Remove Isha's brief appearance.
...But wasn't she needed to cure somebody of a deadly Nurgle plague?
Ignore the entire 'Yukari is a Chaos god' thing.
I think that was made Canon Discontinuity
Make it clear that Isaac is connected to the Harvester, not a generic Great Unclean One.
I actually thought it was pretty clear but whatevs.
Return Zee's torture to the realms of a Gory Discretion Shot Noodle Incident.
Might be a tad difficult, but okay.
Remove any unnecessary padding (such as the entire Caligula fight, for starters, but also the fight with the Umbra, the fights in the Bamboo Forest prior to the Orkz appearance there)
I don't remember 2/3s of that, so I'll have to bring it up when I get there. As for Caligula, I thought it might've been important for some reason, but I forgot.
Remove the Knights Of Vengeance (given their maker was banned for misconduct).
Remove non-essential components of various scenes (for example, no-one but Isaac and Arcturus should be present during the final confrontation between the two of them).
Remove Lana's affection towards Remilia (as it served no ultimate purpose and was squicky).
I thought was supposed to lead into Zee's crush on Remilia. Am I wrong?
Ignore anything that happens in the first ten-twelve pages and replace it with newly-written material serving as an introduction for the major characters.
And finally, if Makuta doesn't mind, return the Tyranids to non-talking gribblies (as it seemed to be a component in their scrappy-dom).
I doubt he'll mind too much.
But how about this: the characters (save Yaname) don't understand them, but we
the audience do. (As in, if we get a chapter focus on them, we read their language as
Low Gothic.) Does that sound okay or stupid and sueish?
Also, don't include the PC-98s. It merely serves to screw up the timeline by trying to shoe-horn them into sequences they were never intended to be in.
Hey didn't say bring them all
in. I only meant like a handful to show that we haven't rendered their era as discontinuity. I probably should have made that note.
edited 18th Feb '11 5:57:51 PM by takashi.0