The premise is too... uh, cotton candy for my taste. I better get some real Only Sane Manity
here later on. No real lulz for now, too. Also, the flow is uneasy; Cucumber starts a "but..." in the end of one strip and then you have to wait for the next one to see what he wanted to say. I'd prefer it if she just worked on longer strips, because that would make better sense.
The art is good though, and it's fun to see the occasional derpity Hiimdaisy
expression getting filtered through it.
edited 11th May '11 2:30:40 PM by Litis