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* LockedIntoStrangeness: Twilight gets a streak of white in her mane after [[spoiler:Branka almost turns her into a golem.]]
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* SkunkStripe: Twilight gets a streak of white in her mane after [[spoiler:Branka almost turns her into a golem.]]
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by [=OmegaPony11=] is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity in Morrigan's role, Fluttershy inLeliana's role, Pinkie Pie in Sten's role, Rainbow Dash in Zevran's role, Trixie in Wynne's role, Spike in Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by [=OmegaPony11=] is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity in Morrigan's role, Fluttershy inLeliana's in Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie in Sten's role, Rainbow Dash in Zevran's role, Trixie in Wynne's role, Spike in Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role, Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 [=OmegaPony11=] is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with in Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's inLeliana's role, Pinkie Pie with in Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with in Zevran's role, Trixie with Wynn's in Wynne's role, Spike with in Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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* MythologyGag:
** Rainbow Dash complains that the health poultices [[TastesLikeFeet tastes like "bleagh"]]. Twilight points out that poultices are meant to be applied to wounds rather than drank, as is the case in ''Dragon Age: Origins''.
** Rainbow Dash complains that the health poultices [[TastesLikeFeet tastes like "bleagh"]]. Twilight points out that poultices are meant to be applied to wounds rather than drank, as is the case in ''Dragon Age: Origins''.
* MythologyGag: Rainbow Dash complains that the health poultices [[TastesLikeFeet tastes like "bleagh"]]. Twilight points out that poultices are meant to be applied to wounds rather than consumed, as is the case in ''Dragon Age: Origins''.
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* TragicMonster: The High Dragon living in the resting place of Luna's mane. It didn't even seem that bad, it only attacked them because it was driven mad by Lockjaw's horn.
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* TragicMonster: The High Dragon living in the resting place of Luna's mane. It didn't even seem that bad, bad; it only attacked them because it was driven mad by Lockjaw's horn.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. role, Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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* BadassPrincess: Princess Luna, according to the Diamond Dogs' version of the Chant. Luna descended from Canterlot and fought the Old Ones. There are six of them and they're all ''dragons''. They only ever came to stalemates until Luna tapped into the darker powers of the moon and became Nightmare Moon, after which she was able to kill five of them. Only five, because [[spoiler:Asha'bellanar]] ran and hid.
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* TheTimeOfMyths: Princess Luna, according to the Diamond Dogs' version of the Chant, descended from Canterlot and fought the Old Ones. There are six of them and they're all ''dragons''. They only ever came to stalemates until Luna tapped into the darker powers of the moon and became Nightmare Moon, after which she was able to kill five of them. Only five, because [[spoiler:Asha'bellanar]] ran and hid.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 is a ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 is a VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins / WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with the Mabari's role and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins]]'' by OmegaPony11 is a VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins ''VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins'' / WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with the Mabari's role Dog's role, and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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* AlreadyDoneForYou: Artistic Finish, depicted here as Photo Finish taking the role of Marjorlaine, is not a boss in the main story as Fluttershy kills her at the end of the ''Fluttershy's Song'' interlude.
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* AlreadyDoneForYou: Artistic Finish, depicted here as Photo Finish taking the role of Marjorlaine, is not Marjolaine, isn't a boss in the main story story, as Fluttershy kills her at the end of the ''Fluttershy's Song'' interlude.
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* BadassPrincess: Princess Luna according to the Diamond Dogs' version of the Chant. Luna descended from Canterlot and fought the Old Ones. There are six of them and they're all ''dragons''. They only ever came to stalemates until Luna tapped into the darker powers of the moon and became Nightmare Moon, after which she was able to kill five of them. Only five, because [[spoiler:Asha'bellanar]] ran and hid.
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* BadassPrincess: Princess Luna Luna, according to the Diamond Dogs' version of the Chant. Luna descended from Canterlot and fought the Old Ones. There are six of them and they're all ''dragons''. They only ever came to stalemates until Luna tapped into the darker powers of the moon and became Nightmare Moon, after which she was able to kill five of them. Only five, because [[spoiler:Asha'bellanar]] ran and hid.
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* DueToTheDead: Oghren does this twice, with [[spoiler:Ruck after Twilight {{mercy kill}}s him]] and after he kills [[spoiler:Branka when she shows she won't be deterred from the Storm Forge.]] Both times involves burying them in stone and making sure the makeshift tombs solidly set.
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* DueToTheDead: Oghren does this twice, with [[spoiler:Ruck after Twilight {{mercy kill}}s him]] and after he kills [[spoiler:Branka when she shows that she won't be deterred from the Storm Forge.]] Both times involves burying them in stone and making sure the makeshift tombs solidly set.
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* FightingYourFriend: At the Storm Forge[[note]]Anvil of the Void[[/note]], the group finds themselves having to fight Shale and Cairidin along with all the other golems when Branka takes control of them.
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* FightingYourFriend: At the Storm Forge[[note]]Anvil of the Void[[/note]], the group finds themselves having to fight Shale and Cairidin Caridin along with all the other golems when Branka takes control of them.
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* {{Knighting}}: Applejack knights Spike some time after she reveals she's a royal bastard.
* MagicAntidote: The Mane of Stars, taking the place of Andraste's Ashes. So far, it's healed [[spoiler:Trixie's crippled leg, Macintosh's poisoning, Apple Bloom's possession and Rarity's taint.]]
* MagicAntidote: The Mane of Stars, taking the place of Andraste's Ashes. So far, it's healed [[spoiler:Trixie's crippled leg, Macintosh's poisoning, Apple Bloom's possession and Rarity's taint.]]
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* {{Knighting}}: Applejack knights Spike some time after she reveals that she's a royal bastard.
* MagicAntidote: The Mane of Stars, taking the place of Andraste's Ashes. So far, it's healed [[spoiler:Trixie's crippled leg, Big Macintosh's poisoning, Apple Bloom'spossession possession, and Rarity's taint.]]
* MagicAntidote: The Mane of Stars, taking the place of Andraste's Ashes. So far, it's healed [[spoiler:Trixie's crippled leg, Big Macintosh's poisoning, Apple Bloom's
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* MidSeasonUpgrade: Happens thrice: The first is when the group replaces their worn out starter equipment with better stuff from Red Apple[[note]]Redcliffe Castle[[/note]]'s armory. After that stuff gets thrashed, they find some enchanted items from the high dragon's hoard in the Haven stand-in. And after that, Cairidin gives them some new gear to help them along in their fight against the Blight.
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* MidSeasonUpgrade: Happens thrice: The first is when the group replaces their worn out starter equipment with better stuff from Red Apple[[note]]Redcliffe Castle[[/note]]'s armory. After that stuff gets thrashed, they find some enchanted items from the high dragon's hoard in the Haven stand-in. And after that, Cairidin Caridin gives them some new gear to help them along in their fight against the Blight.
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* NoSell: When Branka takes control of all of the golems, including Shale and Cairidin, the group finds that their weapons only barely scratch them. In the same fight, Twilight gets her tail handed to her by Branka, who is resistant to magic by default as a donkey, and that is booster further by the lyrium she consumed while down there.
* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[note]]the broodmother[[/note]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarity instead]], this causes Spike to go through the above-mentioned moment.
* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[note]]the broodmother[[/note]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarity instead]], this causes Spike to go through the above-mentioned moment.
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* NoSell: When Branka takes control of all of the golems, including Shale and Cairidin, Caridin, the group finds that their weapons only barely scratch them. In the same fight, Twilight gets her tail handed to her by Branka, who is who's resistant to magic by default as a donkey, and that is booster that's boosted further by the lyrium she consumed while down there.
* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[note]]the broodmother[[/note]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarityinstead]], instead]]; this causes Spike to go through the above-mentioned moment.
* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[note]]the broodmother[[/note]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarity
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* TakeAThirdOption: Instead of crowning either Bhelen or Harrowmount, as the group cannot stand to ally with either of them, Shale and Oghren crowns the Senate's Speaker, Cranky Doodle, as the new king of Orzamule.
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* TakeAThirdOption: Instead of crowning either Bhelen or Harrowmount, as the group cannot can't stand to ally with either of them, Shale and Oghren crowns the Senate's Speaker, Cranky Doodle, as the new king of Orzamule.
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* TragicMonster: The High Dragon living in the resting place of Luna's mane. It didn't even seem that bad, it only attacked them because it was driven mad by Lockjaw's horn.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Among other, more serious crimes, Fluttershy is also charged with loitering.
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: The end of this version of the Gauntlet requires someone be sacrificed on a pyre. [[spoiler:Rarity volunteers at first, citing the possibility of what Flemeth would do to her as her reason for preferring to die, before Applejack stops her and gets on the pyre. After she burns, Hauberk[[note]]The Guardian[[/note]] reveals it was a SecretTestOfCharacter and resurrects her.]]
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* CompositeCharacter: Pinkie Pie here blends both [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sten]] and [[VideoGame/DragonAgeII Hawke]]. She's the one found in the cage outside the village of Ponyring[[hottip:*:Lothering]], but she's actually a resident guardspony there whose family fled to Geldwall[[hottip:*:Kirkwall]].
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* CompositeCharacter: Pinkie Pie here blends both [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sten]] and [[VideoGame/DragonAgeII Hawke]]. She's the one found in the cage outside the village of Ponyring[[hottip:*:Lothering]], Ponyring[[note]]Lothering[[/note]], but she's actually a resident guardspony there whose family fled to Geldwall[[hottip:*:Kirkwall]].Geldwall[[note]]Kirkwall[[/note]].
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* {{Egopolis}}: Orzamule was founded by Orza, who was a mule. [[ShownTheirWork A guard explains that, as he was a mule, there were no successors]][[hottip:*:Most mules are infertile.]], leading to a hell of a SuccessionCrisis after the kingdom's founding.
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* {{Egopolis}}: Orzamule was founded by Orza, who was a mule. [[ShownTheirWork A guard explains that, as he was a mule, there were no successors]][[hottip:*:Most successors]][[note]]Most mules are infertile.]], [[/note]], leading to a hell of a SuccessionCrisis after the kingdom's founding.
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* FightingYourFriend: At the Storm Forge[[hottip:*:Anvil of the Void]], the group finds themselves having to fight Shale and Cairidin along with all the other golems when Branka takes control of them.
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* FightingYourFriend: At the Storm Forge[[hottip:*:Anvil Forge[[note]]Anvil of the Void]], Void[[/note]], the group finds themselves having to fight Shale and Cairidin along with all the other golems when Branka takes control of them.
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: The end of this version of the Gauntlet requires someone be sacrificed on a pyre. [[spoiler:Rarity volunteers at first, citing the possibility of what Flemeth would do to her as her reason for preferring to die, before Applejack stops her and gets on the pyre. After she burns, Hauberk[[hottip:*:The Guardian]] reveals it was a SecretTestOfCharacter and resurrects her.]]
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* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: The end of this version of the Gauntlet requires someone be sacrificed on a pyre. [[spoiler:Rarity volunteers at first, citing the possibility of what Flemeth would do to her as her reason for preferring to die, before Applejack stops her and gets on the pyre. After she burns, Hauberk[[hottip:*:The Guardian]] Hauberk[[note]]The Guardian[[/note]] reveals it was a SecretTestOfCharacter and resurrects her.]]
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* MercyKill: According to the Chant, Luna was killed by a Unicorn Imperium[[hottip:*:Tevinter Imperium]] pony who took pity at her plight when she was [[BurnTheWitch being burned at the stake]]. This contributed to his becoming the first convert from worshiping the Old Ones to Celestia and Luna.
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* MercyKill: According to the Chant, Luna was killed by a Unicorn Imperium[[hottip:*:Tevinter Imperium]] Imperium[[note]]Tevinter Imperium[[/note]] pony who took pity at her plight when she was [[BurnTheWitch being burned at the stake]]. This contributed to his becoming the first convert from worshiping the Old Ones to Celestia and Luna.
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* MidSeasonUpgrade: Happens thrice: The first is when the group replaces their worn out starter equipment with better stuff from Red Apple[[hottip:*:Redcliffe Castle]]'s armory. After that stuff gets thrashed, they find some enchanted items from the high dragon's hoard in the Haven stand-in. And after that, Cairidin gives them some new gear to help them along in their fight against the Blight.
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* MidSeasonUpgrade: Happens thrice: The first is when the group replaces their worn out starter equipment with better stuff from Red Apple[[hottip:*:Redcliffe Castle]]'s Apple[[note]]Redcliffe Castle[[/note]]'s armory. After that stuff gets thrashed, they find some enchanted items from the high dragon's hoard in the Haven stand-in. And after that, Cairidin gives them some new gear to help them along in their fight against the Blight.
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Spike goes through this when he hears about what happens to Grey Wardens, particularly the shortened life-span that ends with dying either of the taint or of fighting in the [[hottip:*:Deep Roads]]. This is because he pushed for Twilight to join back in Unicorn Tower[[hottip:*:The Circle of Magi]] when Duncan was there for recruitment.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: After Arl Macintosh[[hottip:*:taking the role of Arl Eamon]] is poisoned by a maleficar sent by Arl Maim[[hottip:*:Arl Howe]], the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to help him by giving Apple Bloom a false horn so that she and Sweetie Bell can heal Big Mac. [[spoiler:This results in Apple Bloom's possession and the town of Appleloosa[[hottip:*:taking the place of Redcliffe Village]] being besieged by zombies.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: After Arl Macintosh[[hottip:*:taking the role of Arl Eamon]] is poisoned by a maleficar sent by Arl Maim[[hottip:*:Arl Howe]], the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to help him by giving Apple Bloom a false horn so that she and Sweetie Bell can heal Big Mac. [[spoiler:This results in Apple Bloom's possession and the town of Appleloosa[[hottip:*:taking the place of Redcliffe Village]] being besieged by zombies.]]
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Spike goes through this when he hears about what happens to Grey Wardens, particularly the shortened life-span that ends with dying either of the taint or of fighting in the [[hottip:*:Deep Roads]]. [[note]]Deep Roads[[/note]]. This is because he pushed for Twilight to join back in Unicorn Tower[[hottip:*:The Tower[[note]]The Circle of Magi]] Magi[[/note]] when Duncan was there for recruitment.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: After ArlMacintosh[[hottip:*:taking Macintosh[[note]]taking the role of Arl Eamon]] Eamon[[/note]] is poisoned by a maleficar sent by Arl Maim[[hottip:*:Arl Howe]], Maim[[note]]Arl Howe[[/note]], the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to help him by giving Apple Bloom a false horn so that she and Sweetie Bell can heal Big Mac. [[spoiler:This results in Apple Bloom's possession and the town of Appleloosa[[hottip:*:taking Appleloosa[[note]]taking the place of Redcliffe Village]] Village[[/note]] being besieged by zombies.]]
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* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[hottip:*:the broodmother]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarity instead]], this causes Spike to go through the above-mentioned moment.
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* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[hottip:*:the broodmother]] broodmare[[note]]the broodmother[[/note]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarity instead]], this causes Spike to go through the above-mentioned moment.
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''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins'' by OmegaPony11 is a VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins / WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with the Mabari's role and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins'' by OmegaPony11 is a VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins / WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role, Spike with the Mabari's role and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins'' by OmegaPony11 is a VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins / WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role. Trixie with Wynn's role, Spike with the Mabari's role and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
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* DueToTheDead: Oghren does this twice, with [[spoiler:Ruck after Twilight {{mercy kill}}s him]] and after he kills [[spoiler:Branka.]]
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* DueToTheDead: Oghren does this twice, with [[spoiler:Ruck after Twilight {{mercy kill}}s him]] and after he kills [[spoiler:Branka.]][[spoiler:Branka when she shows she won't be deterred from the Storm Forge.]] Both times involves burying them in stone and making sure the makeshift tombs solidly set.
* EyeScream: How they kill the high dragon. It involves Applejack shoving a sword into its eye followed up by Twilight and Trixie shooting super-charged magic lightning at it.
* LikeYouWouldReallyDoIt: The end of this version of the Gauntlet requires someone be sacrificed on a pyre. [[spoiler:Rarity volunteers at first, citing the possibility of what Flemeth would do to her as her reason for preferring to die, before Applejack stops her and gets on the pyre. After she burns, Hauberk[[hottip:*:The Guardian]] reveals it was a SecretTestOfCharacter and resurrects her.]]
* MagicKnight: Twilight sets out to be this after her staff breaks when fighting Branka and finds herself at a disadvantage against magically resistant fighter-type opponents like donkeys.
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* MercyKill: According to the Chant, Luna was killed by a Unicorn Imperium[[hottip:*:Tevinter Imperium]] pony who became took pity at her first convert plight when she was [[BurnTheWitch being burned at the stake]]. stake]]. This contributed to his becoming the first convert from worshiping the Old Ones to Celestia and Luna.
** One we actually see is when [[spoiler:Twilight kills Ruck, at the latter's insistence.]]
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* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler:Twister the Dalish Pegasus]] from ''Fluttershy's Song''. [[spoiler:Dies after taking out Artistic Finish's goons, but it's revealed that she's actually a Seeker who was dying of a disease and chose to risk saving Fluttershy and getting her to Equestria rather than die in a bed.]]
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* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler:Twister the Dalish Pegasus]] from ''Fluttershy's Song''. [[spoiler:Dies after taking out Artistic Finish's goons, but it's revealed that she's actually a Seeker who was dying of a disease and chose to risk saving to take the mission of bringing Fluttershy and getting her to the convent bordering Equestria rather than die in a bed.and, on the way, meet death on her own terms.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: After Arl Macintosh[[hottip:*:taking the role of Arl Eamon]] is poisoned by a maleficar sent by Arl Maim[[hottip:*:Arl Howe]], the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to help him by giving Apple Bloom a false horn so that she and Sweetie Bell can heal Big Mac. [[spoiler:This results in Apple Bloom's possession and the town of Appleloosa[[hottip*:taking the place of Redcliffe Village]] being besieged by zombies.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: After Arl Macintosh[[hottip:*:taking the role of Arl Eamon]] is poisoned by a maleficar sent by Arl Maim[[hottip:*:Arl Howe]], the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to help him by giving Apple Bloom a false horn so that she and Sweetie Bell can heal Big Mac. [[spoiler:This results in Apple Bloom's possession and the town of Appleloosa[[hottip*:taking Appleloosa[[hottip:*:taking the place of Redcliffe Village]] being besieged by zombies.]]
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* AlreadyDoneForYou: Artistic Finish, depicted here as Photo Finish taking the role of Marjorlaine, is not a boss in the main story as Fluttershy kills her at the end of the ''Fluttershy's Song'' interlude.
* {{Egopolis}}: Orzamule was founded by Orza, who was a mule. [[ShownTheirWork A guard explains that, as he was a mule, there were no successors]][[hottip:*:Most mules are infertile.]], leading to a hell of a SuccessionCrisis after the kingdom's founding.
* {{Knighting}}: Applejack knights Spike some time after she reveals she's a royal bastard.
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* NoSell: When Branka takes control of all of the golems, including Shale and Cairidin, the group finds that their weapons only barely scratch them. In the same fight, Twilight gets her tail handed to her by Branka, who is resistant to magic by default as a donkey donkey, and from that is booster further by the lyrium she consumed while down there.
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* TakeAThirdOption: Instead of crowning either Bhelen or Harrowmount, as the group cannot stand to ally with either of them, Shale and Oghren crowns the Senate's Speaker, Cranky Doodle, as the new king of Orzamule.
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The Ponyspawn have invaded Equestria, and it is up to the newest addition to the Grey Wardens, Twilight Sparkle, to find the means to drive them back! With her friends and allies at her side, can Twilight defeat the evil tide before all of Equestria is devoured?
''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins'' by OmegaPony11 is a VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins / WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role, Spike with the Mabari's role and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
NeedsMoreLove.
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!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BadassPrincess: Princess Luna according to the Diamond Dogs' version of the Chant. Luna descended from Canterlot and fought the Old Ones. There are six of them and they're all ''dragons''. They only ever came to stalemates until Luna tapped into the darker powers of the moon and became Nightmare Moon, after which she was able to kill five of them. Only five, because [[spoiler:Asha'bellanar]] ran and hid.
* CantHoldHerLiquor: Twilight passes out from one gulp of Oghren's booze.
* CompositeCharacter: Pinkie Pie here blends both [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sten]] and [[VideoGame/DragonAgeII Hawke]]. She's the one found in the cage outside the village of Ponyring[[hottip:*:Lothering]], but she's actually a resident guardspony there whose family fled to Geldwall[[hottip:*:Kirkwall]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Hespith killed herself by hanging rather than face becoming a broodmare.
* DueToTheDead: Oghren does this twice, with [[spoiler:Ruck after Twilight {{mercy kill}}s him]] and after he kills [[spoiler:Branka.]]
* FightingYourFriend: At the Storm Forge[[hottip:*:Anvil of the Void]], the group finds themselves having to fight Shale and Cairidin along with all the other golems when Branka takes control of them.
* FlamingSword: Spike has one.
* HealingShiv: With her piece of the Mane of Stars, Pinkie makes a healing ''grenade''.
* MagicAntidote: The Mane of Stars, taking the place of Andraste's Ashes. So far, it's healed [[spoiler:Trixie's crippled leg, Macintosh's poisoning, Apple Bloom's possession and Rarity's taint.]]
* TheMagnificent: We have two: The '''Great''' and '''Powerful''' Trixie and The '''Mighty''' and '''Invincible''' Shale.
* MercyKill: According to the Chant, Luna was killed by a Unicorn Imperium[[hottip:*:Tevinter Imperium]] pony who became her first convert when she was [[BurnTheWitch being burned at the stake]]. One we actually see is when [[spoiler:Twilight kills Ruck, at the latter's insistence.]]
* MidSeasonUpgrade: Happens thrice: The first is when the group replaces their worn out starter equipment with better stuff from Red Apple[[hottip:*:Redcliffe Castle]]'s armory. After that stuff gets thrashed, they find some enchanted items from the high dragon's hoard in the Haven stand-in. And after that, Cairidin gives them some new gear to help them along in their fight against the Blight.
* MilesGloriosus: King Blueblood, unlike King Cailan, is something of a coward for all of his bluster.
* MythologyGag:
** Rainbow Dash complains that the health poultices [[TastesLikeFeet tastes like "bleagh"]]. Twilight points out that poultices are meant to be applied to wounds rather than drank, as is the case in ''Dragon Age: Origins''.
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Spike goes through this when he hears about what happens to Grey Wardens, particularly the shortened life-span that ends with dying either of the taint or of fighting in the [[hottip:*:Deep Roads]]. This is because he pushed for Twilight to join back in Unicorn Tower[[hottip:*:The Circle of Magi]] when Duncan was there for recruitment.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: After Arl Macintosh[[hottip:*:taking the role of Arl Eamon]] is poisoned by a maleficar sent by Arl Maim[[hottip:*:Arl Howe]], the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to help him by giving Apple Bloom a false horn so that she and Sweetie Bell can heal Big Mac. [[spoiler:This results in Apple Bloom's possession and the town of Appleloosa[[hottip*:taking the place of Redcliffe Village]] being besieged by zombies.]]
* NoSell: When Branka takes control of all of the golems, including Shale and Cairidin, the group finds that their weapons only barely scratch them. In the same fight, Twilight gets her tail handed to her by Branka, who is resistant to magic by default as a donkey and from the lyrium she consumed while down there.
* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[hottip:*:the broodmother]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarity instead]], this causes Spike to go through the above-mentioned moment.
* SkunkStripe: Twilight gets a streak of white in her mane after [[spoiler:Branka almost turns her into a golem.]]
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler:Twister the Dalish Pegasus]] from ''Fluttershy's Song''. [[Spoiler:Dies after taking out Artistic Finish's goons, but it's revealed that she's actually a Seeker who was dying of a disease and chose to risk saving Fluttershy and getting her to Equestria rather than die in a bed.]]
* ThrowDownTheBomblet: Pinkie Pie's weapons of choice are explosives.
''http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163/pony-age-origins Pony Age: Origins'' by OmegaPony11 is a VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins / WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic crossover fanfic. As expected, the peoples of the Thedas are replaced with ponies, donkeys, buffaloes and other creatures of Equus; Your main cast has Twilight Sparkle as a Mage Origin PlayerCharacter, Applejack taking Alistair's role, Rarity with Morrigan's role, Fluttershy with Leliana's role, Pinkie Pie with Sten's role, Rainbow Dash with Zevran's role, Spike with the Mabari's role and Shale and Oghren as essentially Equestrian-ised versions of themselves.
NeedsMoreLove.
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!This fanfic contains examples of:
* BadassPrincess: Princess Luna according to the Diamond Dogs' version of the Chant. Luna descended from Canterlot and fought the Old Ones. There are six of them and they're all ''dragons''. They only ever came to stalemates until Luna tapped into the darker powers of the moon and became Nightmare Moon, after which she was able to kill five of them. Only five, because [[spoiler:Asha'bellanar]] ran and hid.
* CantHoldHerLiquor: Twilight passes out from one gulp of Oghren's booze.
* CompositeCharacter: Pinkie Pie here blends both [[VideoGame/DragonAgeOrigins Sten]] and [[VideoGame/DragonAgeII Hawke]]. She's the one found in the cage outside the village of Ponyring[[hottip:*:Lothering]], but she's actually a resident guardspony there whose family fled to Geldwall[[hottip:*:Kirkwall]].
* DrivenToSuicide: Hespith killed herself by hanging rather than face becoming a broodmare.
* DueToTheDead: Oghren does this twice, with [[spoiler:Ruck after Twilight {{mercy kill}}s him]] and after he kills [[spoiler:Branka.]]
* FightingYourFriend: At the Storm Forge[[hottip:*:Anvil of the Void]], the group finds themselves having to fight Shale and Cairidin along with all the other golems when Branka takes control of them.
* FlamingSword: Spike has one.
* HealingShiv: With her piece of the Mane of Stars, Pinkie makes a healing ''grenade''.
* MagicAntidote: The Mane of Stars, taking the place of Andraste's Ashes. So far, it's healed [[spoiler:Trixie's crippled leg, Macintosh's poisoning, Apple Bloom's possession and Rarity's taint.]]
* TheMagnificent: We have two: The '''Great''' and '''Powerful''' Trixie and The '''Mighty''' and '''Invincible''' Shale.
* MercyKill: According to the Chant, Luna was killed by a Unicorn Imperium[[hottip:*:Tevinter Imperium]] pony who became her first convert when she was [[BurnTheWitch being burned at the stake]]. One we actually see is when [[spoiler:Twilight kills Ruck, at the latter's insistence.]]
* MidSeasonUpgrade: Happens thrice: The first is when the group replaces their worn out starter equipment with better stuff from Red Apple[[hottip:*:Redcliffe Castle]]'s armory. After that stuff gets thrashed, they find some enchanted items from the high dragon's hoard in the Haven stand-in. And after that, Cairidin gives them some new gear to help them along in their fight against the Blight.
* MilesGloriosus: King Blueblood, unlike King Cailan, is something of a coward for all of his bluster.
* MythologyGag:
** Rainbow Dash complains that the health poultices [[TastesLikeFeet tastes like "bleagh"]]. Twilight points out that poultices are meant to be applied to wounds rather than drank, as is the case in ''Dragon Age: Origins''.
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone My Celestia, What Have I Done?]]: Spike goes through this when he hears about what happens to Grey Wardens, particularly the shortened life-span that ends with dying either of the taint or of fighting in the [[hottip:*:Deep Roads]]. This is because he pushed for Twilight to join back in Unicorn Tower[[hottip:*:The Circle of Magi]] when Duncan was there for recruitment.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: After Arl Macintosh[[hottip:*:taking the role of Arl Eamon]] is poisoned by a maleficar sent by Arl Maim[[hottip:*:Arl Howe]], the Cutie Mark Crusaders try to help him by giving Apple Bloom a false horn so that she and Sweetie Bell can heal Big Mac. [[spoiler:This results in Apple Bloom's possession and the town of Appleloosa[[hottip*:taking the place of Redcliffe Village]] being besieged by zombies.]]
* NoSell: When Branka takes control of all of the golems, including Shale and Cairidin, the group finds that their weapons only barely scratch them. In the same fight, Twilight gets her tail handed to her by Branka, who is resistant to magic by default as a donkey and from the lyrium she consumed while down there.
* RecruitersAlwaysLie: As with canon, Duncan still withholds all of the details from the recruits. This is subverted later with Twilight and Applejack, who tell Rainbow Dash what being a Grey Warden entails after the latter [[spoiler:gets tainted during their fight with the broodmare[[hottip:*:the broodmother]] and urges that her Star Strand be used to heal Rarity instead]], this causes Spike to go through the above-mentioned moment.
* SkunkStripe: Twilight gets a streak of white in her mane after [[spoiler:Branka almost turns her into a golem.]]
* SuicideByCop: [[spoiler:Twister the Dalish Pegasus]] from ''Fluttershy's Song''. [[Spoiler:Dies after taking out Artistic Finish's goons, but it's revealed that she's actually a Seeker who was dying of a disease and chose to risk saving Fluttershy and getting her to Equestria rather than die in a bed.]]
* ThrowDownTheBomblet: Pinkie Pie's weapons of choice are explosives.
