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* WasItAllALie: Twilight asks if the others didn't really like her and were just using her to get what they wanted.
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->''"I want you to forget about me and leave me alone, until I say otherwise. But I’ll never forgive anyone tries to apologize to me one more time. Have fun at the wedding everypony and enjoy your friendship while it still lasts. I know mine did.”''
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->''"I want you to forget about me and leave me alone, until I say otherwise. But I’ll I'll never forgive anyone tries to apologize to me one more time. Have fun at the wedding everypony and enjoy your friendship while it still lasts. I know mine did.”''"''
* AllTakeAndNoGive: Twilight accuses the others of only caring about what they can get out of their relationship with her, claiming she should have recognized this back when they all wanted tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala.
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* AllTakeAndNoGive: Twilight accuses the others of only caring about what they can get out of their relationship with her, claiming she should have recognized this back when they all wanted tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala.
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Not So Different has been renamed, and it needs to be dewicked/moved
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** Twilight has grown fond of pushing these. In particular is bringing Gilda up to Rainbow Dash and saying they're NotSoDifferent.
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** Twilight has grown fond of pushing these. In particular is bringing Gilda up to Rainbow Dash and [[NotSoDifferentRemark saying they're NotSoDifferent.not so different.]]
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About unexpectedly realistic outcomes. This is expected for this genre.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Unlike the original episode, Twilight does ''not'' instantly forgive everypony for abandoning her at the wedding rehearsal. When someone is deeply hurt by another person's actions, especially if the other person in question was [[EtTuBrute a close friend or family member,]] letting go of their anger can be very difficult, and they may not want to forgive that person for a long time, if ever.
** Similarly, ''no one else'' is happy when they find out about the actions of Princess Celestia, Shining Armor, and the Mane Five. Especially since they allowed a mass invasion to happen.
** Unlike the original episode, Twilight does ''not'' instantly forgive everypony for abandoning her at the wedding rehearsal. When someone is deeply hurt by another person's actions, especially if the other person in question was [[EtTuBrute a close friend or family member,]] letting go of their anger can be very difficult, and they may not want to forgive that person for a long time, if ever.
** Similarly, ''no one else'' is happy when they find out about the actions of Princess Celestia, Shining Armor, and the Mane Five. Especially since they allowed a mass invasion to happen.
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* RejectedApology: See ForWantOfANail.
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* BrokenPedestal: ''A-YEP.''
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* BrokenPedestal: ''A-YEP.'''' And not just Twilight but everypony else is becoming disillusioned by the actions of Shining Armor, the Mane Five, and Princess Celestia.
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** '''Twilight'''.
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** For starters, '''Twilight'''.
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-->"Now this is over, find someone else to be the Wielder of Magic. Because, I now wish to relinquish my position of the Elements of so-called Harmony."
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* AccusationFic: Based off of the first chapter, it appears to be heading this way. At least considering how [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech the majority of Twilight's dialogue]] consists of calling out her friends, her brother, and Celestia.
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* AccusationFic: Based off of the first chapter, it appears to be heading this way. At least considering how [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech the majority of Twilight's dialogue]] consists of calling out her friends, her brother, and Celestia.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: When Twilight explains to them what happened at the wedding rehearsal and that the others didn't try to look for her while she was gone, Twilight Velvet is stunned while Night Light is furious.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: When Twilight explains to them what happened at the wedding rehearsal and that the others didn't try to look for her while she was gone, Twilight Velvet is stunned while Night Light is furious.[[PapaWolf furious]].
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* RealityEnsues: Unlike the original episode, Twilight does ''not'' instantly forgive everypony for abandoning her at the wedding rehearsal. When someone is deeply hurt by another person's actions, especially if the other person in question was [[EtTuBrute a close friend or family member,]] letting go of their anger can be very difficult, and they may not want to forgive that person for a long time, if ever.
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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
** Unlike the original episode, Twilight does ''not'' instantly forgive everypony for abandoning her at the wedding rehearsal. When someone is deeply hurt by another person's actions, especially if the other person in question was [[EtTuBrute a close friend or family member,]] letting go of their anger can be very difficult, and they may not want to forgive that person for a long time, ifever.ever.
** Similarly, ''no one else'' is happy when they find out about the actions of Princess Celestia, Shining Armor, and the Mane Five. Especially since they allowed a mass invasion to happen.
** Unlike the original episode, Twilight does ''not'' instantly forgive everypony for abandoning her at the wedding rehearsal. When someone is deeply hurt by another person's actions, especially if the other person in question was [[EtTuBrute a close friend or family member,]] letting go of their anger can be very difficult, and they may not want to forgive that person for a long time, if
** Similarly, ''no one else'' is happy when they find out about the actions of Princess Celestia, Shining Armor, and the Mane Five. Especially since they allowed a mass invasion to happen.
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-->'''Cadence:''' "I can't, Twilight's too heartbroken to be fixed by my spell. I can only restore her heart when she wants to be loved by all of you again. I’m afraid at this state, she wants nothing to do with us."
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-->'''Cadence:''' "I I can't, Twilight's too heartbroken to be fixed by my spell. I can only restore her heart when she wants to be loved by all of you again. I’m afraid at this state, she wants nothing to do with us."
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* RejectedApology
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* RejectedApology RejectedApology: See ForWantOfANail.
* RunningGag: An unintended one brought about due to [[TroubledProduction issues]]: following the second chapter, every following chapter thus far has been posted on New Years Eve [[LongRunner since 2014]].
* RunningGag: An unintended one brought about due to [[TroubledProduction issues]]: following the second chapter, every following chapter thus far has been posted on New Years Eve [[LongRunner since 2014]].
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Not a trope.
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* ItsAllYourFault: Twilight says this to Applejack after Applejack apologizes.
--> '''Applejack''': Sorry Twi, we should have listened to you.
--> '''Twilight''': Yeah, you should have. Equestria is doomed now, thanks to all of you.
--> '''Applejack''': Sorry Twi, we should have listened to you.
--> '''Twilight''': Yeah, you should have. Equestria is doomed now, thanks to all of you.
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Natter and ZCE
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*** Then again, this may kind of be the point.
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*** Then again, this may kind of be the point.
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***Then again, this may kind of be the point.
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* ItsAllYourFault: Twilight says this to Applejack after Applejack apologizes.
--> '''Applejack''': Sorry Twi, we should have listened to you.
--> '''Twilight''': Yeah, you should have. Equestria is doomed now, thanks to all of you.
--> '''Applejack''': Sorry Twi, we should have listened to you.
--> '''Twilight''': Yeah, you should have. Equestria is doomed now, thanks to all of you.
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* ArmorPiercingResponseArmorPiercingResponse:
