gorgardard
clockwork romance device
Since: Jan, 2001
Oct 22nd 2010 at 8:59:27 AM
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Edited the following:
- Complete Monster: Judge Turpin, so very much. Towards the end of the story, Sweeney Todd and Mrs. Lovett are both on the edge of being this.
- On the edge? They are killing people, baking them into pies and selling them for people to EAT. I don't care what your Freudian Excuse is, that's Complete Monster territory.
- Complete Monster: Judge Turpin, so very much. Towards the end of the story, Sweeney Todd and Mrs. Lovett.
More concise and true.
Cut out this part:
Trimmed it to this:
Though the last sentence does give me slight jibbles, the idea is still pretty clear in the show.