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Start critiquing my ideas, please!
Ironic, huh?
Critque? Is that what you want us to do? I thought you just wanted to spill all your ideas before you exploded. 
It doesn't sound like a bad concept, all the gods from different religions hanging out. I would suggest that you don't get ahead of yourself here, and that it would take a while to introduce and establish all these characters. So yeah, other than take things slowly, I can't see anything which sounds wrong or needs changing. At least at this stage
Dreamkeepers Prelude, check it out!
What questions do you want us to answer? This is just a bunch of ideas with no plot besides "LOL LOOK AT THE WACKY ANTICS OF VARIOUS GODS".
Actually, that is a critique of mine. Even comedies need more planning than that. What do you want to say with this story and why are you starting with Apollo rather than, say, Zeus?
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OK.
That's actually kind of the point. It's meant to be sort of a gag-a-day thing.
The first goes as follows...
From the name, I would hope you can tell that this planned webcomic is about THE GODS THEMSELVES! It all starts when Apollo gets ahold of some information: there are still believers out there. He gets the other Olympians and their compatriots together, and the insane antics begin. Then, Ra gets his house foreclosed by an incredibly Flanderized IRS, and has to bunk with Hephaestus. Cue all of HIS ilk showing up, including Crazy Awesome Horus, Bottle Fairy Hathor, and Smug Snake Set. Then, one day, Hathor and Cloacina are talking about something, but the Hero Twins are eavesdropping, so Hathor leaves the room and catches them in the act... only to proclaim that she's taking them home with her. Somehow, this gets Zipacna and Earthquake involved, which then gets Quetzalcoatl and his kind involved. (He's a Third Person Person in this, by the way.) Somewhere along the line, Cthulu and the FLYING SPAGHETTI MONSTER end up in this gigantic, steaming mess. Giver, Watcher, Raven, Old One Up High, and several others are involved, as well as Odin, Thor, and the rest of them. (Odin's usually-overlooked brothers Vili and Ve are in this, and they have a Hear No Evil See No Evil Speak No Evil theme to them.) I need help making this all work.
Next up is a work following a pseudo-Mongol prince-general, Ogaitsu, as he deals with the Maqquat, the KNIGHTS OF THE ORDER OF THE HOLY SIGIL, and the Themiskyrans. Though the Maqquat are his allies, his Atalem ("horse-rider") hordes are the focus of the story. I will explain more later.
Ironic, huh?