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I do still think that if we\'re talking about the player character, ButThouMust is the more appropriate, more specific trope. ConflictBall is for characters who obviously have to do whatever the creators make them do, but the player at the very least always has the option of just shutting off the game. Personally I\'d add onto the example there, but I\'ve said my piece, and the phrasing was the bigger issue.
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I do still think that if we\\\'re talking about the player character, ButThouMust is the more appropriate, specific trope. ConflictBall is for characters who obviously have to do whatever the creators make them do, but the player at the very least always has the option of just shutting off the game. Personally I\\\'d add onto the example there, but I\\\'ve said my piece, and the phrasing was the bigger issue.
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I do still think that if we\'re talking about the player character, ButThouMust is the more appropriate, more specific trope. ConflictBall is for characters who obviously have to do whatever the devs make them do, but the player at the very least always has the option of just shutting off the game. Personally I\'d add onto the example there, but I\'ve said my piece, and the phrasing was the bigger issue.
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I do still think that if we\\\'re talking about the player character, ButThouMust is the more appropriate, more specific trope. ConflictBall is for characters who obviously have to do whatever the creators make them do, but the player at the very least always has the option of just shutting off the game. Personally I\\\'d add onto the example there, but I\\\'ve said my piece, and the phrasing was the bigger issue.
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I do still think that if we\'re talking about the player character, ButThouMust is the more appropriate, more specific trope. ConflictBall is for characters who obviously have to do whatever the devs make them do, but the player at the very least always has the option of just shutting off the game. Personally I\'d add onto the example there. But I\'ve said my piece. The phrasing was the bigger issue.
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I do still think that if we\\\'re talking about the player character, ButThouMust is the more appropriate, more specific trope. ConflictBall is for characters who obviously have to do whatever the devs make them do, but the player at the very least always has the option of just shutting off the game. Personally I\\\'d add onto the example there, but I\\\'ve said my piece, and the phrasing was the bigger issue.
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That phrasing is better, thanks for that.
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Just got your PM, and that phrasing is better, thanks for that.
