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This looks like trope misuse to me.
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This looks like misuse because the trope is for active stupidity not reflexive actions.
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Mercury and Emerald were distracted, had no time to think about their reaction to Yang's sudden move; they were caught completely off-guard and acted reflexively. By the time they'd gathered their wits, Yang had reached the lift and Weiss was blocking access to her with ice.
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Mercury and Emerald were distracted, had no time to think about their reaction to Yang\'s sudden move; they were caught completely off-guard and acted reflexively. By the time they\'d gathered their wits, Yang had reached the lift and Weiss was blocking access to her with ice.