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!!Chloe Tona Pierce
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!!Chloe
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* QueerEstablishingMoment: Most of her romantic partners in the comic are men, but she kisses Killian later in the comic.
* FairCop: He is a police detective and a very handsome man.
* TheGadfly: She has a habit of getting under people's skin by asking invasive, personal questions.
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* SkunkStripe: She has one as an adult, but not as a teenager. It's probably stress-induced.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: She has mauve hair.
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* ManlyFacialHair: Has an impressive beard and is one of the strongest of Astrid's followers.
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* HairyGirl: She doesn't bother to shave her armpits.
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* EvilRedhead: His hair is red like Astrid's and is a deranged bastard.
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%%!!Detective Avil Demakos
%%A detective from Florida; an ally of Chloe and later her boyfriend.
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!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
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Chloe's neighbors.
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!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
* FriendOnTheForce: He's a detective who's always willing to help Chloe. He even travels all the way to Chicago to help her in the finale.
!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
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Chloe's neighbors.
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* TwoferTokenMinority: She's half-Mexican and half-Singaporean.
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* LovableSexManiac: Constantly horny but is not a bad guy.
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* EvilNephew: Astrid's niece and is a nasty being who wants to make all of humanity suffer, especially her aunt.
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* EvilOldFolks: While his actual age is unknown, he appears as an old man and is one of the nastier Entities.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: She's an avid chess player; even plays a more difficult variant with wazir pieces.[[note]]Rooks turned upside down; move like the rooks, but only one space at a time[[/note]]
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: She's an avid chess player; even plays a more difficult variant with wazir fairy pieces.[[note]]Rooks [[note]]Regular chess pieces turned upside down; upside-down that move like the rooks, but differently from regular ones. The comic specifically features wazirs, which are rooks that only move one space at a time[[/note]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Attempts to commit suicide in the first issue, but survives.
* IntrepidReporter: Her job.
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* IntrepidReporter: Her job.
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* DrivenToSuicide:Attempts She attempts to commit suicide in the first issue, but survives.
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!!Detective Avil Demakos
A detective from Florida; an ally of Chloe and later her boyfriend.
* FriendOnTheForce
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
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* EmotionlessGirl: Rarely displays much emotion.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: An avid chess player; even plays a more difficult variant with wazir pieces.[[note]]Rooks turned upside down; move like the rooks, but only one space at a time[[/note]]
* SkunkStripe: Has one as an adult, but not as a teenager. It's probably stress-induced.
* SkunkStripe: Has one as an adult, but not as a teenager. It's probably stress-induced.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: An She's an avid chess player; even plays a more difficult variant with wazir pieces.[[note]]Rooks turned upside down; move like the rooks, but only one space at a time[[/note]]
* SkunkStripe:Has She has one as an adult, but not as a teenager. It's probably stress-induced.
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* BadassIsraeli: A former Mossad agent.
* ButchLesbian: Is gay, has short hair and dresses masculinely.
* TheLancer: To Astrid.
* StatuesqueStunner: Is tall and gorgeous.
* ButchLesbian: Is gay, has short hair and dresses masculinely.
* TheLancer: To Astrid.
* StatuesqueStunner: Is tall and gorgeous.
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* BadassIsraeli:A She's a former Mossad agent.
* ButchLesbian:Is She's gay, has short hair and dresses masculinely.
* %%* TheLancer: To Astrid.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Always dresses in impeccable suits with waistcoats (usually without the jacket).
* ManlyGay: Is in a relationship with Raven and one of the most skilled fighters in the comic as well as a former special forces commander.
* TheBigGuy: By far the most muscular member of Astrid's protective detail.
* ManlyGay: Is in a relationship with Raven and one of the most skilled fighters in the comic as well as a former special forces commander.
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* BadassInANiceSuit:Always He always dresses in impeccable suits with waistcoats (usually without the jacket).
* TheBigGuy: He's by far the most muscular member of Astrid's protective detail.
* ManlyGay:Is He's in a relationship with Raven and one of the most skilled fighters in the comic as well as a former special forces commander.
* TheBigGuy: By far the most muscular member of Astrid's protective detail.commander.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Always wears a pantsuit.
* HighHeelPower: Badass, and usually wears heels; seems to hate wearing flats.
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* BadassInANiceSuit:Always She always wears a pantsuit.
* HighHeelPower: Badass, and usually wears heels; she seems to hate wearing flats.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Has mauve hair.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Has She has mauve hair.
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* ICannotSelfTerminate: Begs Astrid to end her life, but Astrid can't bring herself to do it.
* RapidAging: See Body Horror.
* MoralityPet: For Astrid.
* RapidAging: See Body Horror.
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* ICannotSelfTerminate: Begs She begs Astrid to end her life, but Astrid can't bring herself to do it.
* RapidAging: See Body Horror.
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* StraightGay: Is gay and in a relationship with Duncan.
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* StraightGay: Is He's gay and in a relationship with Duncan.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Described as one of the horniest people on the planet, but also an engineering genius.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer:Described He's described as one of the horniest people on the planet, but also an engineering genius.
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* DarkMessiah: For the Entities.
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* TheDragon: The most frequently seen single member of the Entities.
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!!Spark
A benign Entity who becomes an ally of Chloe.
* DefectorFromDecadence
* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor
A benign Entity who becomes an ally of Chloe.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Thinks his whole competition with Astrid is just a matter of two cults trying to scam as much money as possible out of as many people as possible; little does he know that Astrid is waging a war against an infiltrating alien race.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Thinks He thinks his whole competition with Astrid is just a matter of two cults trying to scam as much money as possible out of as many people as possible; little does he know that Astrid is waging a war against an infiltrating alien race.
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* HeManWomanHater: Refers to women as "critters" and genuinely doesn't see anything wrong with killing them.
* SerialKiller: [[spoiler:Has been abducting women, dressing them and even stapling wigs to their scalps to make them look like Astrid and torturing them to death]].
* SerialKiller: [[spoiler:Has been abducting women, dressing them and even stapling wigs to their scalps to make them look like Astrid and torturing them to death]].
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* HeManWomanHater:Refers He refers to women as "critters" and genuinely doesn't see anything wrong with killing them.
* SerialKiller:[[spoiler:Has [[spoiler:He has been abducting women, dressing them and even stapling wigs to their scalps to make them look like Astrid and torturing them to death]].death]].
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Dewicking redirect.
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* IntimateMarks: Has a cat-shaped tattoo on one of her breasts.
* MixedAncestry: Her father was Puerto Rican and her mother was from Singapore.
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* IntimateMarks: Has She has a cat-shaped tattoo on one of her breasts.
* MixedAncestry: Her father was Puerto Rican and her mother was from Singapore.breasts.
* MixedAncestry: Her father was Puerto Rican and her mother was from Singapore.
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* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
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* ButchLesbian: Has short hair and dresses masculinely.
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* ButchLesbian: Has Is gay, has short hair and dresses masculinely.
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* BadassGay: Is in a relationship with Raven and one of the most skilled fighters in the comic as well as a former special forces commander. Also ManlyGay.
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* BadassGay: ManlyGay: Is in a relationship with Raven and one of the most skilled fighters in the comic as well as a former special forces commander. Also ManlyGay.commander.
* TheBigGuy: By far the most muscular member of Astrid's protective detail.
* TheBigGuy: By far the most muscular member of Astrid's protective detail.
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* BadassLesbian: Openly hits on Chloe.
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* BiTheWay: Chloe kisses Killian and later on tells Avid he'll have to share her with Killian.
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* BiTheWay: While most of the nudes he has stuck to the walls of his rooms are of women, some, though not as many, are of men.
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* IntimateMarks: Has a cat-shaped tattoo on one of her breasts.
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* {{Biomanipulation}}: They can manipulate the flesh of humans, even living ones, and twist it into horrific forms.
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* KillAndReplace: They have been doing this for years, discreetly replacing people throughout the world.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: They can disguise themselves as humans.
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Astrid's niece; niece by her brother; also a member of the Entitites.Entitites.
* BrainyBaby: At least presents as a baby, but can speak like an adult and lead the Entities.
* BrainyBaby: At least presents as a baby, but can speak like an adult and lead the Entities.
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* MissionControl: He and his team oversee the clean room's functioning while it is being used and act as a connection between the room and the outside world.
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* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: At one point, he shows up to a meeting and doesn't realize that he's not wearing pants until someone points it out to him.
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* KryptoniteFactor: An expensive perfume called "White Mist" smells terrible for them and apparently burns them like acid at a touch; because of this, Astrid always wears lots of it.
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* KryptoniteFactor: An expensive perfume called "White Mist" smells terrible for them and apparently burns them like acid at a to the touch; because of this, Astrid always wears lots of it.
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!!DarkMessiah: For the Entities
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Astrid's self-proclaimed "biggest fan".
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Always wears a pantsuit.
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* BiTheWay: While most of the nudes he has stuck to the walls of his rooms are of women, some, though not as many, are of men.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Described as one of the horniest people on the planet, but also an engineering genius.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Described as one of the horniest people on the planet, but also an engineering genius.
!!In General
* KryptoniteFactor: An expensive perfume called "White Mist" smells terrible for them and apparently burns them like acid at a touch; because of this, Astrid always wears lots of it.
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!!Derica Mueller
Astrid's niece; also a member of the Entitites.
!!DarkMessiah: For the Entities
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* KryptoniteFactor: An expensive perfume called "White Mist" smells terrible for them and apparently burns them like acid at a touch; because of this, Astrid always wears lots of it.
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!!Derica Mueller
Astrid's niece; also a member of the Entitites.
!!DarkMessiah: For the Entities
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Thinks his whole competition with Astrid is just a matter of two cults trying to scam as much money as possible out of as many people as possible; little does he know that Astrid is waging a war against an infiltrating alien race.
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* WrongGenreSavvy: Thinks his whole competition with Astrid is just a matter of two cults trying to scam as much money as possible out of as many people as possible; little does he know that Astrid is waging a war against an infiltrating alien race.race.
!!Artus Greenhand
Astrid's self-proclaimed "biggest fan".
* HeManWomanHater: Refers to women as "critters" and genuinely doesn't see anything wrong with killing them.
* SerialKiller: [[spoiler:Has been abducting women, dressing them and even stapling wigs to their scalps to make them look like Astrid and torturing them to death]].
!!Artus Greenhand
Astrid's self-proclaimed "biggest fan".
* HeManWomanHater: Refers to women as "critters" and genuinely doesn't see anything wrong with killing them.
* SerialKiller: [[spoiler:Has been abducting women, dressing them and even stapling wigs to their scalps to make them look like Astrid and torturing them to death]].
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* PetTheDog: She is incredibly ruthless, but is capable of genuine kindness if it's for someone who isn't a threat to her and if it doesn't get in the way of her battle with the Entities.
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* PetTheDog: She is incredibly ruthless, but is also capable of genuine kindness if it's for someone who isn't a threat to her and if it doesn't get in the way of her battle with the Entities.
* BadassInANiceSuit: Always dresses in impeccable suits with waistcoats (usually without the jacket).
!!Dr. Hagen
A sex-obsessed scientist whose services Astrid retains to build a weapon against the Entities.
A sex-obsessed scientist whose services Astrid retains to build a weapon against the Entities.
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* TheDragon: The most frequently seen single member of the Entities.
* HumanoidAbomination: Unlike most seen Entities (except for ones posing as humans), he is usually only kind of human-like, but his face is twisted and his skin is a sickly shade of grey.
* HumanoidAbomination: Unlike most seen Entities (except for ones posing as humans), he is usually only kind of human-like, but his face is twisted and his skin is a sickly shade of grey.
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* HeelFaceRevolvingDoor
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* SnakeOilSalesman: His organization sells bottled water which, he admits in private, is 99% tap water from one of the most polluted water sheds in Colorado.
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* SnakeOilSalesman: His organization sells bottled water which, he admits in private, is 99% tap water from one of the most polluted water sheds in Colorado.Colorado.
* WrongGenreSavvy: Thinks his whole competition with Astrid is just a matter of two cults trying to scam as much money as possible out of as many people as possible; little does he know that Astrid is waging a war against an infiltrating alien race.
* WrongGenreSavvy: Thinks his whole competition with Astrid is just a matter of two cults trying to scam as much money as possible out of as many people as possible; little does he know that Astrid is waging a war against an infiltrating alien race.
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!!Detective Avil Demakos
A detective from Florida; an ally of Chloe and later her boyfriend.
* FriendOnTheForce
!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
!The Honest World Foundation
A detective from Florida; an ally of Chloe and later her boyfriend.
* FriendOnTheForce
!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
!The Honest World Foundation
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!Supporting Characters
!Entities
!!The Surgeon
!!The Surgeon
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!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
Chloe's neighbors.
* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
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Chloe's neighbors.
* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
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* PetTheDog: She is incredibly ruthless, but is capable of genuine kindness if it's for someone who isn't a threat to her and if it doesn't get in the way of her battle with the Entities.
** She spares an assassin sent to kill her because [[spoiler:his wife was being held hostage by Wenuka's organization]]; he and [[spoiler:the wife]] are later seen as members of the Honest World Foundation.
** During a clean room session with a new recruit, [[spoiler:she lies and tells the recruit that her suicidal husband, who tried to get her to commit double suicide with him but only died himself, is glad that she lived (Astrid had no idea what he really thought, but convinced the recruit that she spoke to the husband from beyond the grave)]].
** She spares an assassin sent to kill her because [[spoiler:his wife was being held hostage by Wenuka's organization]]; he and [[spoiler:the wife]] are later seen as members of the Honest World Foundation.
** During a clean room session with a new recruit, [[spoiler:she lies and tells the recruit that her suicidal husband, who tried to get her to commit double suicide with him but only died himself, is glad that she lived (Astrid had no idea what he really thought, but convinced the recruit that she spoke to the husband from beyond the grave)]].
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* RuggedScar: She has scars from what seems to be bullet wounds in her right shoulder and a smaller scar on her left hip.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Has mauve hair.
!!Anika Wells
One of Astrid's earliest allies who was abducted and experimented on by the Entities.
* BodyHorror: Because of what the Entities did to her, the right half of her body ages normally, but the left half ages much faster and now looks like an old crone.
* ICannotSelfTerminate: Begs Astrid to end her life, but Astrid can't bring herself to do it.
* RapidAging: See Body Horror.
* MoralityPet: For Astrid.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Has mauve hair.
!!Anika Wells
One of Astrid's earliest allies who was abducted and experimented on by the Entities.
* BodyHorror: Because of what the Entities did to her, the right half of her body ages normally, but the left half ages much faster and now looks like an old crone.
* ICannotSelfTerminate: Begs Astrid to end her life, but Astrid can't bring herself to do it.
* RapidAging: See Body Horror.
* MoralityPet: For Astrid.
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* IntrepidReporter: Her job.
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* SmartPeoplePlayChess: An avid chess player; even plays a more difficult variant with wazir pieces.[[note]]Rooks turned upside down; move like the rooks, but only one space at a time[[/note]]
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* HighHeelPower: Badass, and usually wears heels.heels; seems to hate wearing flats.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Attempts to commit suicide in the first issue, but survives.
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* HighHeelPower: Badass, and usually wears heels.
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* TheUnfettered: At the start of the series, she has lost just about everything that mattered to her, meaning the Honest World Foundation doesn't have anything to use against her.
* CelibateHero: Abstains from romantic attachments and close friendships in order to commit to stopping the entities.
* HeroWithBadPublicity: Sort of; while the accusations against her organization of blackmail, manipulation and a cult-like nature are well-founded, the existence of the Entities and her battle against them are unknown to the public.
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* TheLancer: To Astrid.
* StatuesqueStunner: Is tall and gorgeous.
* StatuesqueStunner: Is tall and gorgeous.
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* TheMole: He was an informant to the Entities for a while, when they were threatening his boyfriend, Raven.
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One of Astrid's Rooks.
* MixedAncestry: Her father was Puerto Rican and her mother was from Singapore.
* MixedAncestry: Her father was Puerto Rican and her mother was from Singapore.
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A benign Entity who becomes an ally of Chloe.Chloe.
!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
!!Reston Wenuka
The leader of a Christian(-ish) self help organization in Texas.
* {{Foil}}: To Astrid; both are leaders of manipulative self-help movements similar to cults, but unlike Astrid, he has no good intentions or redeeming qualities; he is just a greedy, amoral con man.
* SnakeOilSalesman: His organization sells bottled water which, he admits in private, is 99% tap water from one of the most polluted water sheds in Colorado.
!!The Haverlin Brothers
Chloe's neighbors.
* {{Adorkable}}: After rescuing Chloe from her attempted suicide, they apologize for getting a look at her breasts (she tried to drown herself and was only wearing panties).
* BewareTheNiceOnes: Really friendly and caring guys, but not afraid to put up a fight if they or Chloe are seriously threatened.
* NiceGuy: As Chloe puts it, their mother raised them well.
* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Three Guys]]: They live together and are almost never seen apart.
!!Reston Wenuka
The leader of a Christian(-ish) self help organization in Texas.
* {{Foil}}: To Astrid; both are leaders of manipulative self-help movements similar to cults, but unlike Astrid, he has no good intentions or redeeming qualities; he is just a greedy, amoral con man.
* SnakeOilSalesman: His organization sells bottled water which, he admits in private, is 99% tap water from one of the most polluted water sheds in Colorado.
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!Main Characters
!!Chloe Tona Pierce
A journalist from Florida whose fiancé committed suicide after coming into contact with the Honest World Foundation, prompting her to investigate them.
* BiTheWay: Chloe kisses Killian and later on tells Avid he'll have to share her with Killian.
!!Astrid Mueller
The founder and leader of the Honest World Foundation; previously a gothic horror novelist.
* EmotionlessGirl: Rarely displays much emotion.
* GoodIsNotNice: She may be humanity's best defense against the Entities, but she isn't above manipulating and blackmailing her followers to do what needs to be done.
* GoshDangItToHeck: Doesn't like to swear.
* NervesOfSteel: Frequently stares down demons and mortal danger without so much as batting an eye.
* SkunkStripe: Has one as an adult, but not as a teenager. It's probably stress-induced.
!!Killian Reed
One of Astrid's closest Rooks and confidantes.
* BadassLesbian: Openly hits on Chloe.
* BadassIsraeli: A former Mossad agent.
* ButchLesbian: Has short hair and dresses masculinely.
!!Duncan
Another of Astrid's closest Rooks.
* BadassGay: Is in a relationship with Raven and one of the most skilled fighters in the comic as well as a former special forces commander. Also ManlyGay.
!Supporting Characters
!!Capone
!!Raven
The team leader of the clean room control staff.
* StraightGay: Is gay and in a relationship with Duncan.
!!Spark
A benign Entity who becomes an ally of Chloe.
!!Chloe Tona Pierce
A journalist from Florida whose fiancé committed suicide after coming into contact with the Honest World Foundation, prompting her to investigate them.
* BiTheWay: Chloe kisses Killian and later on tells Avid he'll have to share her with Killian.
!!Astrid Mueller
The founder and leader of the Honest World Foundation; previously a gothic horror novelist.
* EmotionlessGirl: Rarely displays much emotion.
* GoodIsNotNice: She may be humanity's best defense against the Entities, but she isn't above manipulating and blackmailing her followers to do what needs to be done.
* GoshDangItToHeck: Doesn't like to swear.
* NervesOfSteel: Frequently stares down demons and mortal danger without so much as batting an eye.
* SkunkStripe: Has one as an adult, but not as a teenager. It's probably stress-induced.
!!Killian Reed
One of Astrid's closest Rooks and confidantes.
* BadassLesbian: Openly hits on Chloe.
* BadassIsraeli: A former Mossad agent.
* ButchLesbian: Has short hair and dresses masculinely.
!!Duncan
Another of Astrid's closest Rooks.
* BadassGay: Is in a relationship with Raven and one of the most skilled fighters in the comic as well as a former special forces commander. Also ManlyGay.
!Supporting Characters
!!Capone
!!Raven
The team leader of the clean room control staff.
* StraightGay: Is gay and in a relationship with Duncan.
!!Spark
A benign Entity who becomes an ally of Chloe.