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Per TRS. Bishounen is a Definition-Only fan-speak term used only for Japanese/East-Asian media. Examples or audience reactions are not allowed. Moving In Universe acknowledgements/relevance to Pretty Boy. Removing any ZCE or misuse.
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%% * {{Bishounen}}: Natsukusa Touta, Tsubaki Haru, Ouji Mitsuki, Jouran Hijiri, Yabuki You, etc.
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* DumbBlonde: Momoka is BookDumb so she is constantly taking suplementary lessons and make-up exams. This does not extend other types of intelligence, as she is very insightful in other important matters.
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* DumbBlonde: Momoka is BookDumb so she is constantly taking suplementary supplementary lessons and make-up exams. This does not extend other types of intelligence, as she is very insightful in other important matters.
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** Hijiri wants Sayuri to be with a respectable man. This is while he is ObliviousToLove [[spoiler:and unknowingly has requited feelings for her.]] In fact, a lot of things he does (as established in flashbacks) are with the intention of fulfiling her desires. This places his MagnificentBastard acts in a more magnanimous light.
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** Hijiri wants Sayuri to be with a respectable man. This is while he is ObliviousToLove [[spoiler:and unknowingly has requited feelings for her.]] In fact, a lot of things he does (as established in flashbacks) are with the intention of fulfiling her desires. This places his MagnificentBastard acts in a more magnanimous light.
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%% * {{Meganekko}}: Kanoko, Sachiko (pre-make over) and Yukari.
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Romantic Two Girl Friendship has been renamed to Pseudo Romantic Friendship. All misuse and ZC Es will be deleted and all other examples will be changed to the correct trope.
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* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship:
** Momoka and Kanoko eventually. Since both of them never had REAL friends before, their friendship is quite cute and amusing.
** It's occasionally ventured into the HoYay territory. Even Tsubaki gets insecure over their friendship, and thinks to himself,"Good thing Hanai isn't a guy...I'm saved." THIS after Momo's very suggestive line about, well, wanting to become a guy. One can't help but draw conclusions as to why after reading her next exchange.
--->'''Kanoko:''' ''(referring to Tsubaki's affection)'' If you want something, you have to fight for it, get it?!
--->'''Momoka:''' ...If...I were a guy, I'd surely fight...\\
'''Kanoko''': Eh?\\
'''Momoka:''' ''(smiles in exasperation and then takes Kanoko's hands)'' There's someone I like better than Tsubaki-kun, this one is true!
** Momoka and Kanoko eventually. Since both of them never had REAL friends before, their friendship is quite cute and amusing.
** It's occasionally ventured into the HoYay territory. Even Tsubaki gets insecure over their friendship, and thinks to himself,"Good thing Hanai isn't a guy...I'm saved." THIS after Momo's very suggestive line about, well, wanting to become a guy. One can't help but draw conclusions as to why after reading her next exchange.
--->'''Kanoko:''' ''(referring to Tsubaki's affection)'' If you want something, you have to fight for it, get it?!
--->'''Momoka:''' ...If...I were a guy, I'd surely fight...\\
'''Kanoko''': Eh?\\
'''Momoka:''' ''(smiles in exasperation and then takes Kanoko's hands)'' There's someone I like better than Tsubaki-kun, this one is true!
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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* NotSoDifferent:
** Jouran Hijiri ''thinks'' he has this kind of dynamic with Tsubaki, but that's only because he attributes Naedoko's actions to him. According to Hijiri's ChildhoodFriend Sayuri, they're actually complete opposites. In fact Sayuri and Tsubaki fit this trope better.
** An example from the side-story collection: Shingyouji thinks she has nothing in common with the Computer Club leader, Otabe-san. Unbeknownst to her, and revealed to the readers at the end of her ADayInTheLimelight chapter, she has the same greed for money.
** Jouran Hijiri ''thinks'' he has this kind of dynamic with Tsubaki, but that's only because he attributes Naedoko's actions to him. According to Hijiri's ChildhoodFriend Sayuri, they're actually complete opposites. In fact Sayuri and Tsubaki fit this trope better.
** An example from the side-story collection: Shingyouji thinks she has nothing in common with the Computer Club leader, Otabe-san. Unbeknownst to her, and revealed to the readers at the end of her ADayInTheLimelight chapter, she has the same greed for money.
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* NotSoDifferent:
**NotSoDifferentRemark: Jouran Hijiri ''thinks'' he has this kind of dynamic with Tsubaki, but that's only because he attributes Naedoko's actions to him. According to Hijiri's ChildhoodFriend Sayuri, they're actually complete opposites. In fact Sayuri and Tsubaki fit this trope better.
** An example from the side-story collection: Shingyouji thinks she has nothing in common with the Computer Club leader, Otabe-san. Unbeknownst to her, and revealed to the readers at the end of her ADayInTheLimelight chapter, she has the same greed for money.better.
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** An example from the side-story collection: Shingyouji thinks she has nothing in common with the Computer Club leader, Otabe-san. Unbeknownst to her, and revealed to the readers at the end of her ADayInTheLimelight chapter, she has the same greed for money.
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* HoistByTheirOwnPetard: In ''Koi dano ai dano'' Tsubaki tricks Naedoko into joining the high school newspaper club and joins with her to spend time with her. However, he quickly grows to hate it but can't quit because Naedoko won't quit. Because she's ObliviousToLove she doesn't get that he's only interested in her so he's stuck as a club member.
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* Naodoko goes through this in ''The Secret Notes of Lady Kanoko''. Due to a childhood incident with some female classmates she became jaded with friendship and believed that she was better off on her own as an outside observer. Her experiences as a perpetual transfer student caused an epiphany that she really did want friends and that she was always making them whether she knew it or not.
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%% * BigManOnCampus: Haru Tsubaki. Be it middle-school or high-school he is [[SexyManInstantHarem instantly popular]]. Hijiri Jouran counts too.
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* BookDumb: Hanai and Natsukasa are regularly forced to take makeup lessons after exams and Hanai outright says tests were easier to take when Naedoko was around to help her study. As well, Kakitsubata is once shown to be in the same makeup class as Hanai and Natsukasa.
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%% * ChildhoodFriends:
%% ** Jouran Hijiri and Himeno Sayuri.
%% ** Jouran Hijiri and Himeno Sayuri.
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* ChildhoodFriends:
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%% * DumbBlonde: Momoka. She lives taking suplementary lessons and make-up exams.
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** Kanoko, who preferred being alone and observing people rather than socializing.
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** Kanoko, who preferred being alone and observing people rather than socializing.socializing, because of an incident in her childhood.
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%% * GoodIsNotNice: Kanoko and Tsubaki are not above manipulating and blackmailing people for their plans.
%% * HeroWorshipper: The Nekota twins simply ''adore'' Jouran!
%% * HeroWorshipper: The Nekota twins simply ''adore'' Jouran!
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* HeroWorshipper: The Nekota twins simply ''adore''
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%% * HeroicSelfDeprecation: Downplayed in Naedoko's case. She is fully confident in herself as a person but she does acknowledge that she looks like she doesn't belong within the company she keeps.
%% * HugeSchoolgirl: Sayuri -- but only during elementary school.
%% * HugeSchoolgirl: Sayuri -- but only during elementary school.
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* HugeSchoolgirl: Sayuri
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* EurekaMoment: Naedoko has one when she realises why she is getting so much unwanted attention from 'troublesome' individuals. The reason: [[spoiler:as a transfer student in middle school she never stayed in one place long enough for the 'troublesome' people to notice her.]]
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* EurekaMoment: Naedoko has one in ''Koi dano ai dano'' when she realises why she is getting so much unwanted attention from 'troublesome' individuals. The reason: [[spoiler:as a transfer student in middle school she never stayed in one place long enough for the 'troublesome' people to notice her.]]
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* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: Kanoko is a plain-looking, glasses wearing girl who has no interest in romance, while her friends are the most popular students in the school.
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* CoolKidAndLoserFriendship: Kanoko is a plain-looking, glasses wearing girl who has no interest in romance, while her friends are the most popular students in the school. In most chapters of ''The Secret Notes of Lady Kanoko'' the girls at her school-of-the-week are shocked when Tsubaki shows up to see her.