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Les Yay doesn't apply if they actually have a relationship.
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* LesYay: Usagi and Naru get into a bit of this in Chapter 4.
** LesYay nothing, Usagi and Naru have sex with each other in Chapter 5.
*** Let's be honest, all the Senshi have homoerotic subtext with each other and Naru, and it eventually stops being subtext and just plain text.
* TheUntwist: [[Manga/Change123 Matoko Gettou]] was a character that didn't come out of left for those who know about AffectionateParody [[Franchise/KamenRider Kamen Raider]]
** LesYay nothing, Usagi and Naru have sex with each other in Chapter 5.
*** Let's be honest, all the Senshi have homoerotic subtext with each other and Naru, and it eventually stops being subtext and just plain text.
* TheUntwist: [[Manga/Change123 Matoko Gettou]] was a character that didn't come out of left for those who know about AffectionateParody [[Franchise/KamenRider Kamen Raider]]
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** LesYay nothing, Usagi and Naru have sex with each other in Chapter 5.
*** Let's be honest, all the Senshi have homoerotic subtext with each other and Naru, and it eventually stops being subtext and just plain text.
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* AntiVillain: Jadeite, who cares about his youma, does the work of dead youma instead of demanding extra work from the living ones, never steals enough life energy to do permanent damage to his victims, and [[spoiler: is willing to defect to avoid losing any more youma.]] This fits especially well in comparison to Zoisite who doesn't even know his youma's names and collects energy by killing people.
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* OneOfUs: In the same fashion as Ranma and Akane in TKTASI. To wit -
** Ami Mizuno is an {{Otaku}}. She was seen attending the [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva]] marathon in ''TKTASI''. In fact, WordOfGod states that this cameo was what began the discussion that led to this fic being created.
** Mamoru Chiba bought figures of [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Nanoha and Fate]].
** As for Usagi herself, she's a fan of the 30 year old [[Franchise/KamenRider Kamen Raider]] {{Toku}} series, and takes themes of the series by heart when fighting as Sailor Moon.
** Ami Mizuno is an {{Otaku}}. She was seen attending the [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva]] marathon in ''TKTASI''. In fact, WordOfGod states that this cameo was what began the discussion that led to this fic being created.
** Mamoru Chiba bought figures of [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Nanoha and Fate]].
** As for Usagi herself, she's a fan of the 30 year old [[Franchise/KamenRider Kamen Raider]] {{Toku}} series, and takes themes of the series by heart when fighting as Sailor Moon.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: [[Manga/Change123 Matoko Gettou]] was a character that came out of left field for those who know the series she's from. The fact that she is a member of the Lost Dogs was even more so.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: TheUntwist: [[Manga/Change123 Matoko Gettou]] was a character that came didn't come out of left field for those who know the series she's from. The fact that she is a member of the Lost Dogs was even more so.
about AffectionateParody [[Franchise/KamenRider Kamen Raider]]
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* UnexpectedCharacter: [[Change123 [[Manga/Change123 Matoko Gettou]] was a character that came out of left field for those who know the series she's from. The fact that she is a member of the Lost Dogs was even more so.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: [[Change123 Matoko Gettou]] was a character that came out of left field for those who know the series she's from. The fact that she is a member of the Lost Dogs was even more so.
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** Mamoru Chiba bought figures of [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha and Fate]].
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** Mamoru Chiba bought figures of [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha [[Franchise/LyricalNanoha Nanoha and Fate]].
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* OneOfUs: In the same fashion as Ranma and Akane in TKTASI. To wit -
** Ami Mizuno is an {{Otaku}}. She was seen attending the [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva]] marathon in ''TKTASI''. In fact, WordOfGod states that this cameo was what began the discussion that led to this fic being created.
** Mamoru Chiba bought figures of [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha and Fate]].
** As for Usagi herself, she's a fan of the 30 year old [[Franchise/KamenRider Kamen Raider]] {{Toku}} series, and takes themes of the series by heart when fighting as Sailor Moon.
** Ami Mizuno is an {{Otaku}}. She was seen attending the [[Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion Eva]] marathon in ''TKTASI''. In fact, WordOfGod states that this cameo was what began the discussion that led to this fic being created.
** Mamoru Chiba bought figures of [[MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha Nanoha and Fate]].
** As for Usagi herself, she's a fan of the 30 year old [[Franchise/KamenRider Kamen Raider]] {{Toku}} series, and takes themes of the series by heart when fighting as Sailor Moon.
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** LesYay, nothing Usagi and Naru have sex with each other in Chapter 5.
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** LesYay, nothing LesYay nothing, Usagi and Naru have sex with each other in Chapter 5.
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*** Let's be honest, all the Senshi have homoerotic subtext with each other and Naru, and it eventually stops being subtext and just plain text.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[ItMakesSenseinContext G-Money USA]].
** "... I need my sketch pad ''now''."
** The end of Chapter 7, when Usagi tries to use her new communicator to access a porn site... Ami blocked them.
** "... I need my sketch pad ''now''."
** The end of Chapter 7, when Usagi tries to use her new communicator to access a porn site... Ami blocked them.
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** "... I need my sketch pad ''now''."
** The end of Chapter 7, when Usagi tries to use her new communicator to access a porn site... Ami blocked them.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Sailor Moon's first fight...she didn't even need Moon Tiara Action for that one.
** Sailor Mercury's first appearance also qualifies, as she kicks much ass herself.
** whenever a new Senshi arrives, they seem to get a CMOA:
*** Rei roasts Jadeite [[spoiler: though it doesn't stick]]
*** Makoto spoils the Dark Kingdom's bus plan, and then rips the Yakuza a new one.
** Chapter 11 is a crowning chapter worthy of Gurren Lagaan.
** Sailor Mercury's first appearance also qualifies, as she kicks much ass herself.
** whenever a new Senshi arrives, they seem to get a CMOA:
*** Rei roasts Jadeite [[spoiler: though it doesn't stick]]
*** Makoto spoils the Dark Kingdom's bus plan, and then rips the Yakuza a new one.
** Chapter 11 is a crowning chapter worthy of Gurren Lagaan.
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** "... I need my sketch pad ''now''."
** The end of Chapter 7, when Usagi tries to use her new communicator to access a pornsite..site... Ami blocked them.
** The end of Chapter 7, when Usagi tries to use her new communicator to access a porn
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* AntiVillain: Jadeite, who cares about his youma, does the work of dead youma instead of demanding extra work from the living ones, never steals enough life energy to do permanent damage to his victims, and [[spoiler: is willing to defect to avoid losing any more youma.]] This fits especially well in comparison to [[CompleteMonster Zoisite]] who doesn't even know his youma's names and collects energy by killing people.
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* AntiVillain: Jadeite, who cares about his youma, does the work of dead youma instead of demanding extra work from the living ones, never steals enough life energy to do permanent damage to his victims, and [[spoiler: is willing to defect to avoid losing any more youma.]] This fits especially well in comparison to [[CompleteMonster Zoisite]] Zoisite who doesn't even know his youma's names and collects energy by killing people.
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** The end of Chapter 7, when Usagi tries to use her new communicator to access a porn site..Ami blocked them.
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** The end of Chapter 7, when Usagi tries to use her new communicator to access a porn site..Ami blocked them.them.
* LesYay: Usagi and Naru get into a bit of this in Chapter 4.
* LesYay: Usagi and Naru get into a bit of this in Chapter 4.
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*** whenever a new Senshi arrives, they seem to get a CMOA:
* Rei roasts Jadeite [[spoiler: though it doesn't stick]]
* Makoto spoils the Dark Kingdom's bus plan, and then rips the Yakuza a new one.
* Rei roasts Jadeite [[spoiler: though it doesn't stick]]
* Makoto spoils the Dark Kingdom's bus plan, and then rips the Yakuza a new one.
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** Chapter 11 is a crowning chapter worthy of Gurren Lagaan.
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*** whenever a new Senshi arrives, they seem to get a CMOA:
Rei roasts Jadeite [[spoiler: though it doesn't stick]]
Makoto spoils the Dark Ingdom's bus plan, and then rips the Yakuza a new one.
Rei roasts Jadeite [[spoiler: though it doesn't stick]]
Makoto spoils the Dark Ingdom's bus plan, and then rips the Yakuza a new one.