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Evilest_Tim
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Yeah, but a massacre \'\'isn\'t\'\' normal day to day operations, it\'s a major action of the kind he\'s supposed to be trying to prevent. It doesn\'t make any sense at all that a CIA agent would out-and-out \'\'assist\'\' in such a thing (nevermind that it makes even less sense for Mak, knowing Allen is CIA, to bring him along and give him an automatic weapon; what if Allen \'\'had\'\' been there to kill him?).
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Yeah, but a massacre \\\'\\\'isn\\\'t\\\'\\\' normal day to day operations, it\\\'s a major action of the kind he\\\'s supposed to be trying to prevent. It doesn\\\'t make any sense at all that a CIA agent would out-and-out \\\'\\\'assist\\\'\\\' in such a thing (nevermind that it makes even less sense for Mak, knowing Allen is CIA, to bring him along and give him an automatic weapon; what if Allen \\\'\\\'had\\\'\\\' been there to kill him?). All it takes is for him to get cold feet over it in the elevator and he prevents the invasion of the US.
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But that\'s not the point; the point is, there\'s a clear-cut place in the plot where killing one person would visibly prevent the entire scenario playing out, when the point of the plot is the opposite of this. What other scenarios might play out or whether Allen would actually do that is irrelevant; if he did, the whole invasion would have no visible way to happen.
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The point is, there\\\'s a clear-cut place in the plot where killing one person would visibly prevent the entire scenario playing out, when the point of the plot is the opposite of this. What other scenarios might play out or whether Allen would actually do that is irrelevant; if he did, the whole invasion would have no visible way to happen.
