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Ukitake's entry:
* ShootTheShaggyDog: [[spoiler:He sacrifices himself to allow Mimihagi to replace the dying Soul King... which is quickly absorbed by the Soul King's slayer, Yhwach. The only long-term result is making the BigBad even stronger than before]].
* ShootTheShaggyDog: [[spoiler:He sacrifices himself to allow Mimihagi to replace the dying Soul King... which is quickly absorbed by the Soul King's slayer, Yhwach. The only long-term result is making the BigBad even stronger than before]].
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Ukitake\'s entry:
* ShootTheShaggyDog: [[spoiler:He sacrifices himself to allow Mimihagi to replace the dying Soul King... which is quickly absorbed by the Soul King\'s slayer, Yhwach. The only long-term result is making the BigBad even stronger than before]].
* ShootTheShaggyDog: [[spoiler:He sacrifices himself to allow Mimihagi to replace the dying Soul King... which is quickly absorbed by the Soul King\'s slayer, Yhwach. The only long-term result is making the BigBad even stronger than before]].
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There is no story build-up here. Aside from two ambiguous, foreshadowing scenes that indicate Ukitake is up to something, there is absolutely no story build-up and no prior reference to anything like Mimihagi existing. In two simple scenes, Ukitake releases and explains Mimihagi and begins to die, everyone acknowledges Mimihagi can stabilise the world for only as long as Ukitake's dying reiatsu exists (no-one expects that to be for very long), Mimihagi stabilises the world for only a few moments before Yhwach absorbs him, and Ukitake dies.
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There is no story build-up here. Aside from two ambiguous, foreshadowing scenes that indicate Ukitake is up to something, there is absolutely no story build-up and no prior reference to anything like Mimihagi existing. In two simple scenes, Ukitake releases and explains Mimihagi and begins to die, everyone acknowledges Mimihagi can stabilise the world for only as long as Ukitake\'s dying reiatsu exists (no-one expects that to be for very long), Mimihagi stabilises the world for only a few moments before Yhwach absorbs him, and Ukitake dies.