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Happy Halloween!
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* WrenchWench: Applejack. And to AJ's surprise, Twilight.
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* WrenchWench: Applejack. And to AJ's surprise, Twilight.Twilight.
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** Twilight after [[spoiler: her time in prison where she exercised a lot to get in shape for her escape and journey to the moon]]. She is complimented by several mares for her buff "warrior's physique".
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** Later in the story Twilight after [[spoiler: her time exercises a lot while in prison where she exercised a lot to get in shape for her escape and journey to the moon]]. She is complimented by several mares for her buff "warrior's physique".
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** Rarity literally starts drooling when she sees Applejack's muscular body.
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** Rarity literally starts drooling when she first sees Applejack's muscular body.
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* AmazonianBeauty: Twilight after [[spoiler: her time in prison where she exercised a lot to get in shape for her escape and journey to the moon]]. She is complimented by several mares for her buff "warrior's physique".
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* AmazonianBeauty: AmazonianBeauty:
** Rarity literally starts drooling when she sees Applejack's muscular body.
** Twilight after [[spoiler: her time in prison where she exercised a lot to get in shape for her escape and journey to the moon]]. She is complimented by several mares for her buff "warrior's physique".
** Rarity literally starts drooling when she sees Applejack's muscular body.
** Twilight after [[spoiler: her time in prison where she exercised a lot to get in shape for her escape and journey to the moon]]. She is complimented by several mares for her buff "warrior's physique".
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[[caption-width-right:350:Cover art by [[https://www.deviantart.com/harwicks-art Harwick]]]]
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* AmazonianBeauty: Twilight after [[spoiler: her time in prison where she exercised a lot to get in shape for her escape and journey to the moon]]. She is complimented by several mares for her buff "warrior's physique".
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/247031/the-mare-who-once-lived-on-the-moon The Mare Who Once Lived on the Moon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic AlternateUniverse fic focusing on a {{Steampunk}} version of Equestria, where Twilight Sparkle has discovered something major. Oddly, the fic was accidentally released prematurely; the author, [=MrNumbers=], meant to publish it when it was completed.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/247031/the-mare-who-once-lived-on-the-moon The Mare Who Once Lived on the Moon]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' AlternateUniverse fic focusing on a {{Steampunk}} version of Equestria, where Twilight Sparkle has discovered something major. Oddly, the fic was accidentally released prematurely; the author, [=MrNumbers=], meant to publish it when it was completed.
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* MustHaveNicotine: Rarity is a bit of a compulsive smoker, though she does her best to avoid it in polite company. Except for [[CigarFuseLighting that one time]] in [[BurningTheFlag the Princess' throne room....]]
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* MustHaveNicotine: Rarity is a bit of a compulsive smoker, though she does her best to avoid it in polite company. Except for [[CigarFuseLighting that one time]] in [[BurningTheFlag the Princess' throne room....]]room…]]
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* TheFagin: [[spoiler:Fluttershy, for a group of foals. She still deeply cares for them, as best as her means can. She just ... expands their means as much as possible too.]]
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* TheFagin: [[spoiler:Fluttershy, for a group of foals. She still deeply cares for them, as best as her means can. She just ... expands just…expands their means as much as possible too.]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/247031/the-mare-who-once-lived-on-the-moon The Mare Who Once Lived on the Moon]]'' is a ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic AlternateUniverse fic focusing on a {{Steampunk}} version of Equestria, where Twilight Sparkle has discovered something major. Oddly, the fic was accidentally released prematurely; the author, [=MrNumbers=], meant to publish it when it was completed.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/247031/the-mare-who-once-lived-on-the-moon The Mare Who Once Lived on the Moon]]'' is a ''MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic AlternateUniverse fic focusing on a {{Steampunk}} version of Equestria, where Twilight Sparkle has discovered something major. Oddly, the fic was accidentally released prematurely; the author, [=MrNumbers=], meant to publish it when it was completed.
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* [[spoiler: ReentryScare]]: [[spoiler: Coming back from the moon is pretty rough.]]
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* [[spoiler: ReentryScare]]: ReentryScare: [[spoiler: Coming back from the moon is pretty rough.]]
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* [[TalkToTheFist Talk To The Hoof]]: Rainbow Dash, after Twilight delivers a nasty speech to Bright Spark about what he'd been doing with Pinkie Pie's legacy. Spark gets as far as 'I--'.
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* [[TalkToTheFist Talk To The Hoof]]: TalkToTheFist: Rainbow Dash, after Twilight delivers a nasty speech to Bright Spark about what he'd been doing with Pinkie Pie's legacy. Spark gets as far as 'I--'.
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-->'''Dash:''' [[spoiler: The stars look different from the shadow of the moon, Twilight. You can see all of them. It’s not like... you look up at the sky, and you think maybe we’re just a pearl in a big ocean? But it’s more like... we’re the grains of sand on a world that’s a grain of sand for a sun that’s a grain of sand on a beach that goes on ''forever''.]]
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-->'''Dash:''' [[spoiler: The stars look different from the shadow of the moon, Twilight. You can see all of them. It’s It's not like... you look up at the sky, and you think maybe we’re we're just a pearl in a big ocean? But it’s it's more like... we’re we're the grains of sand on a world that’s that's a grain of sand for a sun that’s that's a grain of sand on a beach that goes on ''forever''.]]
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* NotHisSled: At first, it just seems like a drawn-out, steampunk retelling of the series' first episode. Then, it turns out the Mare on the Moon [[spoiler:is not, and has never been Nightmare Moon - the Nightmare has, for the entire thousand years, been inside ''Celestia'']].
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* PainfulRhyme: Twilight's attempts at poetry are so terrible that even characters who don't know anything about poetry can't stand them. Luna's are significantly more impressive, and [[spoiler:trying to make something wonderful enough to send back is what drives Twilight to seek out Rarity.]]
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* TheGreatEscape: [[spoiler: With bombs!]]
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* TheGreatEscape: GreatEscape: [[spoiler: With bombs!]]
