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Deadlock Clock: May 2nd 2013 at 11:59:00 PM
MushroomSamba Since: Dec, 2012
#1: Mar 14th 2013 at 9:11:43 AM

She doesn't look very aloof. Back then when it was named even less appropriately, I got seriously confused. She has a smile on her face and looks friendly. I'm sure we can think of better images than this.

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#2: Mar 14th 2013 at 9:40:14 AM

She looks haughty to me:

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Telcontar In uffish thought from England Since: Feb, 2012
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#3: Mar 14th 2013 at 9:48:05 AM

Yeah, she's smiling. Her mouth isn't her only feature, though; her eye/brows and folded arms help show the trope.

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lexicon Since: May, 2012
#4: Mar 14th 2013 at 10:46:01 AM

If she's smiling it doesn't look like a friendly smile. She has the lowered eyebrows, the folded arms, the long dark hair. You want to get rid of it because of a little smile?

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#5: Mar 14th 2013 at 12:58:49 PM

She's very challenging.

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lu127 Paper Master from 異界 Since: Sep, 2011 Relationship Status: Crazy Cat Lady
#6: Mar 14th 2013 at 1:12:28 PM

That looks more like an arrogant smirk that a nice smile. Seems in line with the trope to me.

edited 14th Mar '13 1:12:37 PM by lu127

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SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#7: Mar 14th 2013 at 1:13:40 PM

Even if it isn't outright malicious - Marcia Overstrand from Septimus Heap, definitively a good guy but also an insufferable jerk, looks kind of the same.

edited 14th Mar '13 1:14:02 PM by SeptimusHeap

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AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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#8: Mar 14th 2013 at 3:50:39 PM

Though on the other hand, it's not exactly aloof. Much too aggressive for that. So it's not the best illustration. But lacking other suggestions...

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Larkmarn Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Hello, I love you
#9: Mar 14th 2013 at 4:45:58 PM

Agreed. Way to aggressive to be aloof.

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#10: Mar 14th 2013 at 5:49:55 PM

That says "sly" to me more than "aloof".

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#11: Mar 14th 2013 at 8:06:23 PM

I disagree. It's the smile that sells aloof. Her arms are crossed in a defensive/aggressive manner, but she's smiling—this, to me, implies she's being haughty.

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#12: Mar 14th 2013 at 8:09:33 PM

She looks like she's going to flaunt her superiority at you and then rub your nose in it. Haughty, yes, aloof, no.

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#14: Mar 14th 2013 at 8:53:54 PM

Maybe haughty and aloof aren't the same thing but how would we see the difference? The picture looks haughty but how would she look different to look more aloof?

AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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#15: Mar 14th 2013 at 9:53:34 PM

Aloof generally means no smile at all. Any smile is inviting, whether it's pleasure or pain. It's a signal to other people at the very base of it. Someone who's aloof would not care to signal her feelings. Doesn't mean won't ever smile, or even rarely, but the signal of it, however you see it, isn't one of aloofness.

If you want to add another thing, that she's looking directly at the viewer also detracts from aloofness. It's an invitation to interaction, especially as it's just not observing or warning you to stay away.

You know, the more I think about it, the more I think it's just misleading and should be pulled, in particular as it's one of those tropes that are easily misused (though I don't know how it is with that since the rename).

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lu127 Paper Master from 異界 Since: Sep, 2011 Relationship Status: Crazy Cat Lady
#16: Mar 15th 2013 at 1:40:45 AM

I don't really think it's that misleading, but here's Lust as an altrernative.

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m8e from Sweden Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#17: Mar 15th 2013 at 9:27:08 AM

Suggestions...

Twilight Suzuka: [1][2][3]

edited 15th Mar '13 9:51:05 AM by m8e

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#18: Mar 15th 2013 at 10:34:57 AM

Lust works. As does the second Suzuka one.

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#19: Mar 15th 2013 at 1:32:33 PM

Lust works, but I think it would be a lateral move at best. I don't think there's enough wrong with the current to justify changing it.

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#20: Mar 15th 2013 at 2:14:32 PM

I see the difference you're saying. She should look emotionally distant but not looking down on people. I don't think any of the suggested pictures show it. I think the current is the best so far. If we do find something better, is there a haughty trope page to put the current?

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#21: Mar 15th 2013 at 6:51:44 PM

Lust is decent. I get determination out of the Suzuka pics more than aloofness.

AnotherDuck No, the other one. from Stockholm Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: Mu
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#22: Mar 15th 2013 at 7:20:18 PM

There's also Lulu.

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#23: Mar 15th 2013 at 7:25:11 PM

Why can't this character be blonde? It is Aloof Girl.

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#24: Mar 15th 2013 at 7:39:52 PM

Good question. The name was changed not too long ago. Why is the aloof girl dark haired? Lulu is good.

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#25: Mar 15th 2013 at 8:23:20 PM

The name was changed? Aloof Girl is red-linking.


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