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* PuppeteerParasite: It and the MOTHERSPAWNS that broke off from it are the reason the island is considered a "haunted point," a place that turns compatible people into hosts for micro-organisms that eventually turn the subject into violent psychopaths.
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* PuppeteerParasite: It and the MOTHERSPAWNS that broke off from it are the reason the island is considered a "haunted point," a place that turns compatible people into hosts for micro-organisms that eventually turn the subject into a violent psychopaths.psychopath.
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* PuppeteerParasite: It and the MOTHERSPAWNS that broke off from it are the reason the island is considered a "haunted point," a place that turns compatible people into hosts for micro-organisms that eventually turn the subject into violent psychopaths.
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* PuppeteerParasite: It and the MOTHERSPAWNS that broke off from it are the reason the island is considered a "haunted point," a place that turns compatible people into hosts for micro-organisms that eventually turn the subject into violent psychopaths.
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A surreal abomination formed from YOU and Susie's mothers fusing together, and the final boss of the mod. It is actually a parasitical entity that was formed in the Field, with the power to reduce others to beings driven by mindless desire.
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A surreal abomination formed from YOU and Susie's mothers fusing together, and the final boss of the mod. It is actually a parasitical entity that was formed in the Field, with the power to reduce others to beings driven by mindless desire. According to text files created after the game's completion, it is the source of YOU and Susie's cases of The Gift, and responsible for the chain of events that turned Susie into who she is now.
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* TheCorrupter: Is one to Susie, and starts acting this way towards YOU later on- using the hallucinations presenting themselves as ghosts of their family members to make them into bloodthirsty murderers.
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* PuppeteerParasite: It and the MOTHERSPAWNS that broke off from it are the reason the island is considered a "haunted point," a place that turns compatible people into hosts for micro-organisms that eventually turn the subject into violent psychopaths.
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A surreal abomination formed from YOU and Susie's mothers fusing together, and the final boss of the mod.
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A surreal abomination formed from YOU and Susie's mothers fusing together, and the final boss of the mod. It is actually a parasitical entity that was formed in the Field, with the power to reduce others to beings driven by mindless desire.
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* EldritchAbomination: It's a massive ghostly being that attacks with giant hands, speaks gibberish, and has the power to turn ghosts into shooting stars raining on the continent. Even compared to the other beings fought in this mod, it's especially surreal.
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* BigBad: It’s the entity that actually created the MOTHERSPAWN and is using them to ravage the world.
* EldritchAbomination: It's a massive ghostlybeing mass of control that attacks with giant hands, speaks gibberish, and has the power to reduce people to animalistic impulses, project emotions onto others, invade minds with micro-organisms, and turn ghosts into shooting stars raining on the continent.continent. Its origins are also ambiguous, with the only statement being that it was born in the Field. Even compared to the other beings fought in this mod, it's especially surreal.
* EldritchAbomination: It's a massive ghostly
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-->MANOS imitates human behavior, but doesn’t get the genuinity behind it.
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* HilarityEnsues: asking them about various subjects inevitably leads to them bickering and breaking out into a slap fight that causes them to spin wildly in place while arguing at the same time. [[OnlySaneManSome of them point out how stupid these arguments are]], while others will devolve into name-calling and death threats
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* HilarityEnsues: asking Asking them about various subjects inevitably leads to them bickering and breaking out into a slap fight that causes them to spin wildly in place while arguing at the same time. [[OnlySaneManSome [[OnlySaneMan Some of them point out how stupid these arguments are]], while others will devolve into name-calling and death threatsthreats.
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Correction: Trope names should not be spoilered out. Also, ZCE comment-outs.
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* [[spoiler:SuicidePact]]: With Susie in the "Remains Uncertain" ending.
* [[spoiler:WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds]]: PlayedForLaughs in the "good" ending, and decidedly less so in the "Not Much Better" ending.
* [[spoiler:WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds]]: PlayedForLaughs in the "good" ending, and decidedly less so in the "Not Much Better" ending.
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* [[spoiler:BrainwashedAndCrazy]]: The reason for her violent tendencies. It's not limited to onscreen appearances, either, as all the kids that were scared away from the orphanage [[spoiler:were in reality murdered by a possessed Susie to free Manos]].
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* [[spoiler:BrainwashedAndCrazy]]: BrainwashedAndCrazy: The reason for her violent tendencies. It's not limited to onscreen appearances, either, as all the kids that were scared away from the orphanage [[spoiler:were in reality murdered by a possessed Susie to free Manos]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: And how. [[spoiler:She was left to fend for herself at thirteen before landing in the orphanage, where she actually found friends, at least until The Gift drove her to begin murdering other orphans, and her willing roboticization by Alphys accomplished little other than turning her into an EmptyShell. Now the rest of the orphanage fears her, and she's forced to watch herself keep killing, unable to tell anyone what's happening]].
--> '''22 Creations:''' Are you saying you've had a worse life than this frog?
--> '''Susie:''' Actually, yes, that was going to be my point.
--> '''22 Creations:''' Are you saying you've had a worse life than this frog?
--> '''Susie:''' Actually, yes, that was going to be my point.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: And how. [[spoiler:She was left to fend for herself at thirteen before landing in the orphanage, where she actually found friends, at least until The Gift drove her to begin murdering other orphans, and her willing roboticization by Alphys accomplished little other than turning her into an EmptyShell. Now the rest of the orphanage fears her, and she's forced to watch herself keep killing, unable to tell anyone what's happening]].
--> '''22 Creations:''' Are you saying you've had a worse life than thisfrog?
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'''Susie:''' Actually, yes, that was going to be my point.
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'''Susie:''' Actually, yes, that was going to be my point.
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* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide]]: In a few of the endings.
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* [[spoiler:DrivenToSuicide]]: DrivenToSuicide: In a few of the endings.
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* [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]]: Alongside [[spoiler:Lancer]], with surprisingly little consequence in the game proper. She wasn't always that way, though.
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* [[spoiler:SuicidePact]]: With YOU in the "Remains Uncertain" ending.
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* [[spoiler:RoboticReveal]]: Comes up when Susie lands an attack on him that would have otherwise been lethal.
* [[spoiler:UnroboticReveal]]: Text files accessible after completing the "Remains Uncertain" or "Not Much Better" ending explain that [[spoiler:he was originally a ghost, and that he asked Alphys to create a robotic body for him dubbed "Metta" that he would use to seek stardom]].
* [[spoiler:UnroboticReveal]]: Text files accessible after completing the "Remains Uncertain" or "Not Much Better" ending explain that [[spoiler:he was originally a ghost, and that he asked Alphys to create a robotic body for him dubbed "Metta" that he would use to seek stardom]].
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* HilarityEnsues: asking them about various subjects inevitably leads to them bickering and breaking out into a slap fight that causes them to spin wildly in place while arguing at the same time. Some of them are TheOnlySaneMan and point out how stupid these arguments are, while others will devolve into name-calling and death threats
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* HilarityEnsues: asking them about various subjects inevitably leads to them bickering and breaking out into a slap fight that causes them to spin wildly in place while arguing at the same time. Some [[OnlySaneManSome of them are TheOnlySaneMan and point out how stupid these arguments are, are]], while others will devolve into name-calling and death threats
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* OnlySaneMan: In the sense that he seems to be the only character almost exactly like his ''Deltarune'' counterpart. Given that this is [[CloudCuccooLander Rouxls Kaard]], "sane" may not be the best descriptor for him.
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* OnlySaneMan: In the sense that he seems to be the only character almost exactly like his ''Deltarune'' counterpart. Given that this is [[CloudCuccooLander [[CloudCuckooLander Rouxls Kaard]], "sane" may not be the best descriptor for him.
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!!Master Devotees
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** their BedsheetGhost form ''cracks a mouth down its body to laugh and you.''
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** their BedsheetGhost form ''cracks a mouth down its body to laugh and at you.''
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* LaughablyEvil: They're a vicious boss level enemy, but the things they say couples with the method used to beat them make them very humorous in sharp contrast to their horrifying looking design.
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* LaughablyEvil: They're a vicious boss level enemy, but the things they say couples coupled with the method used to beat them make them very humorous in sharp contrast to their horrifying looking design.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: The shooting stars it makes enable YOU to make nine wishes, causing Manos' downfall.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: The shooting stars it makes from raining its minions down on the world enable YOU to make nine wishes, causing Manos' downfall.downfall.
* ShoutOut: Essentially the titular entity from Film/ManosTheHandsOfFate, with "1966" being the year the film came out. The difference being that it's more or less acting directly as a BigBad instead of through its worshippers. As a sort of mirror to its films notoriously bad acting, it also has a hard time acting as an actual person, with its descriptions coming across as somewhat stilted.
* ShoutOut: Essentially the titular entity from Film/ManosTheHandsOfFate, with "1966" being the year the film came out. The difference being that it's more or less acting directly as a BigBad instead of through its worshippers. As a sort of mirror to its films notoriously bad acting, it also has a hard time acting as an actual person, with its descriptions coming across as somewhat stilted.
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[[folder: Master Devotees]]
A group of six Motherspawn Ghosts wearing pink dresses that surprise the heroes in the forest, and fight as one from their wheel, replacing Clover from the original.
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* BigBallOfViolence: when they get into an argument they spin wildly while quarreling among themselves, kicking up a dust cloud to create this visual. For some reason the cloud has plant like details (mainly leaves) on its edges.
* TheDividual: All 6 are independent ghosts that work together as one enemy, and much like the boss they replace, they can quarrel among themselves.
* DysfunctionJunction: They're a threat, there's no mistake, but they are surprisingly ''very'' easy to turn on each other, and are prone to spinning out of control as they get into slap-fighting.
* EldritchAbomination: They start off looking like a traditional BedsheetGhost, but then:
** their BedsheetGhost form ''cracks a mouth down its body to laugh and you.''
** a grey ooze comes out of the mouth to envelop the ghost before forming a ball
** it turns into a monochromatic flower that opens a single eye in the middle
** and, finally said flower blinks into the full flowery wheel being held onto by 6 pink women, each with their own NightmareFace.
* HilarityEnsues: asking them about various subjects inevitably leads to them bickering and breaking out into a slap fight that causes them to spin wildly in place while arguing at the same time. Some of them are TheOnlySaneMan and point out how stupid these arguments are, while others will devolve into name-calling and death threats
* LaughablyEvil: They're a vicious boss level enemy, but the things they say couples with the method used to beat them make them very humorous in sharp contrast to their horrifying looking design.
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A group of six Motherspawn Ghosts wearing pink dresses that surprise the heroes in the forest, and fight as one from their wheel, replacing Clover from the original.
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* BigBallOfViolence: when they get into an argument they spin wildly while quarreling among themselves, kicking up a dust cloud to create this visual. For some reason the cloud has plant like details (mainly leaves) on its edges.
* TheDividual: All 6 are independent ghosts that work together as one enemy, and much like the boss they replace, they can quarrel among themselves.
* DysfunctionJunction: They're a threat, there's no mistake, but they are surprisingly ''very'' easy to turn on each other, and are prone to spinning out of control as they get into slap-fighting.
* EldritchAbomination: They start off looking like a traditional BedsheetGhost, but then:
** their BedsheetGhost form ''cracks a mouth down its body to laugh and you.''
** a grey ooze comes out of the mouth to envelop the ghost before forming a ball
** it turns into a monochromatic flower that opens a single eye in the middle
** and, finally said flower blinks into the full flowery wheel being held onto by 6 pink women, each with their own NightmareFace.
* HilarityEnsues: asking them about various subjects inevitably leads to them bickering and breaking out into a slap fight that causes them to spin wildly in place while arguing at the same time. Some of them are TheOnlySaneMan and point out how stupid these arguments are, while others will devolve into name-calling and death threats
* LaughablyEvil: They're a vicious boss level enemy, but the things they say couples with the method used to beat them make them very humorous in sharp contrast to their horrifying looking design.
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* BadassBiker: in comparison to the original version of Lancer, This one actually has a legitimate motorcycle, as well as a gun, to fight you with. The 2.0 update goes a bit further, giving him a red AKIRA-styled motorcycle and a more muscular look with exposed, muscled arms
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* ViolationOfCommonSense: The "peaceful" method of beating him involves slapping him with Noyno's scarf several times with the "Make Peace" ACT.
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* ViolationOfCommonSense: The "peaceful" method of beating him involves slapping him with Noyno's scarf several times via ButtonMashing with the "Make Peace" ACT.ACT.
* YourSizeMayVary: Lampshaded by Noyno is the fact that he's visibly smaller as a sprite to accommodate being on his bike.
* YourSizeMayVary: Lampshaded by Noyno is the fact that he's visibly smaller as a sprite to accommodate being on his bike.
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* ScrewDestiny: [[spoiler: In the best ending, Susie reveals that she ultimately thinks the fact that they have to kill due to the Gift is nonsense considering everything that's happened while she and YOU take a time-out from fighting each other. She wants to TakeAThirdOption, and is wanting YOU to figure out what that could possibly be. With the damage sound effect playing as the camera pans away, it leads to an AmbiguousSituation that gives the "Remains Uncertain" ending its name.]]
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!!BIG LEGS MAN
Takes the place of K. Round as the boss of Checkerboard. Very very big legs.
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* BerserkButton: Swearing, [[SirSwearsAlot Noyno]] triggers it as Slug Duck proceeds to get to the end of the board and aquire the crown to become BIG LEGS MAN.
* GiantFootOfStomping: Being a giant leg, many of its attacks involve stomping in some fashion, whether it's simply to fling projectiles from the side, or stomp the top of the box to rain them down in clusters.
* HealThyself: being a leg, it uses Gilette to ease its pain. Ralsei assumes using this brand will get them sued as part of an EvilPlan.
* MixAndMatchCritter: it's initial form is the Slug Duck, a [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin yellow Slug with a duck face on it.]]
* OverlyLongGag: When the Slug Duck gets to the end of the board, it summons a crown much like C. Round does, only the crown drops ''very slowly'' as VideoGame/ShadowOfTheColossus boss music blares at you. Thankfully after a little time has passed it seems even the characters will [[AsideGlance be kinda sick of how long it's taking]] and give you the option to skip to the fight.
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* VillainExitStageLeft: Once it's beaten and reverts, game text will explain that Slug Duck has learned nothing from this experience before running off with a WheelOFeet and a WackySoundEffect.
* WackySoundEffect: the classic thumping cowbell is used as the Slug Duck runs away from the battle.
* WackySoundEffect: the classic thumping cowbell is used as the Slug Duck runs away from the battle.
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* ShoutOut: YOU's facial appearance initially looked like Max from WesternAnimation/FaceLikeAFrog put over Kris' original sprite (down to having a black "nose" and a blue lower face), as of the 2.0 update, he instead looks more like Frog from VideoGame/{{Everhood}} (green with a blue open jacket, and an acoustic guitar as their primary weapon)