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* CompetitiveBalance:
** Star Lass: JackOfAllStats
** Willpower: MightyGlacier, though he would be a LightningBruiser if he could control his SuperSpeed.
** Cannon Queen: GlassCannon
** Crow: FragileSpeedster
** Sonic Servo: StoneWall
* FiveTokenBand: The Star Alliance members are all multiracial; the following are merely their most visible lineages.
** Roxy: Asian.
** Rio: Hispanic.
** Claire: Caucasian.
** Merle: Indian. [[note]]As in both South Asian and Native American[[/note]]
** Tom: Caucasian as well, though he also fulfills the "kid in a wheelchair" role later on.
** Star Lass: JackOfAllStats
** Willpower: MightyGlacier, though he would be a LightningBruiser if he could control his SuperSpeed.
** Cannon Queen: GlassCannon
** Crow: FragileSpeedster
** Sonic Servo: StoneWall
* FiveTokenBand: The Star Alliance members are all multiracial; the following are merely their most visible lineages.
** Roxy: Asian.
** Rio: Hispanic.
** Claire: Caucasian.
** Merle: Indian. [[note]]As in both South Asian and Native American[[/note]]
** Tom: Caucasian as well, though he also fulfills the "kid in a wheelchair" role later on.
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** Star Lass: JackOfAllStats
** Willpower: MightyGlacier, though he would be a LightningBruiser if he could control his SuperSpeed.
** Cannon Queen: GlassCannon
** Crow: FragileSpeedster
** Sonic Servo: StoneWall
** Roxy: Asian.
** Rio: Hispanic.
** Claire: Caucasian.
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* CleverCrows
* CombatPragmatist
* CuteBruiser
* DarkIsNotEvil
* DarkSkinnedRedhead
* {{Expy}}: For ComicBook/{{Robin}}.
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Choleric.
* FragileSpeedster: Hits hard and fast, but can't take much abuse.
* GenkiGirl
* CombatPragmatist
* CuteBruiser
* DarkIsNotEvil
* DarkSkinnedRedhead
* {{Expy}}: For ComicBook/{{Robin}}.
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Choleric.
* FragileSpeedster: Hits hard and fast, but can't take much abuse.
* GenkiGirl
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* EthicalSlut: As revealed when she wanted to sleep with Tom before they broke up because she didn't want Claire to feel cheated on.
%%* {{Expy}}: For ComicBook/{{Robin}}.
* FragileSpeedster: Hits
* GlassCannon: Hits hard, but can't take much abuse.
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** EthicalSlut: As revealed when she wanted to sleep with Tom before they broke up because she didn't want Claire to feel cheated on.
** GoodBadGirl
** LovableSexManiac
** TechnicalVirgin: She's perfectly fine with getting to third base after dating a guy for a month or so, but will go no further... until she turns 17 [[note]]Which is the age of consent in Texas[[/note]]
* HotBlooded
** GoodBadGirl
** LovableSexManiac
** TechnicalVirgin: She's perfectly fine with getting to third base after dating a guy for a month or so, but will go no further... until she turns 17 [[note]]Which is the age of consent in Texas[[/note]]
* HotBlooded
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** GoodBadGirl
** LovableSexManiac
** TechnicalVirgin: She's perfectly fine with getting to third base after dating a guy for a month or so, but will go no further... until she turns 17 [[note]]Which is the age of consent in Texas[[/note]]
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* KidAnova
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* LittleMissBadass
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* PluckyGirl
* RedHeadedHero
* SerialRomeo: Female example.
* SheFu
* RedHeadedHero
* SerialRomeo: Female example.
* SheFu
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* CleverCrows
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* RavensAndCrows
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Strange Girl is a disambiguation now, so it\'s not a trope anymore.
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* StrangeGirl
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** Merle: Indian. [[hottip:*:As in both South Asian and Native American]]
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** Merle: Indian. [[hottip:*:As [[note]]As in both South Asian and Native American]]American[[/note]]
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* KiAttacks: He uses his inner energy (he calls it Xi[[hottip:*:pronounced like the letter "Z"]]) as a foil to Roxy's solar energy.
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* KiAttacks: He uses his inner energy (he calls it Xi[[hottip:*:pronounced Xi[[note]]pronounced like the letter "Z"]]) "Z"[[/note]]) as a foil to Roxy's solar energy.
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** TechnicalVirgin: She's perfectly fine with getting to third base after dating a guy for a month or so, but will go no further... until she turns 17 [[hottip:*: Which is the age of consent in Texas]]
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** TechnicalVirgin: She's perfectly fine with getting to third base after dating a guy for a month or so, but will go no further... until she turns 17 [[hottip:*: Which [[note]]Which is the age of consent in Texas]]Texas[[/note]]
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* {{Expy}}: One for {{Batman}}. She shares the tragic backstory, rich civilian persona, and taking custody of an orphaned child.
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* {{Expy}}: One for {{Batman}}.Franchise/{{Batman}}. She shares the tragic backstory, rich civilian persona, and taking custody of an orphaned child.
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per trs thread. Big Breasts Big Deal will no longer be a trope but a disambig page for Big Breast Pride and D Cup Distress.
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* BigBreastsBigDeal: Type 3. Before the main story, when her powers and breasts started developing, she was a mixture of type 1 and type 2.
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* BigBreastsBigDeal: A pure Type 4 case.
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[[folder: The Anti-Squad]]
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[TheVentureBros Dr. Orpheus]] (ability wise) and [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 the Demoman]] (ethnicity wise; [[ItsBeenDone unintentionally at first]], but WordOfGod decided to keep it).
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* {{Expy}}: Of [[TheVentureBros [[WesternAnimation/TheVentureBrothers Dr. Orpheus]] (ability wise) and [[VideoGame/TeamFortress2 the Demoman]] (ethnicity wise; [[ItsBeenDone unintentionally at first]], but WordOfGod decided to keep it).
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A character list for the WebSerialNovel in the works by MetalShadowX. Will change as development goes along.
['''Contains spoilers for the majority of part 2 and unmarked spoilers for the entirety of part 1'''].
['''Contains spoilers for the majority of part 2 and unmarked spoilers for the entirety of part 1'''].
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A character list for the WebSerialNovel in the works by MetalShadowX. Will change as development goes along.
['''Containsspoilers for the majority of part 2 and unmarked spoilers for the entirety of part 1'''].
spoilers'''].
['''Contains
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* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: A variation; Roxy has blond hair, Rio has black hair, Tom has brown hair, Claire has auburn hair, and Merle has crimson colored hair (though later dyes it purple).
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* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: A variation; Roxy has blond hair, Rio has black hair, Tom has brown hair, Claire has auburn hair, and Merle has crimson colored hair (though later dyes it purple).hair.
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* FiveManBand[=/=]FourPhilosophyEnsemble: The Star Alliance eventually becomes this in part 2.
** TheLeader: Star Lass (The Realist)
** TheLancer: Willpower (The Optimist)
** TheBigGuy: Cannon Queen (The Cynic)
** TheChick: Crow (The Apathetic)
** TheSmartGuy[=/=]MissionControl: Servo Seer (The Conflicted)
** TheLeader: Star Lass (The Realist)
** TheLancer: Willpower (The Optimist)
** TheBigGuy: Cannon Queen (The Cynic)
** TheChick: Crow (The Apathetic)
** TheSmartGuy[=/=]MissionControl: Servo Seer (The Conflicted)
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* TrueCompanions: They become this at some point in part 2.
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* HappilyMarried: [[spoiler: To Rio, after "Wedding Bell Blitz"]]
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* AdrenalineMakeover: He grows a goatee in the second half of part 1 that grows into a beard in part 2.
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* AdrenalineMakeover: He grows a goatee in the second half of part 1 that grows into a beard in part 2.1.
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* BreathWeapon: His "Spirit Breath" attack, which he acquires in part 2.
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: Starting in part 2.
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* HappilyMarried: [[spoiler: To Roxy, after "Wedding Bell Blitz"]]
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* AntiHero: Type III, veering toward Type IV by part 2 [[hottip:*:even after dealing with her feelings against killing, she still will apply as much force as possible against villains and stop just short of death]].
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* AntiHero: Type III, veering toward Type IV by part 2 [[hottip:*:even after dealing with her feelings against killing, she still will apply as much force as possible against villains and stop just short of death]].III.
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* BrokenBird: As revealed around the end of part 2.
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* EmotionSuppression: She attempts to do so. [[HeroicBSOD It doesn't end well]].
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* HeroicBSOD[=/=]DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Later on in part 2]].
* HesBack: [[spoiler: Albeit briefly, she returns as Cannon Queen to save her best friend's wedding.]]
* HesBack: [[spoiler: Albeit briefly, she returns as Cannon Queen to save her best friend's wedding.]]
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* NotSoStoic: Her moments of these are often seen after Tom's accident. [[spoiler: She willingly lets out these moments in therapy.]]
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* NotSoStoic: Her moments of these are often seen after Tom's accident. [[spoiler: She willingly lets out these moments in therapy.]]
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* TheSnarkKnight: Thoroughly deconstructed by the end of part 2. [[spoiler: Although she never said anything, she held up high standards with a lot of things: one of those being not taking another life. Once she broke that standard, she completely lost her sense of morals. The biggest reason she tried to kill herself (which may also have been a subconscious cry for help to her friends) was because she was afraid of not caring anymore and possibly becoming evil. It only adds insult to injury when she discovers that she suffers from depression.]]
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* TheSnarkKnight: Thoroughly deconstructed by the end of part 2. [[spoiler: Although she never said anything, she held up high standards with a lot of things: one of those being not taking another life. Once she broke that standard, she completely lost her sense of morals. The biggest reason she tried to kill herself (which may also have been a subconscious cry for help to her friends) was because she was afraid of not caring anymore and possibly becoming evil. It only adds insult to injury when she discovers that she suffers from depression.]]TheSnarkKnight
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* TenMinuteRetirement: Inverted. [[spoiler: She suddenly returns to help the Alliance when Roxy and Rio's wedding is being crashed, but actually announces she's leaving town at the end.]]
* TherapyIsForTheWeak: [[spoiler: After trying to kill herself, her friends force her to go see Dr. Lane. Initially, she's completely against it, but after some time with him, she begins opening up.]]
* ThouShaltNotKill: A subverted deconstruction. [[spoiler:As she frequently denies it affecting her in a negative way, it starts to subconsciously haunt her into asking for help via attempting suicide.]]
* TherapyIsForTheWeak: [[spoiler: After trying to kill herself, her friends force her to go see Dr. Lane. Initially, she's completely against it, but after some time with him, she begins opening up.]]
* ThouShaltNotKill: A subverted deconstruction. [[spoiler:As she frequently denies it affecting her in a negative way, it starts to subconsciously haunt her into asking for help via attempting suicide.]]
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As Crow, she is highly agile and takes any opportunity to strike. [[spoiler: Which is helped by having the power of darkness as her dormant Kinetic ability.]]
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As Crow, she is highly agile and takes any opportunity to strike. [[spoiler: Which is helped by having the power of darkness as her dormant Kinetic ability.]]
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** [[spoiler: BadassAbnormal[=/=]SupernaturalMartialArts: In part 2, after suddenly gaining powers, she learns her parents had recessive Kinetic genes which had skipped their generation. Her ability is to use dark energy to enhance her physical attacks.]]
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* [[spoiler: CastingAShadow: Her Kinetic power, but it's mostly limited to close combat.]]
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* FieryRedhead: Although by part 2, she dyes it purple.
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*** ...However, she makes an exception to have sex with Tom shortly after his accident.
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* IGotBigger: Between parts 1 and 2.
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* InstantArmor: [[spoiler: Eventually learns to cover her body with tangible dark energy]].
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* KidSidekick: To Dusk Woman during part 1.
** KidHero: From part 2 onward. Since with Dusk Woman retiring, she has nobody to be a sidekick to.
** KidHero: From part 2 onward. Since with Dusk Woman retiring, she has nobody to be a sidekick to.
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* KidSidekick: To Dusk Woman during part 1.
** KidHero: From part 2 onward. Since with Dusk Woman retiring, she has nobody to be a sidekick to.Woman.
** KidHero: From part 2 onward. Since with Dusk Woman retiring, she has nobody to be a sidekick to.
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* SidekickGraduationsStick: After part 1.
* TeensAreShort: Subverted. Although she's always the shortest, even after growing 3/4 of a foot in the span of a year.
* TeensAreShort: Subverted. Although she's always the shortest, even after growing 3/4 of a foot in the span of a year.
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* EmbarrassingMiddleName: [[spoiler:[[GenderBlenderName Lindsay.]]]]
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* MissionControl: From part 2 onward.
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* FiveBadBand: In part 2.
** BigBad: Anti Lass
** CoDragons: Biocide and Scaremonger
** TheBrute: Scaremonger
** EvilGenius: Dr. Brain
** DarkChick: Biocide
** TagalongKid: Gadget Girl
** BigBad: Anti Lass
** CoDragons: Biocide and Scaremonger
** TheBrute: Scaremonger
** EvilGenius: Dr. Brain
** DarkChick: Biocide
** TagalongKid: Gadget Girl
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** BigBad: Anti Lass
** CoDragons: Biocide and Scaremonger
** TheBrute: Scaremonger
** EvilGenius: Dr. Brain
** DarkChick: Biocide
** TagalongKid: Gadget Girl
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* BigBad: Part 2.
** TheManBehindTheMan: Part 1, although Biocide is unaware of this.
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* BigBad: Part 2.
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** TheManBehindTheMan:Part 1, although Although Biocide is unaware of this.
** TheManBehindTheMan:
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* TheDragon: In part 2, she becomes one to Anti Lass.
** DemotedToDragon
** DemotedToDragon
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* MechaMooks: Starts using these later on as cannon fodder. [[spoiler: They first appear during Roxy and Rio's wedding.]]
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* MechaMooks: Starts using these later on as cannon fodder. [[spoiler: They first appear during Roxy and Rio's wedding.]]
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!Gadget Girl
A young hacker who is Brutus' apprentice.
* ArchEnemy: To Servo Seer.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TagalongKid
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
A young hacker who is Brutus' apprentice.
* ArchEnemy: To Servo Seer.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TagalongKid
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
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* HeelFaceTurn: Is asked by Crow to make one at the end of chapter 4. [[spoiler: It will eventually take effect]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Is asked by Crow to make one at the end of chapter 4. [[spoiler: It will eventually take effect]].
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!White Dwarf (Orion Forestar)
A Celestian warrior who takes Roxy under his wing to teach her all he knows.
* BadassGrandpa: He easily defeats Roxy with only about 1/5 of his power.
* BiTheWay: In his youth, he courted his closest friend, Astro Nexus. However, due to tragic circumstances [[hottip:*:That I've yet to come up with, but it will most certainly borrow heavily from [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Genkai's relationship with Younger Toguro]].]], he eventually fell in love with Astro's sister, Nebula, and married her instead.
* CoolOldGuy
* HeroicAlbino
* MeaningfulName: Being called the "White Dwarf" is more than just what he's capable of, he's incredibly pale (even by Earth standards) and only about 4 feet tall.
* MiniatureSeniorCitizen
* NobodyOver50IsGay: Averted, [[BiTheWay sort of]].
* OldMaster: It's even the name of the chapter he debuts in, but with a "the" added at the beginning.
!The Morlans
Claire's family. She has a mother named Heather, a father named Jack (a Celestian), and a sister named Guinevere (Gwen for short). Mostly taken from ''{{Daria}}'''s family, as the names indicate, but with a few differences.
* BrattyTeenageDaughter: Gwen.
* HotScoop: Heather.
* MoodSwinger: Jack.
!Kane Lane
Debuting at the end of part 2, Dr. Lane is a psychiatrist specializing in helping superheroes, having been one himself. Claire begins to go to him after experiencing problems of her own.
* {{Cyborg}}
* IllGirl: A male example who was so ill, he had to be implanted with cybernetic parts at the age of 10 to keep living.
* OlderThanTheyLook: He looks like he's in his mid-to-late twenties, but is 37 when Claire starts seeing him.
* RetiredBadass
* TheShrink: Type 2, the "Awesome" kind.
* WarriorTherapist
A Celestian warrior who takes Roxy under his wing to teach her all he knows.
* BadassGrandpa: He easily defeats Roxy with only about 1/5 of his power.
* BiTheWay: In his youth, he courted his closest friend, Astro Nexus. However, due to tragic circumstances [[hottip:*:That I've yet to come up with, but it will most certainly borrow heavily from [[Manga/YuYuHakusho Genkai's relationship with Younger Toguro]].]], he eventually fell in love with Astro's sister, Nebula, and married her instead.
* CoolOldGuy
* HeroicAlbino
* MeaningfulName: Being called the "White Dwarf" is more than just what he's capable of, he's incredibly pale (even by Earth standards) and only about 4 feet tall.
* MiniatureSeniorCitizen
* NobodyOver50IsGay: Averted, [[BiTheWay sort of]].
* OldMaster: It's even the name of the chapter he debuts in, but with a "the" added at the beginning.
!The Morlans
Claire's family. She has a mother named Heather, a father named Jack (a Celestian), and a sister named Guinevere (Gwen for short). Mostly taken from ''{{Daria}}'''s family, as the names indicate, but with a few differences.
* BrattyTeenageDaughter: Gwen.
* HotScoop: Heather.
* MoodSwinger: Jack.
!Kane Lane
Debuting at the end of part 2, Dr. Lane is a psychiatrist specializing in helping superheroes, having been one himself. Claire begins to go to him after experiencing problems of her own.
* {{Cyborg}}
* IllGirl: A male example who was so ill, he had to be implanted with cybernetic parts at the age of 10 to keep living.
* OlderThanTheyLook: He looks like he's in his mid-to-late twenties, but is 37 when Claire starts seeing him.
* RetiredBadass
* TheShrink: Type 2, the "Awesome" kind.
* WarriorTherapist
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Zero Context Example. Tall Dark And Bishoujo has been renamed to Aloof Dark Haired Girl which is an aloof or composed female character with dark hair. If you\'re character does fit that trope than add Aloof Dark Haired Girl with context explaining why the character fits the trope.
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* TallDarkAndBishoujo[=/=]TallDarkAndSnarky
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* ShinyMidnightBlack
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* AdultChild: A more mild example.
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* HeroKiller: [[SubvertedTrope Close]]. She was responsible for crippling Tom.
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* CareerKiller
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* MidnightBlueEyes
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* HeroicWillpower: He's immune to Scaremonger's MindManipulation and isn't entirely affected by Anti Lass' negation power.
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* {{Expy}}: Based mainly on [[{{Daria}} Daria Morgendorffer]]; she bears the physical resemblance and has a similar personality (though it's later deconstructed). She also shares some similarities to {{Batman}}; relying on her smarts and gadgets for her lack of superpowers (or, in Crow's case, the training to make up for it).
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* {{Expy}}: Based mainly on [[{{Daria}} Daria Morgendorffer]]; she bears the physical resemblance and has a similar personality (though it's later deconstructed). She also shares some similarities to {{Batman}}; IronMan; relying on her smarts and gadgets for her lack of superpowers (or, in Crow's case, the training to make up for it).
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* {{Expy}}: Also one for {{Batman}}, much like Cannon Queen; she shares the tragic backstory, rich civilian persona, and taking custody of an orphaned child.
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* {{Expy}}: Also one One for {{Batman}}, much like Cannon Queen; she {{Batman}}. She shares the tragic backstory, rich civilian persona, and taking custody of an orphaned child.
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** TheSmartGuy: Cannon Queen (The Cynic)
** TheBigGuy: Crow (The Apathetic)
** TheHeart[=/=]MissionControl: Servo Seer (The Conflicted)
** TheBigGuy: Crow (The Apathetic)
** TheHeart[=/=]MissionControl: Servo Seer (The Conflicted)
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** TheSmartGuy: TheBigGuy: Cannon Queen (The Cynic)
**TheBigGuy: TheChick: Crow (The Apathetic)
**TheHeart[=/=]MissionControl: TheSmartGuy[=/=]MissionControl: Servo Seer (The Conflicted)
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* TheBigGuy: She isn't really stronger than [[SuperStrength Star Lass]], but she uses said strength more often in battle.
* TheChick: Ironic as she's the {{Tomboy}} of the group.
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* TheHeart: While Rio would seem to fit due to his optimistic attitude, Tom's more level-headed to be a better example.
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* BlondeBrunetteRedhead: A variation; Roxy has blond hair, Rio has black hair, Tom has brown hair, Claire has auburn hair, and Merle has crimson colored hair.
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** Star Lass: [[JackOfAllStats Evenly balanced]].
** Willpower: [[StoneWall Weak, yet durable]].
** Cannon Queen: [[MightyGlacier Strong, yet slow]].
** Crow: [[FragileSpeedster Fragile, yet quick]].
** Sonic Servo: [[GlassCannon Powerful, yet vulnerable]]
** Willpower: [[StoneWall Weak, yet durable]].
** Cannon Queen: [[MightyGlacier Strong, yet slow]].
** Crow: [[FragileSpeedster Fragile, yet quick]].
** Sonic Servo: [[GlassCannon Powerful, yet vulnerable]]
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** Star Lass: [[JackOfAllStats Evenly balanced]].
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** Willpower:[[StoneWall Weak, yet durable]].
MightyGlacier, though he would be a LightningBruiser if he could control his SuperSpeed.
** Cannon Queen:[[MightyGlacier Strong, yet slow]].
GlassCannon
** Crow:[[FragileSpeedster Fragile, yet quick]].
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** Sonic Servo:[[GlassCannon Powerful, yet vulnerable]] StoneWall
** Willpower:
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* FieryRedheadFieryRedhead: Although by part 2, she dyes it purple.
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* GravityMaster: Doesn't use it often because it doesn't benefit her as much as kinetic negation.
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* GravityMaster: Doesn't use it often because it doesn't benefit her as much as kinetic negation.Her "Fourth Power".
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* NecessaryDrawback: Her light powers are weaker than most Celestians.
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* PowerNullifier
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* TheLeader: Probably between a type II and IV.
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* TheLeader: Probably between a type II and IV.IV, although she has some traits of all four in some way.
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* TheLancer
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* TheLancerTheLancer: Of the NumberTwo variety.
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** EvilGenius: Dr. Machine
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** EvilGenius: Dr. MachineBrain
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A ruthless CorruptCorporateExecutive who, for reasons she doesn't want to talk about, has found pleasure in causing pain and suffering while profiting from it. Leila, who once looked up to her while in high school, sees her true colors and promises to make her pay for her crimes.
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A ruthless CorruptCorporateExecutive who, for reasons she doesn't want due to talk about, a corrupt childhood, has found pleasure in causing pain and suffering while profiting from it. Leila, who once looked up to her while Having been dumped in high school, sees her true colors nuclear waste, she has obtained the power of poison and promises uses it to make her pay for her crimes.
bring further misery to others.
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!Dr. Machine (Brutus)
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!Dr. Machine Brain (Brutus)
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* HeroicWillpower: He's immune to Scaremonger's MindManipulation.
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* HeroicWillpower: He's immune to Scaremonger's MindManipulation.MindManipulation and isn't entirely affected by Anti Lass' negation power.
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* ArchEnemy: To Star Lass, of course.
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* AxCrazy: As Biocide.
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* AxCrazy: As Biocide.ArchEnemy: To Crow.
* AxCrazy
* AxCrazy
* DarkActionGirl
* DarkChick
* DarkChick
* ArchEnemy: To Willpower.
* ArchEnemy: To Cannon Queen.
!Gadget Girl
A young hacker who is Brutus' apprentice.
* ArchEnemy: To Servo Seer.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TagalongKid
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
A young hacker who is Brutus' apprentice.
* ArchEnemy: To Servo Seer.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TagalongKid
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
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!Gadget Girl
A young hacker who is Brutus' protege.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
A young hacker who is Brutus' protege.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
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* {{Expy}}: To Robin of {{Batman}} fame.
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* {{Expy}}: To Robin of {{Batman}} fame.For ComicBook/{{Robin}}.
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* {{Expy}}: For [[{{Characters/Batman}} Oracle]] as Servo Seer.
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* {{Expy}}: For [[{{Characters/Batman}} [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Oracle]] as Servo Seer.
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** DarkChick[=/=]TokenGoodTeammate: Gadget Girl
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** EvilGenius[=/=]SixthRanger: Droid Duke
EvilGenius: Dr. Machine
** DarkChick:Killspot
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** DarkChick[=/=]TokenGoodTeammate: Gadget Girl
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!Droid Duke (Brutus)
A rather incompetent villain who relies only on brute force. Although, this is just an act to fool the public as he works with Anti Lass.
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* MorallyAmbiguousDoctorate
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!Gadget Girl
A young hacker whose skills impress Astra enough that she gives the child a spot in the Anti-Squad.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking and is usually indifferent to the activities of those around her.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard: She doesn't care when she learns Astra is evil, she just wants to challenge Servo again.
A young hacker whose skills impress Astra enough that she gives the child a spot in the Anti-Squad.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking and is usually indifferent to the activities of those around her.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard: She doesn't care when she learns Astra is evil, she just wants to challenge Servo again.
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!Gadget Girl
A young hacker who is Brutus' protege.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
A young hacker who is Brutus' protege.
* {{Expy}}: Might share a few similarities with [[CowboyBebop Radical Edward]], what with being a young girl who's a pro at hacking.
* ImprobableAge: She's about 10 years old.
* PlayfulHacker
* TeenGenius: ''Pre''teen genius, actually.
* WildCard
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* SuperSpeed: Spends the second half of part 1 training to acquire this.
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* SuperSpeed: Spends the second half of part 1 training to acquire this.Although he has a hard time stopping.
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* ShapeshifterWeapon: After becoming a Kinetic, she can turn her arms, hands, and/or fingers into sharp blades. They're usually tipped with poison.
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!Killspot (Caitlin Cassidy)
An assassin hired by Ozborn to kill the Dawsons to settle a petty grudge she had against them. Despite her line of work, she comes off as incredibly friendly in her civilian persona due to Caitlin and Killspot [[SplitPersonality actually being different people]].
* AlliterativeName
* AntiVillain: Type I.
* CareerKiller
* CrazyPrepared
* DanceBattler
* DarkChick
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Killspot's a ruthless psychopath, but she still felt deeply ashamed after causing Merle to become an orphan.
* {{Expy}}: To {{Deadpool}}, sans the fourth wall breaking.
* FieryRedhead
* FriendlySniper
* HealingFactor
* HeelFaceTurn: Is asked by Crow to make one at the end of chapter 4. [[spoiler: It takes effect in chapter 17]].
* IAmLegion: The two both use first person plurals unless something is only directed at one or the other.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: The only reason they took the job of killing the Dawsons was because Ozborn would have paid them a large amount of money, but they turn down the offer after refusing to kill Merle.
* PsychoForHire
* ShoutOutThemeNaming: Caitlin's real name is based on Cletus "Carnage" Kasady, while her alter ego's is based on Deadpool's.
* SplitPersonalityMakeover: As Killspot, Caitlin wears a half-black, half-dark pink mask and puts her loose hair in a ponytail.
* ThouShaltNotKill: Caitlin would barely harm another person let alone kill them. Killspot, on the other hand, terminates her targets without hesitation, but [[WouldntHurtAChild her one rule is to spare any child under the age of 16.]]
* WildCard: Further enforced when they decide to defect and become neutral.
An assassin hired by Ozborn to kill the Dawsons to settle a petty grudge she had against them. Despite her line of work, she comes off as incredibly friendly in her civilian persona due to Caitlin and Killspot [[SplitPersonality actually being different people]].
* AlliterativeName
* AntiVillain: Type I.
* CareerKiller
* CrazyPrepared
* DanceBattler
* DarkChick
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Killspot's a ruthless psychopath, but she still felt deeply ashamed after causing Merle to become an orphan.
* {{Expy}}: To {{Deadpool}}, sans the fourth wall breaking.
* FieryRedhead
* FriendlySniper
* HealingFactor
* HeelFaceTurn: Is asked by Crow to make one at the end of chapter 4. [[spoiler: It takes effect in chapter 17]].
* IAmLegion: The two both use first person plurals unless something is only directed at one or the other.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: The only reason they took the job of killing the Dawsons was because Ozborn would have paid them a large amount of money, but they turn down the offer after refusing to kill Merle.
* PsychoForHire
* ShoutOutThemeNaming: Caitlin's real name is based on Cletus "Carnage" Kasady, while her alter ego's is based on Deadpool's.
* SplitPersonalityMakeover: As Killspot, Caitlin wears a half-black, half-dark pink mask and puts her loose hair in a ponytail.
* ThouShaltNotKill: Caitlin would barely harm another person let alone kill them. Killspot, on the other hand, terminates her targets without hesitation, but [[WouldntHurtAChild her one rule is to spare any child under the age of 16.]]
* WildCard: Further enforced when they decide to defect and become neutral.
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* BenevolentBoss: He treats his henchmen as if they were his own children, [[PapaWolf and would even go out himself and avenge one of them if they were killed]]. [[spoiler: However, if they go against his orders, go do something foolish, and die attempting it, he will mourn their loss but hold no grudge against their killer. His conversation with Claire after she killed one such fool makes that clear.]]
* DumbMuscle: Subverted
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* SixthRanger: Is recruited by Astra in part 2.
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* RobotMaster
* SixthRanger: Is recruited by Astra in part 2.
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* SixthRanger: Is recruited by Astra in part 2.
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* WildCard: Much like the member she's replacing, perhaps even more so: she doesn't care when she learns Astra is evil, she just wants to challenge Servo again.
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!Killspot (Caitlin Cassidy)
An assassin hired by Ozborn to kill the Dawsons to settle a petty grudge she had against them. Despite her line of work, she comes off as incredibly friendly in her civilian persona due to Caitlin and Killspot [[SplitPersonality actually being different people]].
* AlliterativeName
* AntiVillain: Type I.
* CareerKiller
* CrazyPrepared
* DanceBattler
* DarkChick
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Killspot's a ruthless psychopath, but she still felt deeply ashamed after causing Merle to become an orphan.
* {{Expy}}: To {{Deadpool}}, sans the fourth wall breaking.
* FieryRedhead
* FriendlySniper
* HealingFactor
* HeelFaceTurn: Is asked by Crow to make one at the end of chapter 4. [[spoiler: It will eventually take effect]].
* IAmLegion: The two both use first person plurals unless something is only directed at one or the other.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: The only reason they took the job of killing the Dawsons was because Ozborn would have paid them a large amount of money, but they turn down the offer after refusing to kill Merle.
* PsychoForHire
* ShoutOutThemeNaming: Caitlin's real name is based on Cletus "Carnage" Kasady, while her alter ego's is based on Deadpool's.
* SplitPersonalityMakeover: As Killspot, Caitlin wears a half-black, half-dark pink mask and puts her loose hair in a ponytail.
* ThouShaltNotKill: Caitlin would barely harm another person let alone kill them. Killspot, on the other hand, terminates her targets without hesitation, but [[WouldntHurtAChild her one rule is to spare any child under the age of 16.]]
* WildCard: Further enforced when they decide to defect and become neutral.
An assassin hired by Ozborn to kill the Dawsons to settle a petty grudge she had against them. Despite her line of work, she comes off as incredibly friendly in her civilian persona due to Caitlin and Killspot [[SplitPersonality actually being different people]].
* AlliterativeName
* AntiVillain: Type I.
* CareerKiller
* CrazyPrepared
* DanceBattler
* DarkChick
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Killspot's a ruthless psychopath, but she still felt deeply ashamed after causing Merle to become an orphan.
* {{Expy}}: To {{Deadpool}}, sans the fourth wall breaking.
* FieryRedhead
* FriendlySniper
* HealingFactor
* HeelFaceTurn: Is asked by Crow to make one at the end of chapter 4. [[spoiler: It will eventually take effect]].
* IAmLegion: The two both use first person plurals unless something is only directed at one or the other.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast
* OnlyInItForTheMoney: The only reason they took the job of killing the Dawsons was because Ozborn would have paid them a large amount of money, but they turn down the offer after refusing to kill Merle.
* PsychoForHire
* ShoutOutThemeNaming: Caitlin's real name is based on Cletus "Carnage" Kasady, while her alter ego's is based on Deadpool's.
* SplitPersonalityMakeover: As Killspot, Caitlin wears a half-black, half-dark pink mask and puts her loose hair in a ponytail.
* ThouShaltNotKill: Caitlin would barely harm another person let alone kill them. Killspot, on the other hand, terminates her targets without hesitation, but [[WouldntHurtAChild her one rule is to spare any child under the age of 16.]]
* WildCard: Further enforced when they decide to defect and become neutral.