All Purpose Negima Fanfiction Thread

@rikalous

The worst part, for him, would be that I'm actually sure he would like Fate. Which makes the fact that he's conflicted about how he feels even worse, since he'd feel obligated to be cold and distant to her out of misguided grief.

No, I call wrong there. The only thing Negi is cold and distant with is coffee!

He said he'd feel obligated to be cold and distant, not that he'd make a particularly good job at it.

Seriously, though, we could see he could get all cold, despiseful and unwilling to go easy on with Chigusa, Quartum and Tsukuyomi.

edited 12th Oct '12 7:15:02 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

Essentially, a case of Minion with an F in Evil. Wait, is that even a trope? Holy shit, it is!

Somehow, he ends up being the only bright spot in Fate's family life... unintentionally.

edited 12th Oct '12 7:26:17 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough

Enjoy it until they rename it Sympathetical Ineffective at Villainy Evildoer or some such trite.

How about Villainously Sympathetic and Ineffective?

Don't give them ideas...

Trope #213.

We already have enough retardedly renamed tropes... I thought we were about the FUNNY.

Hey, I was suggesting a story title, not a trope name!

Okay, okay.

Anyways, I just uploaded my current rough draft for Negima Piece to the Ala Iridia account. Feel free to add suggestions for improvement while I think up some new ideas. Oh, and if you're wondering, the "Ala Alba 33" at the top of the document is one of my "in-house" terms, denoting the group composed of Negi, the Mahora Academy Junior High 3-A students, and Anya ("Ala Alba 32" would exclude Negi), which I consider to be the official core of the "greater Ala Alba".

And Eva? I'd like to see your pirate!Haruna beat mine in the Stripperiffic Impossibly Cool Clothes department. Hint: Z!Robin's second outfit◊ and Olive's outfit will have nothing on my Haruna's pirate outfit once I'm done imagining its design. <insert Evil Laugh>

edited 12th Oct '12 8:00:41 PM by MarqFJA

Why on earth would stories be discussed here?

I thought they were discussing a potential story title.

Now I'm kinda tempted to write the whole Raised by Precia thing, although it needs some canon melding to make the plot work.

Okay, how about Nanoha is studying at Mahora Elementary, runs into Yuuno, then everything goes as usual until she runs into Negi and Fate. After being beaten hard, she's approached by the last person she ever expected, a junior high student named Evangeline. Eva has felt the presence of the Thousand Master's son, but since she can't lure him into a trap with students here, she must use Nanoha to get close to him. Using half lies and manipulating Nanoha, she gets the girl's acceptance of Chachamaru's help in combat.

After an initial Chachanoha vs. Negifate showdown ends in a draw of sorts, Eva decides using Nanoha's Jewel Seeds as bait for a battle at the bridge, setting her own power increase up with the blackout. Nanoha realizes at this point she's being used, but I'm kinda stuck about what to do next after this.

Edit: Aren't you forgetting Kotaro? They should be 34. (Insert Rule 34 joke here).

edited 12th Oct '12 8:02:40 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

So, Ako and Makie join CE?

OM needs to write that!

"Sextum! Come here and join your brothers in battle!"

"Lord Dynamis, I'm Ako. You have mistaken us... again."

"Well, you should let grow your hair up already!"

edited 12th Oct '12 8:05:57 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

Or better yet...

"Why did you cut your hair after that nice girl gave you that shampoo in the baths?"

Considering who Nanoha is, I don't think she'd have a problem with being used, at that point, so long as she was useful to someone. She was pretty depressed about being totally useless to her family before becoming a magical girl.

And also, if Negi and Fate are both trained to fight, then she really needs the reinforcements.

From that point, you could actually just continue to mesh together the plots for Negima and Nanoha, beginning with the Kyoto trip and Nanoha somehow managing to convince the headmaster to bring her two new friends instead of Eva and Chachamaru, who can't come for obvious reasons. Of course, hilarity proceeds to ensue. I'd also really like a scene of Lindy going "Don't worry, I've dealt with worse. So long as one of the Great Old Ones doesn't show up, we'll be fine." when Sukuna is summoned..

Then, the Wolkenritter crashes Mahorafest and Chao displays her ability to maneuver around everything and everyone to utterly pwn everyone in the speed chess, ending up with making a grand game and somehow managing to pull off a win despite the nearly impossible odds (Instead of standard magitek, she now has to deal with highly advanced alien technology being used against her. Sure, she has access to even more advanced alien tech, but she can't mass produce it), by somehow manipulating the Wolkenritter into being her side's 'Hero Units' (personally, I would go with her rooming with Hayate).

Huzzah, the Elite Four is conquered.

With everyone discussing plot ideas, I'm starting to really miss Negima. The good parts. The last two volumes and certain fight conclusions are free to fade away.

edited 15th Oct '12 10:08:48 AM by WorldTurtle

It isn't she'd get upset about being used, but about being used to suck a boy's blood.

Thanks for the suggestions.

Ouch, don't remind me.

edited 12th Oct '12 8:37:44 PM by NapoleonDeCheese

Which Elite Four are you talking about Immi?

The Elite Four are final bosses in Pokemon, or at least they were back in Gen 1.

They're still the final bosses if we're talking about final bosses before the credits.

They can't be a very elite four if there are some many of them.

, ...I get the feeling there's a joke here I'm not getting.