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Advice on a character:
BFS EnthusiastFor a new Fanfic I am writing, I am trying to come up with a character who starts out as The Ace / Parody Sue, and then slowly becomes a Broken Ace that finds he is quickly losing friends to war. The setting is Code Geass, and is tied in with the last one I started writing. The character is Bezide Ascato, a guy who is stated to be the clone of the Big Bad, has no clone degeneration, is a very pretty, handsome young man, has pure Blue Eyes, and is...well, oddly for a Bishonen, very buffed out. He is a super soldier stated to be good at mostly everything, except speaking Esperanto. Insofar, he has utterly wasted two characters at once in his first fight ever, and curbstomped their mooks. I am just concerned I might have made him too sueish. What should I do?
edited 5th Feb '11 10:48:43 PM by NickTheSwing
o haiConsidering the setting, no, not too sue-ish.
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BFS Enthusiastah, alright, thanks. Any other advice on this character?
I don't have any advice, but I'll echo Edmania's opinion on the character not being a mgary sue.
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