Only way I can think of to improve on the current would involve cropping.
I can live withoit it otherwise.
she/her | TRS needs your help! | Contributor of Trope ReportPull current.
I don't see any punishment. I just see delete.
Same here...it's kinda implied but needs to be stated more openly.
The trope seems to suffer a but from bad trope name or a clear focus. The title and early paragraphs talk about punishment, but the 4th paragraph has a more relaxed definition which current image would meet:
edited 25th May '18 12:43:39 PM by eroock
5 looks like a delete option, not an option that deletes as a punishment.
Check out my fanfiction!edited 25th May '18 12:57:26 PM by eroock
That's more like it.
I can go with 11.
(Annoyed grunt)11
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."11
(he/him) ANIMAL SPORTSCheck out my fanfiction!
I'll go with 17.
(Annoyed grunt)No caption discussion; locking up.
Seriously, if you put an image as illustration that's mostly text, at the very least the text should be big enough to be readable.
This need a much better version of the picture, or to remove it altogether.