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* AmbiguouslyEvil: It's unclear if he's in on the Girl Gun Fight or to what degree he knows about it. [[spoiler:Episode 9 would reveal that he is the KillerGameMaster of the Girl Gun Fight, thus basically making him the show's BigBad.]]
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: It's unclear if he's in on the Girl Gun Fight or to what degree he knows about it. [[spoiler:Episode 9 would reveal that he is the KillerGameMaster of the Girl Gun Fight, thus basically making him the show's closest thing to a BigBad.]]
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: [[spoiler:After she drops her pacifism completely, a montage shows her performing dominantly in the Girl Gun Fight, including one where she lose her second life, leaving her on her last life by the time of the finals.]]
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: [[spoiler:After she drops her pacifism completely, a montage shows her performing dominantly in the Girl Gun Fight, including one where she lose loses her second life, leaving her on her last life one by the time of the finals.]]
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* WalkingSpoiler: Her existance in the plot indicates that one of the girls in Alpha Tango would be KilledOffForReal.
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* WalkingSpoiler: Her existance existence in the plot indicates that one of the girls in Alpha Tango would be KilledOffForReal.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: It's unclear if he's in on the Girl Gun Fight or to what degree he knows about it. [[spoiler:Episode 9 would reveal that he is the KillerGameMaster of the Girl Gun Fight.]]
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: It's unclear if he's in on the Girl Gun Fight or to what degree he knows about it. [[spoiler:Episode 9 would reveal that he is the KillerGameMaster of the Girl Gun Fight.Fight, thus basically making him the show's BigBad.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: She laments that if her life could be changed by plastic models things would be so much easier. Then she becomes involved in the Girl Gun Fight.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: She laments that if her life could be changed by plastic models things would be so much easier. Then she becomes involved in the [[InvoluntaryBattleToTheDeath Girl Gun Fight.Fight]].
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: [[spoiler:After she drops her pacifism completely, a montage shows her performing dominantly in the Girl Gun Fight, including one where she lose her second life. Leaving her on her last life by the time of the finals.]]
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: [[spoiler:After she drops her pacifism completely, a montage shows her performing dominantly in the Girl Gun Fight, including one where she lose her second life. Leaving life, leaving her on her last life by the time of the finals.]]
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* {{Meganekko}}: Wears a pair of deep blue glasses.
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* AmbiguousSituation:[[spoiler:With the revelation that she is actually the Lady Commander Amatsu, did "Masuko Kadowaki" ever existed, or is Amatsu merely assuming her identity?]]
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* AmbiguousSituation:[[spoiler:With the revelation that she is actually the Lady Commander Amatsu, did "Masuko is "Matsuko Kadowaki" ever existed, an identity formed from whole cloth, or is has Amatsu merely been assuming her a real person's identity?]]
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* FamousLastWords:
-->[[spoiler:(To Matsuko) "That is why I hate you."]]
-->[[spoiler:(To Matsuko) "That is why I hate you."]]
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A trio of combatants who were under the command of Lady Commander Amatsu; consisting of Sakura Konno, Sumire Kishi, and Ran Shiori. [[spoiler:They were all sacrificed in order for Amatsu to become human and assume Matsuko's identity.]]
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A trio of combatants who were under the command of Lady Commander Amatsu; consisting of Sakura Konno, Sumire Kishi, and Ran Shiori. [[spoiler:They They were all sacrificed in order for Amatsu to become human and assume Matsuko's identity.]]
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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: Upon entering the Girl Gun Fight, she goes into combat with the cold precision and emotional detachment of a career mercenary. [[spoiler:Justified due to her having watched it all before, as a Lady Commander.]]
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The unnamed orange team's Lady Commander, who won the previous Girl Gun Fight. [[spoiler:For tropes related to her time as a human, see "Matsuko Kadowaki."]]
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The unnamed orange team's Lady Commander, who won the previous Girl Gun Fight. [[spoiler:For For tropes related to her time as a human, see "Matsuko Kadowaki."]]"
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler:"Players without a commander are such pathetic creatures. Very unattractive."]]
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: [[spoiler:He appears to be human, but the technology he has to create and run the Girl Gun system hints an alien origin. Not helping by his response to Fuyumi trying to kill him...]]
-->[[spoiler:"[[HumansAreMonsters Earthlings are such cruel creatures]]."]]
-->[[spoiler:"[[HumansAreMonsters Earthlings are such cruel creatures]]."]]
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* ConsolationPrize: [[spoiler:The losing Lady Commanders are given a chance to avoid being "[[DeadlyEuphemism broken to pieces]]" by [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness killing the most players]] at the final ceremony.]]
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* CynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler:After learning that Sakura, Sumire, and Ran - friends who fought for her sake so she could be come human, were sacrificed so that she could become human in the first place. She started to view the world as just another plastic model: Everying, including bonds between friends and family, was fake.]]
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* CynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler:After learning that Sakura, Sumire, and Ran - friends who fought for her sake so she could be come become human, were sacrificed so that she could become human to make it possible in the first place. She started to view the world as just another plastic model: Everying, Everything, including bonds between friends and family, was fake.fake. She even tells Bianca that being human is not that better than being a plastic model.]]
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* AmbiguousSituation:[[spoiler:With the revelation that she is actually the Lady Commander Amatsu, did "Masuko Kadowaki" ever existed, or is Amatsu merely assuming her identity?]]
* CynicismCatalyst: [[spoiler:After learning that Sakura, Sumire, and Ran - friends who fought for her sake so she could be come human, were sacrificed so that she could become human in the first place. She started to view the world as just another plastic model: Everying, including bonds between friends and family, was fake.]]
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* PyrrhicVictory: [[spoiler:She was able to become human by winning the Girl Gun Fight. But because it came at the price of sacrificing her [[TrueCompanions teammates who fought for her sake]], it became AllForNothing.]]
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* PyrrhicVictory: [[spoiler:She was able to become human by winning the Girl Gun Fight. But because it came at the price of sacrificing her [[TrueCompanions teammates who fought for her sake]], it became AllForNothing as she would no longer be able to be with them.]]
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* TeamChef: Having the science lab to herself means she has everything she needs to make bubble tea - [[RunningGag apart from actual cups, maybe.]]
