How would a delusional doctor describe "The Perfect Creature"?

After he's taken samples of what he thinks is her DNA, scans of her skeleton, and observed her abilities in tests and live fire trials? In the end, he plans on using her as a sort of Mother for creating the perfect race by injecting her "DNA" into unwitting hospital patients. Yeah, it's that old chestnut.

Lots of gushing. Are you trying to make him obviously insane?

He's delusional. You could get away with anything, really, but I vote for Fluffykins.

I'd rather have him sound more like he's trying to describe a lover in a medically scientific way.

edited 30th Aug '11 9:38:43 PM by SandJosieph

So do that.

Mix Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness involing medical terms with Purple Prose as seen in an old bodice ripper.

Also, how he looks as he says it could be just as important, if the audience actually sees him.

I must admit: I've never seen a bodice ripper.

'BRILLIANT!'

... Oh, you meant a doctor in general.

"FANTASTIC!"

Err, I mean...mix scientific terms with Purple Prose, pretty much those above me said. But I think going from the former to the latter, with his tone changing dramatically, would create an interesting contrast and emphasize his insanity.

edited 30th Aug '11 9:58:31 PM by chihuahua0

What terms would be good ones to focus on?

Exquisite?

I meant medical terms.

Maybe you should go read some literature from horse and dog breeders. The only thing I can think of is something like "flawless conformation" or 'perfect in every proportion".

Maybe, I don't know, efficiency?

By the way, I doubt he'll be able to tell anything spectacular from the DNA.

Well if evolution and biology in that setting are anything resembling that of real life then simple works as well.

Mainly because if your a doctor and you claim to have found "the perfect creature" you will be considered delusional.

Maybe "Pure Breed", "Ark" or "Missing Link"? Some of those have scientific connotations don't they?

Eh, that's all I got.

If he were describing a lover in medical ways, it'd be all stuff like how perfect the lover would be for breeding and how much he wants to breed with this lover. of course, different things and terms apply to a nonhuman creature.

Actually, I think you should do that anyway.