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However, that doesn\'t change the fact that you\'re choosing to see the events of the show the way you want to see them. You\'ve headed so far into personal interpretation and YMMV that you need to find an audience reaction to suit your personal interpretation, and not shoehorn an objective trope into functioning as an opinion.
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That doesn\\\'t change the fact that you\\\'re choosing to see the events of the show the way you want to see them. You\\\'ve headed so far into personal interpretation and YMMV that you need to find an audience reaction to suit your personal interpretation, and not shoehorn an objective trope into functioning as an opinion.
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Yeah, which bit of the fight you wanted to talk about really doesn\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it (the bit you describe here is the very end of the fight, after Ace-Ops have been given orders to change their mission to capturing a sword instead of Penny -- something that\'s very easy to do, given how Penny\'s swords work in battle).
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Yeah, which bit of the fight you wanted to talk about really doesn\\\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it (the bit you describe here is the very end of the fight, after Ace-Ops have been given orders to change their mission to capturing a sword instead of Penny -- something that\\\'s very easy to do, given how Penny\\\'s swords are designed to be used).
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Yeah, which bit of the fight you wanted to talk about really doesn\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it (the bit you describe here is the very end of the fight, after Ace-Ops have been given orders to change their mission to capturing a sword instead of Penny).
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Yeah, which bit of the fight you wanted to talk about really doesn\\\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it (the bit you describe here is the very end of the fight, after Ace-Ops have been given orders to change their mission to capturing a sword instead of Penny -- something that\\\'s very easy to do, given how Penny\\\'s swords work in battle).
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Yeah, which bit of the fight you wanted to talk about really doesn\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it.
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Yeah, which bit of the fight you wanted to talk about really doesn\\\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it (the bit you describe here is the very end of the fight, after Ace-Ops have been given orders to change their mission to capturing a sword instead of Penny).
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Yeah, which bit of the fight really doesn\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it.
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Yeah, which bit of the fight you wanted to talk about really doesn\\\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it.
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At this point, you\'ve headed so far into personal interpretation and YMMV, you need to find an audience reaction that suits your personal interpretation and not an objective trope.
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Yeah, which bit of the fight really doesn\\\'t come across in the example you wrote. The example you wrote describes the fight in such generic terms, it seems to be talking about the entire fight, not the very end of it.
However, that doesn\\\'t change the fact that you\\\'re choosing to see the events of the show the way you want to see them. You\\\'ve headed so far into personal interpretation and YMMV that you need to find an audience reaction to suit your personal interpretation, and not shoehorn an objective trope into functioning as an opinion.
However, that doesn\\\'t change the fact that you\\\'re choosing to see the events of the show the way you want to see them. You\\\'ve headed so far into personal interpretation and YMMV that you need to find an audience reaction to suit your personal interpretation, and not shoehorn an objective trope into functioning as an opinion.
