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HeraldAlberich from Ohio (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Gonna take a lot to drag me away from you
#1: Jan 13th 2016 at 11:36:04 PM

When quoting a passage of a book containing multiple paragraphs, should one use two backslashes (\\) for a line break, or three (\\\) for a paragraph break? Text-Formatting Rules says to have blank lines separating paragraphs in general, but is nonspecific when it comes to quotes.

I'm thinking specifically of the quotes on Literature.Revenge Of The Sith. For Shatterpoint and Dark Rendezvous, I used the paragraph breaks, but they tend to add a lot of blank space to the examples list. The quotes on Sith don't have them, and I can't decide what looks better.

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#2: Jan 14th 2016 at 4:20:12 AM

Why the hell are entire paragraphs being quoted in the first place, let alone multiple paragraphs?

Yeah, a quote to illustrate the trope use is good, but entire paragraphs of the source material? This wiki isn't TV Quotes.

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#3: Jan 14th 2016 at 4:54:06 AM

Yeah, I am rather dubious that there is ever a good reason to quote that much from a work.

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HeraldAlberich from Ohio (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Gonna take a lot to drag me away from you
#4: Jan 14th 2016 at 7:08:31 AM

In cases where both dialogue and narration are necessary, every new line of dialogue is in its own paragraph. In other cases, some paragraphs are quite short; a few words or less.

Edit: Look, for example, at Honor Before Reason on Revenge of the Sith, or Ironic Echo on Shatterpoint.

edited 14th Jan '16 8:11:12 AM by HeraldAlberich

crazysamaritan NaNo 4328 / 50,000 from Lupin III Since: Apr, 2010
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#5: Jan 14th 2016 at 11:05:44 AM

Having examples gives us a better understanding for what you meant. I used Shatterpoint to fix two examples that were using quotes poorly.

  • Flipping the Bird: There were two lines that weren't important to the example; we only needed a single paragraph.
  • Ironic Echo: Yes, technically three paragraphs, but realistically, it is described as three lines of dialogue. What would be better, for a quote there, is the padawan's initial line, a [...], and then Mace's line.

Quotes are not supposed to operate as examples, they should only be there as features to the example, like a weblink.

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#6: Jan 14th 2016 at 11:29:22 AM

I think most of the time it would be better (and easier) to truncate the quote to a small part of what's relevant, or just not use one at all.

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#7: Jan 14th 2016 at 11:46:53 AM

If there's a really good quote, it should go on the quotes page. The main page should really be more for brief one or two liners.

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HeraldAlberich from Ohio (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Gonna take a lot to drag me away from you
#8: Jan 14th 2016 at 1:19:45 PM

[up][up][up] I thought "three ideas" was important context, but I see your point.

This is really a formatting question. My interest is in making sure the wiki has a consistent look; there are a lot of wrong ways to format quotes, and I'm looking for the right one.

So, given that a multi-paragraph quote is occasionally appropriate, should it have spaces, or not? crazysamaritan, I have your answer; you removed the spaces from the Shatterpoint Ironic Echo quote. Anyone disagree?

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