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Kraken Since: Jun, 2012
#1: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:24:47 AM

Or rather; "Tell me what you would be interested in reading in a fantastical crime drama centered around the subversion of tropes, systems, "the way things are", and the corruption of law representatives."

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:25:33 AM by Kraken

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#2: Dec 22nd 2011 at 9:58:04 AM

More details would be appreciated, but the concept, as they say, intrrrrrigues me.

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#3: Dec 22nd 2011 at 10:36:30 AM

SHOW ME YOUR MOVES KRAKEN

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#4: Dec 22nd 2011 at 10:51:32 AM

I actually had a somewhat related concept, but it was so Five-Man Band generic that I've dropped the idea until something really interesting comes to mind. I'd like to hear more.

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#5: Dec 22nd 2011 at 10:58:16 AM

[Is disappointed I didn't think of this first]

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#6: Dec 22nd 2011 at 1:01:22 PM

Sounds reminiscent of The Watch arc of Discworld and also the Provost's Dogs subseries by Tamora Pierce. Might look at them for what works, doesn't work, has been done.

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#7: Dec 22nd 2011 at 1:22:16 PM

Kinda makes me think of Myth Adventures, going off of the thread title.

edited 22nd Dec '11 1:22:22 PM by RocketDude

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#8: Dec 22nd 2011 at 2:28:35 PM

I would greatly appreciate a manuscript excerpt, at least, but if you haven't written it yet, go for it.

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#9: Dec 22nd 2011 at 2:41:04 PM

Fantastic Police have Fantastic Criminals.

Which they get to use lethal force on a lot more often because they're more likely to be dangerous even unarmed.

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#10: Dec 22nd 2011 at 2:44:14 PM

This would do well as an absurdity-based comedy, but I doubt you could get a serious story out of it without explaining how any world or multiverse could function with such cross-dimensional interaction.

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#11: Dec 22nd 2011 at 2:45:34 PM

Wait, where does cross-dimensional interaction come into this at all? I thought it was simply police in a fantasy setting.

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#12: Dec 22nd 2011 at 2:57:35 PM

Well, I probably shouldn't assume things, but, either this is some strange world where all manner of science fiction (raygun) and fantasy (giant) things coexist, or it's a multidimensional series of worlds that somehow interact (otherwise, how would you get crime worth having these fantastic police over?).

Either one, in any kind of serious setting, would not function properly, so unless you want a dystopic deconstruction (doubtful), it would be best and most entertainingly done as an absurdity-based comedy.

edited 22nd Dec '11 2:59:49 PM by USAF713

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#13: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:00:51 PM

[up] A deconstruction need not be dystopian in this case; it could be just as funny and absurd as a straight reading of the concept.

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#14: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:06:07 PM

That's true, but I've found that absurdist deconstruction is probably the hardest thing someone can try to do. If you really wanted to, I suppose you could, but...

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#15: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:08:25 PM

I'm pretty sure the title is a joke, not a literal description of the work.

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#16: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:12:13 PM

We don't exactly have a lot to go on otherwise, do we? tongue

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#17: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:13:10 PM

[up][up] I'm aware. I'm just saying...

[up][up][up] Making something absurd and deconstructionist at once really isn't hard. After all, isn't the essence of true deconstruction the examination of the absurdity of the component parts of the idea? I mean, the term was invented by Jacques Derrida, for gods' sakes.

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:13:33 PM by JHM

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#18: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:19:34 PM

It's difficult to do well, unless, I suppose, it's not supposed to be funny... or comprehensible... [lol]

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:20:40 PM by USAF713

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Kraken Since: Jun, 2012
#20: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:36:17 PM

Do you guys seriously want details? I kinda left it vague on what setting I was working on purpose.

edited 22nd Dec '11 3:37:31 PM by Kraken

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#21: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:40:52 PM

It would make our lives easier, yes.

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#23: Dec 22nd 2011 at 3:50:35 PM

@Kraken - I'm interested in knowing too.

In the meantime...

My verse actually uses this concept, although not nearly as fantastic as it can be.

At nearly every corner of the city, there's a pole called The Interfering Pillar. When someone uses magic, the closest IP records the wave and reports it to the Moderators, a subsection of the city's police department.

If the wave signal indicates the usage of magic that was approved by the city hall (if you want to use magic in public, you have to get official approval), it's went unnoticed.

If it was unapproved, however, the identity of the violator is notified to the police and then the city police, which is ALWAYS armed, mobilizes. They are armed with a portable version of ERASER, a machine that shoots off anti-magic wave.

If they can't do the job, which pretty much never happens, they call in The Exorcists. Those are basically an army of mini-Super Soldiers that has taken care of more than several invasisons of {{Cosmic Horror}s.

So basically in my verse,

technology > magic

city police > criminals

In the first and current arc, the city police is trying to track down the drug dealer who is distributing drugs that eventually drives people insane and turn them into a zombie/alien hyrid monster. Because IP system cannot inert magical materials, the police is forced to track down the target in the old fashioned way.

edited 22nd Dec '11 4:01:37 PM by dRoy

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#24: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:05:09 PM

Kinda reminds me of the Watch in the Discworld books. I think they dealt with it just by recruiting as many of the fantasy species as they could - they've got a werewolf, a gnome, a vampire, a golem, lots of trolls.

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#25: Dec 22nd 2011 at 4:07:55 PM

Makes me think of Hellboy...

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