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* OverprotectiveDad: Double Subverted. He's not upset about Pansy getting pregnant, until he finds out the father is an earth pony.
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* AbusiveParents: His mom, Star Saber, literally just hated him for being born a boy.
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* AbusiveParents: Her dad was, as Hurricane so eloquently put it, a total dick, who only saw his daughter as a tool and potential source of grandchildren, if anything. And yet she still felt bad when he died.
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* AbusiveMom: She hated her son for being born a boy.
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* AbusiveDad: He's Clover's dad and, as Hurricane so eloquently put it, he's a total dick; he only saw his daughter as a tool and potential source of grandchildren, if anything. And yet she still felt bad when he died.
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* AbusiveMom: She hated her son for being born a boy.
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* AbusiveDad: He's Clover's dad and, as Hurricane so eloquently put it, he's a total dick; he only saw his daughter as a tool and potential source of grandchildren, if anything. And yet she still felt bad when he died.
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* AdultFear: Several of her children never made it to adulthood.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Several of her children never made it to adulthood.
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* BadassBeard: He sports some very impressive facial hair.
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* {{Flanderization}}: This happens to her in-universe. Due to an out-of-context quote from her father, she's often imagined to be a timid and shy pony; this isn't ''entirely'' inaccurate, but she was "timid and shy" by the standards of the Celestine Junta. While she's often thought of as being like Fluttershy in personality, in reality she was closer to Rainbow Dash.
* CloudcuckoolandersMinder: She tries to keep Puddinghead in check.
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* RapeAsBackstory: It's heavily implied that she was molested and groomed by her predecessor Mareinus as a filly, which may have contributed to her madness.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Managed to get in charge of the Griffon Empire and the Mongrellian horde by kicking everyone else's ass.
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Per TRS thread, cleaning wicks.
* DoesNotLikeMen: Hated males. Really hated them. As in trying to ban her troops from having relations with men. Or so [[BlatantLies improperly studied propaganda would suggest]].
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* HetIsEw: Hated males. Really hated them. As in trying to ban her troops from having relations with men. Or so [[BlatantLies improperly studied propaganda would suggest]].
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Adorkable is in TRS. The trope is being split: Adorkable becomes YMMV and there's a new in-universe trope Endearingly Dorky. ZCE and misuse are being removed. Real Life examples are not allowed.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Smart Cookie describes Clover's reaction to Hurricane complimenting her. It's entirely this.
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* BadassBeard: He sports some very impressive facial hair.
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Arguing with itself
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* KnightOfCerebus: Not that the story was all butterflies, light and fluff before he came along, but it gets insanely brutal once this bastard shows up.
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* BadassGrandpa: While not actually a grandfather, he was still old at the time.
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