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SeptimusHeap MOD (Edited uphill both ways)

Mar 23rd 2021 at 7:59:28 AM •••

Linking to a past Trope Repair Shop thread that dealt with this page: Liked the old version better, started by masterchief on Sep 5th 2010 at 6:14:02 PM

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman

SeptimusHeap MOD (Edited uphill both ways)

Mar 23rd 2021 at 3:03:28 AM •••

Linking to a past Trope Repair Shop thread that dealt with this page: BeneathTheMask versus WhatYouAreInTheDark, started by Laughlin on May 30th 2011 at 1:18:59 PM

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman

Specialist290 Since: Jan, 2001

Jul 26th 2010 at 3:07:29 PM •••

There, I think that should about do it. Massively cleaned up the original grammar and formatting, and also added a few things of my own into the mix. Anyone who sees any further improvements is free to add them.

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masterchief Since: Nov, -0001

Jul 26th 2010 at 4:58:10 PM •••

Nice job :) now it Is a likeable trope

FastEddie MOD Since: Apr, 2004

Sep 5th 2010 at 2:36:53 AM •••

It was still all over the place. I further refined it.

Goal: Clear, Concise and Witty

180.131.217.118 Since: Dec, 1969

Nov 11th 2010 at 3:52:37 PM •••

It's "We wear the mask that grins and lies, It hides our cheeks and shades our eyes". Cleaning up the grammar of a poem isn't the best thing to do.

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