That's an improvement over the current, for certain.
I think the heart could be better off not being cut off, and the question mark bubble could be more noticeable, but it kinda works.
Check out my fanfiction!Yeah, those are my issues too.
At least the question maek can be enlarged with right image manipulation skill ..which I don't have. XP
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel."Shrunk less" looks a lot better than "enlarged"... what's the original?
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.Can't imagine why the heart is cut, though, but I think it would be recognizable enough.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.I did a quick photoshop job, which just consist of enlarging the question mark.
Does this look any better?
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.Clock is set.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanI'm good with it.
7 is fine with me.
7 is good for me too.
Hehe, sweet! Any caption?
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I got: "To some, not even a shot straight to heart is not enough." Is it a bit wordy?
Or,
"To the oblivious, no gesture is unsubtle enough."
Or,
"What is obvious isn't to the oblivious." for wordplay value.
"The obvious isn't to the oblivious." Same thing, but a bit shorter.
Hmm...Can't think of any concise and witty caption..
edited 16th Mar '15 10:10:48 PM by dRoy
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel."Oh, hey. You dropped something"
Holy crap, I love it.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.7 looks fine for me as well.
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanSweet, I guess that's an enough consensus.
By the way, can a fanwork be used as an example? It's a fancomic of THE iDOLM@STER: Cinderella Girls.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.Why not?
"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard FeynmanJust being sure.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.Since there seems to be enough consensus, the image is uploaded, tagged and potholed.
For caption, are we good with the one in 15?
15 works, although I feel like a parody of the Bon Jovi line "Shot through the heart and you're too late" would work too.
You know, I like that parody too. Even without knowing the song it feels fitting.
I'm a (socialist) professional writer serializing a WWII alternate history webnovel.We already use the song on Love Hurts. I like 15, funny and fitting.
Huh, what do you know, we do.
Okay, I restate my support for 15 for caption, then.
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So the page image..i guess it does fit, but it seems to me that the caption carries more weight. And the situation could be interpreted differently to those who haven't watched series, such as him being confused as to why some random strange woman is kissing her.
I found this image/comic.
I found both aspects of display of affection and the said affection failing to be reciprocated clearer and demonstrative in this picture, without being too busy.
So, what do you guys think?
(Man, first time doing this on my phone and it's a real hassle...)
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