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Isn\'t it frustrating that no matter how often they fail, the Cutie Mark Crusaders never understand that you\'re supposed to just wait for your cutie mark instead of trying and trying to make it happen? Even Apple Bloom, probably the most even-headed of the three fillies, just doesn\'t get it. Even after Cheerilee explained it to her class!
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Isn\\\'t it frustrating that no matter how often they fail, the Cutie Mark Crusaders never understand that you\\\'re supposed to just wait for your cutie mark instead of trying and trying to make it happen? Even Apple Bloom, probably the most even-headed of the three fillies, just doesn\\\'t get it. Even after Cheerilee explained it to her class in \\\"Call of the Cutie\\\"!
\\\"Discovering what makes you unique isn\\\'t something that happens overnight, and no amount of hoping, wishing, or begging will make a cutie mark appear before its time.\\\"
Too bad Apple Bloom, who had been diligently taking notes, was momentarily distracted by Diamond Tiara\\\'s note-passing. She mighta learned something.
Another one, probably a borderline case since it\\\'s most likely intended and I just never noticed it:
In \\\"Winter Wrapup,\\\" there\\\'s more foreshadowing of Twilight\\\'s knack for organization coming in handy than I originally thought. There\\\'s the obvious \\\"Good thing I\\\'m so organized,\\\" but I only just noticed that when Twilight tries helping Rarity with the birds\\\' nests, she takes the random mishmash of materials Rarity dumps on the table and organizes it OCD-style immediately.
\\\"Discovering what makes you unique isn\\\'t something that happens overnight, and no amount of hoping, wishing, or begging will make a cutie mark appear before its time.\\\"
Too bad Apple Bloom, who had been diligently taking notes, was momentarily distracted by Diamond Tiara\\\'s note-passing. She mighta learned something.
Another one, probably a borderline case since it\\\'s most likely intended and I just never noticed it:
In \\\"Winter Wrapup,\\\" there\\\'s more foreshadowing of Twilight\\\'s knack for organization coming in handy than I originally thought. There\\\'s the obvious \\\"Good thing I\\\'m so organized,\\\" but I only just noticed that when Twilight tries helping Rarity with the birds\\\' nests, she takes the random mishmash of materials Rarity dumps on the table and organizes it OCD-style immediately.
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Isn\'t it frustrating that no matter how often they fail, the Cutie Mark Crusaders never understand that you\'re supposed to just wait for your cutie mark instead of trying and trying to make it happen? Why won\'t somepony just explain it to them? In fact, didn\'t Cheerilee say something about that?
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Isn\\\'t it frustrating that no matter how often they fail, the Cutie Mark Crusaders never understand that you\\\'re supposed to just wait for your cutie mark instead of trying and trying to make it happen? Even Apple Bloom, probably the most even-headed of the three fillies, just doesn\\\'t get it. Even after Cheerilee explained it to her class!
\\\"Discovering what makes you unique isn\\\'t something that happens overnight, and no amount of hoping, wishing, or begging will make a cutie mark appear before its time.\\\"
Too bad Apple Bloom, who had been diligently taking notes, was momentarily distracted by Diamond Tiara\\\'s note-passing. She mighta learned something.
\\\"Discovering what makes you unique isn\\\'t something that happens overnight, and no amount of hoping, wishing, or begging will make a cutie mark appear before its time.\\\"
Too bad Apple Bloom, who had been diligently taking notes, was momentarily distracted by Diamond Tiara\\\'s note-passing. She mighta learned something.
