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1	* {{Anvilicious}}: Like its [[FanFic/PartingWords predecessor]], this fic doesn't pull punches where the issue of bullying is concerned.
2	* BadassDecay: Discord gets hit with the ButtMonkey stick big time, but thankfully it stays comedic enough to not be too noticeable of a problem. It's also enforced in-universe in that he has a runic collar that prevents him from going too far overboard with the chaos.
3	* HarsherInHindsight:
4	** Early in the story Luna rebukes Applejack's concerns about making everyone immortal being unnatural by saying, "Should we abandon medicine because it thwarts the natural order?" Come the Windy City arc, it turns out the medical community showcases that exact mindset with the physically handicapped, to the point that doctors actually providing prosthetics to assist them is viewed as a hate crime.
5	** The above gets combined with an already horrific event in canon, namely Fluttershy's fall in "The Cutie Mark Chronicles". It used to be tradition among Pegasi to literally bump off disabled foals and poor fliers from their cities and even though said tradition has supposedly stopped, there's still no guardrails in cloud cities and no adults watching the edges of the foundation clouds to prevent accidents. This not only explains why no one came to help Fluttershy but likely why Scootaloo lives in Ponyville; under said conditions, the latter probably wouldn't have survived to get her Cutie Mark in a pegasi cloud city and it's only sheer luck that prevented the former's death from a "tragic accident".
6	** In one of his footnotes in the very first chapter, Ralph Hayes Jr. says "Starswirl the Bearded, I suspect, was a {{jerkass}}". Years later comes the finale of season 7, and indeed, Starswirl shows himself to be a {{jerkass}} (more specifically, JerkWithAHeartOfGold).
7	** This story establishes that Discord must wear a [[PowerLimiter collar]] that keeps him in check as part of his probation. In-canon, nothing was ever done to limit his powers so that he could wreak havoc unopposed whenever he appeared and avoid any consequences for his actions, ultimately resulting in the SeriesFinale where Equestria was nearly destroyed.
8	* HilariousInHindsight:
9	** The Ponyville Library gets blown up by the Mane Six's ascension. Flashforward to "Twilight's Kingdom", and the show deals away with the library in a similar manner.
10	** Luna is Pinkie Pie's mentor; in the ''ComicBook/MyLittlePonyFriendsForever'' comics, Pinkie became Luna's comedy mentor.
11	** Bishi is basically a DistaffCounterpart to his big sister (and [[EnsembleDarkhorse popular with the fans to boot]], not to mention the Cutie Mark Crusaders) and their parents have similar personalities to their children, with their mother growing extremely exotic (as-in "could eat a pony and/or Angel") plants. In "Flutter Brutter", Fluttershy's younger brother is a lazy mooch and their parents [[ExtremeDoormat are so meek they make Fluttershy look like a drill sergeant in comparison]].
12	** In Chapter Two, Rainbow Dash mentions that she does not want to go for 1000 years without "intimate male companionship". Come the Windy City Arc, she tries [[spoiler: flirting with Mach, only to be horrified when she finds out that he is underage]].
13	** Mach One and [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie2017 Tempest Shadow]] share an eerily similar [[CynicismCatalyst reason for being cynical]]; namely, the loss of their respective species' signature appendages [[note]] respectively, one of Mach's wings and Tempest's horn [[/note]]. Both are also, notably, [[HandicappedBadass capable in spite of their disabilities]]. This is despite Mach being first introduced in the story ''long'' before TheMovie was even released in theaters.
14	** Iron Will is reintroduced having genuinely had a change of heart, opened a dojo, and taken in Bishi as one his pupils. In "Once Upon a Zeppelin", Iron Will has only learned to be a more clever con man and have an escape route prepared to avoid having to give dissatisfied customers refunds.
15	* JerkassWoobie: The Manehattan bullies become this when [[spoiler: Chapter 53 reveals that they acted the way they did because their parents are extremely ruthless, ambitious NouveauRiche ponies that abandoned morality to an alarming degree (like taking on ChronicBackstabbingDisorder and treating ''their own children'' as nothing more than pawns) and the foals believed that is just how the world worked]].
16	* MoralEventHorizon:
17	** [[spoiler: Cotton Mouth seems to have crossed it in the background story- he was a SnakeOilSalesman who sold potions that ''supposedly'' helps birth. However, it was deadly poison and killed most of the foals exposed to it. Then in Chapter 40 he kidnaps Mudpuppy and Sweetie Belle, reinforcing this trope... And the next chapter subverts it when it is revealed that he indeed believed the potion would work well, since when he tried it on himself there were only positive effects. He was also revealed to have been enslaved by a bigger evil responsible for the kidnapping.]]
18	** The racist Sheriff Brass and his racist fellow officials in Promise crossed it by leaving two foals to die in a dangerous forest just for being unicorns. This was already the case in ''FanFic/AGreatAndPowerfulHeart'', the fanfic that was [[RecursiveFanfiction made canon to this story]], and they do ''nothing'' to redeem themselves here.
19	** The Crownbreakers cross it when they plan to blow up (dissolve) the Thunderdome... right in the middle of a Wonderbolts show ''with many people inside''. To add insult to injury, roughly half of those people ''couldn't fly'' and many of them ''[[WouldHurtAChild were children]]'', several of whom were handicapped. Not surprisingly, there are a lot of readers that want to make them pay in the worst possible way -- and hopefully [[TheManBehindTheMan whoever's backing them up]] will also get severely punished.
20	* WinBackTheCrowd: Many readers felt RH laid on his hatred for "Crusaders of the Lost Mark" too thick in Chapter 35. The following chapter is very heartfelt and shows off Babs earning her Cutie Mark; the fans were pleased.
21	** And then, Apple Bloom got her Cutie Mark in an awesome fashion [[spoiler: and ascended to Alicornhood at the same time]]. The end of that chapter also hints that [[spoiler: Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo were busy getting their own Cutie Marks and ascending at the same time]].
22	** As of Chapter 42, [[spoiler: Sweetie's ascension/cutie mark has now been showcased]]. And it was awesome.
23	** Chapter 50 sees [[spoiler: Dash ascending Scootaloo who then ascends Mach.]] Fans were gushing in the comments, some straight up saying her [[spoiler: ascension]] is the ''most awesome out of the Cutie Mark Crusaders''.
24	** Chapter 53 features a SympathyForTheDevil for the Gala Brats and Granny Smith going all MamaBear for them before deciding to ToughLove them into better ponies. The readers were delighted.
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