Caption tweaking: Bathe Her And Bring Her To Me

Alright, apparently people can't get it through their heads that when a page's image and caption are tagged "do not change/remove without starting a new IP thread", it means don't change them without a new thread. One suspension's already been issued that's connected to this page and this issue (not by me, for the record), and I really don't want to see any more handed down.

Now then, I admit that this caption is...unsubtle, and am willing to come up with some other version that works for everyone. I want to stick with the general theme, but everything else we can work with.

edited 1st Jul '12 5:09:05 PM by Willbyr

But the rape joke in the caption is really unnecessary. The trope already has those undertones...joking about it is just not funny. I seriously didn't know that you can't just change it.

And don't you mean suspension? If it's not a punishment it shouldn't be permanent.

edited 1st Jul '12 4:30:55 PM by Mooglewoogle

I thought it was funny, because I am a douche :(

Well, now you know. I wouldn't be too bent about this, but this makes twice now that this caption's been fiddled with despite the tag. The old thread decided to keep the pic; the caption helps get the trope completely across.

Me too.

edited 1st Jul '12 5:08:06 PM by Willbyr

I'm strongly for changing the caption. That being said, I don't have any ideas for one, and I agree that the image needs one.

I think the caption is too wordy, but I don't have any ideas for a replacement. Keep Until Better Caption Suggested.

Not necessarily too wordy, but it doesn't flow well. I actually like MAI 742's first tweak, with a further tweak:

"Dammit. Not only will Baron Eselschwanzed be having his way with me later, but this shampoo's lilac-scented. I hate lilac. Well, at least the water's warm..."

edited 1st Jul '12 9:01:27 PM by Willbyr

what does the baron's name mean?

I'm okay with the caption.

Also, in that last thread, Famous Last Words, Willbyr.

Baron Donkeypenised.

EDIT: Finally that language degree comes in handy. My tutor would be proud.

edited 2nd Jul '12 1:32:20 AM by DoktorvonEurotrash

*snerk* So, so true.

An awesome combination of Bilingual Bonus and Getting Crap Past the Radar, I like it.

edited 2nd Jul '12 7:44:10 PM by rodneyAnonymous

What about something that acknowledges that at least she can make the bathing take longer so she doesn't have to put up with him too soon?

Dude, he's a rapist. He'll probably have the girls drag her into his chamber if she takes too long/

Bump...any other thoughts?

Sounds fine to me. The suggested caption is better than current.

Good enough; it's up and the tag is changed to reflect this thread. Locking up.