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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#42827: Apr 27th 2024 at 2:52:11 PM

[up][up][up] That would be very helpful

Edited by EmperorGeode on Apr 27th 2024 at 2:53:22 AM

Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#42828: Apr 27th 2024 at 2:52:46 PM

That's way too long and includes way too much extraneous information. Also, I don't think I can trust your eps any more, I'm sorry

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
Bozzy Since: Feb, 2023
#42829: Apr 27th 2024 at 3:02:18 PM

Abstaining too because I can't follow it due to the length

LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
#42830: Apr 27th 2024 at 3:15:50 PM

Can you please shorten it? It reads like a long list of everything he did. You don’t need to enclude everything just his major evil deeds.

Browsing through the fic right now.

In honor of Akira Toriyama
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#42831: Apr 27th 2024 at 3:23:25 PM

Abstaining on Norman as well due to the length.

Fan-Preferred Couple cleanup thread
Powermaster201 The Emperor of Evil! Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
The Emperor of Evil!
#42832: Apr 27th 2024 at 3:34:36 PM

Honestly don't really mind the length personally, [tup] to Norman.

Godwriter King of the Koopas from Maryland Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
King of the Koopas
#42833: Apr 27th 2024 at 3:42:16 PM

I shortened it for ya

The Ultimate Incarnation of Evil
LarryT I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT! from the Eldritch Ocean Abyss Since: Aug, 2023
I’ll take a potato chip… and EAT IT!
Godwriter King of the Koopas from Maryland Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
King of the Koopas
#42835: Apr 27th 2024 at 4:04:16 PM
Thumped: This post was thumped by the Stick of Off-Topic Thumping. Stay on topic, please.
The Ultimate Incarnation of Evil
Libraryseraph Showtime! from Canada (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
Showtime!
#42836: Apr 27th 2024 at 4:21:31 PM

Why do you keep bringing up a completely unrelated version of the character? That's irrelevant to the conversation

Absolute destiny... apeachalypse?
Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Ravok Caesar Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Caesar
#42840: Apr 27th 2024 at 5:13:22 PM

I'm gonna just politely abstain on Norman here.

WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#42841: Apr 27th 2024 at 5:14:38 PM

Still abstaining on Norman. Godwriter’s previous proposals either exaggerated crimes or neglected to mention actual redeeming qualities, so I can’t really trust them now.

"No running in the halls!"
Godwriter King of the Koopas from Maryland Since: Feb, 2022 Relationship Status: Dancing with myself
King of the Koopas
#42842: Apr 27th 2024 at 5:49:06 PM

I read through the trilogy and I did not find any redeeming qualities that Norman possesses he even says I loved someone once but it weakened me so that’s why he shed it.

The Ultimate Incarnation of Evil
SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
#42843: Apr 27th 2024 at 6:27:26 PM

Staying out of Norman discussion.

Yes to Grant & Walsh, Greenway too.

However, as scummy as I think it is that Justin preys on people's addictions, since he seems to have a modicum of empathy for Murphy's fake kid which he doesn't stifle, I should decline him as a candidate.

Feels good, don't it?
Snowy66 Since: May, 2012
#42844: Apr 27th 2024 at 7:01:40 PM

Getting mad at Emily being brought up is too murky for me to be dismissed as something else [tdown] for now

xie323 Since: Jul, 2009
#42845: Apr 27th 2024 at 7:16:36 PM

Putrid Mother writeup here along with Col.Whitehill ep on the other thread(mb thread) will be up tomorrow.

TBmacho22 Since: Jul, 2021 Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
#42846: Apr 27th 2024 at 7:37:38 PM

Ive been watching this anime called Frieren: Beyond Journey's End and there's one antagonist that I feel should be looked at

Who is she? What has she done?

Aura the Guiottine is a Demon Sage of Destruction. Possessing the ability to control a person by weighing their mana, she forced warriors to submit to her will, beheading those who could even slightly resist her, thus giving her the name of Aura the Guiotiine. Years after being defeated by Frieren's old party, Aura returns and order three of her subordinates to offer a peace treaty to the humans, while secretly plotting to have them lower their magical barrier, allowing her and her army to take over and slaughter the city. Upon learning of her subordinates demises, she shows no care and when Frieren comes to kill her, Aura uses her magic to weigh her man with Frieren's and attempts to kill her when she seemingly wins. She dies after Frieren tricks her with her mana manipulation, allowing her to deal the final blow to Aura once and for all.

Mitigating Factors?

Aura shows no care for the Demon King's death, nor her subordinates death, thus showcasing she has no care for anyone but herself.

Heinous Standard?

While she has tough competition, Aura stands out because of her controlling people against her will and beheading them when they resist. I feel she stands out pretty well, considering her subordinates are kinda treated as pitiful compared to her.

Verdict?

I feel one could make a good case about her. [tup] IMO.

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#42847: Apr 27th 2024 at 7:40:19 PM

Aren't all demons in that show sociopaths though? Like from what I am reading, they are known to regularly commit mass murder and other atrocities against mankind.

Edited by AustinDR on Apr 27th 2024 at 7:51:18 AM

TBmacho22 Since: Jul, 2021 Relationship Status: Holding out for a hero
#42848: Apr 27th 2024 at 7:52:48 PM

Yes they are defined as sociopaths. Why?

MasterN Berserk Button: misusing Berserk Button from Florida- I mean Unova Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
#42849: Apr 27th 2024 at 7:57:19 PM

Because that means demons (the ones within this show, at least) are Always Chaotic Evil and lack agency. It’s why we cut the Goblin Lord from Goblin Slayer; literally his entire race are evil from birth, so they aren’t really choosing to be evil.

Edited by MasterN on Apr 27th 2024 at 7:58:22 AM

One of these days, all of you will accept me as your supreme overlord.
TurlesTheVegan from The Darkest Pit of the Underworld Since: Dec, 2023 Relationship Status: Chocolate!
#42850: Apr 27th 2024 at 8:00:59 PM

That and if they regularly do that, that ratchets the standard up considerably.

You're welcome Storytime, I'll lean towards a [tup] for Osborn.


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