To Jayfeather. Jayfeather.
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* ShallowLoveInterest: SatelliteLoveInterest: Becomes this for Stargleam.
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SatelliteLoveInterest
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Stargleam's best friend. She ends in up in a relationship with Gleamstar once the author realized that she was a "plebian".
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Stargleam's best friend. She ends in up in a relationship with Gleamstar once the author realized that she was a "plebian".
* SatelliteCharacter: She has no personality outside of being [=StarGleam=]'s best friend and mate.
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* ShallowLoveInterestShallowLoveInterest: For [=StarGleam=].
* ChuckCunninghamSyndrome: She doesn't show up or get mentioned again after the first few chapters.
* SatelliteCharacter: Outside of being Jayfeather's mate and mother of his kits, she doesn't have anything going for her besides her [=ShadowClan=] heritage.
* SatelliteCharacter: Outside of being Jayfeather's mate and mother of his kits, she doesn't have anything going for her besides her [=ShadowClan=] heritage.
* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Performs one.]]
* MeaningfulName: He has fluffy fur.
* MeaningfulName: He has fluffy fur.
* DistressedDude: Gets abducted by Ashfur.
* IncestIsRelative: He falls in love with Stargleam, his great-granddaughter.
* ShallowLoveInterest: Becomes this for Stargleam.
* ShallowLoveInterest
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* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but in this fic...
* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but in this fic...
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* CrazyJealousGuy
CrazyJealousGuy: To the point that he breaks off his friendship with Firestar just for Stargleam.
* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but in thisfic...fic, not so much.
* ShallowLoveInterest
* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but in this
* ShallowLoveInterest
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* ShallowLoveInterest
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* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but [[CharacterDerailment in this fic]]...
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* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but [[CharacterDerailment in this fic]]...fic...
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* GratuitousJapanese: Thinks Stargleam is "kawaii."
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* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but [[CharacterDerailment in this fic]]...
* InformedAttribute: Stargleam calls him "funny and col." That would fit for canon Graystripe, but [[CharacterDerailment in this fic]]...
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The leader of [=ThunderClan=] who becomes the mate of Gleamstar, despite [[{{Squick}} being her great grandfather]] and already being with Sandstorm, who is still alive and doesn't seem to mind.
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The leader of [=ThunderClan=] who becomes the mate of Gleamstar, despite [[{{Squick}} being her great grandfather]] and already being with Sandstorm, who is still alive and doesn't seem to mind. mind.
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* MayDecemberRomance: With Stargleam.
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* MayDecemberRomance: With Stargleam.
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* DemotedToExtra
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* IGotBetterUnexplainedRecovery
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*** But if she didn't, that would mean the author failed both [[YouFailBiologyForever biology]] [[MindScrew and]] [[YouFailSexEdForever sex ed]].
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*** But if she didn't, that would mean the author failed both [[YouFailBiologyForever biology]] [[MindScrew and]] [[YouFailSexEdForever [[AnatomicallyImpossibleSex sex ed]].
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation One could view StarKit as this]]. Her [[AuthorFilibuster strong moral stance]] against pre-marital sex and her death as she is getting married to [=HawkFrost=] means that she hasn't had sex at all, which means that her following this trope could explain her being an uptight blueberry who yells at all happy same-sex couples.
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: [[AlternativeCharacterInterpretation One could view StarKit as this]]. Her [[AuthorFilibuster strong moral stance]] against pre-marital sex and her death as she is getting married to [=HawkFrost=] means that she hasn't had sex at all, which means that her following this trope could explain her being an uptight blueberry bitch who yells at all happy same-sex couples.
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*AmbiguouslyGay: He wears pink nail polish and hangs out with other gay cats.
*AmbiguouslyGay: He wears pink nail polish and hangs out with other gay cats.
