Suggestion: Fire Is Masculine

IMO, I'm not really convinced on the current, since I can't really tell the fire is a key trait of Zuko. Plus, the swords are a bit hard to see, so the "masculine" part is a bit iffy. In terms of ideas, Endeavor from My Hero Academia came to mind, so that could be somewhere to start.

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1.1 or 1.3 works

1.3 because he looks really mad and the muscles are front and center

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Agreeing on 1.3. It helps that the character has a beard of fire, as beards are also often a shorthand for masculinity.

Wouldn't comparing them with a female character from the work make more sense?

I don't see the need of a comparison. All we need is a guy using fire and 1.3. gets it across just fine.

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Doubting his masculinity is a fruitless endeavor.

That pun only works if you know the character. Out of context, readers would just wonder why it's potholed to Pun.

I like the pun, but I think it could be made more apparent:

• Doubting Endeavor's masculinity is a fruitless endeavor.
• Doubting his masculinity is a fruitless Endeavor.

Edited by jlvs200s on Apr 17th 2024 at 1:31:50 PM

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