For a new Fanfic I am writing, I am trying to come up with a character who starts out as The Ace
/ Parody Sue
, and then slowly becomes a Broken Ace
that finds he is quickly losing friends to war.
The setting is Code Geass, and is tied in with the last one I started writing.
The character is Bezide Ascato, a guy who is stated to be the clone of the Big Bad
, has no clone degeneration, is a very pretty, handsome young man
, has pure Blue Eyes
, and is...well, oddly for a Bishonen, very buffed out.
He is a super soldier stated to be good at mostly everything, except speaking Esperanto.
Insofar, he has utterly wasted two characters at once in his first fight ever, and curbstomped their mooks.
I am just concerned I might have made him too sueish. What should I do?
edited 5th Feb '11 10:48:43 PM by NickTheSwing