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* EverythingsBetterWithDinosaurs: Shepard's little brother loved them
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---> '''Shepard:''' You are on a Spectre base. Spectres are outside the law. This base is outside the law. You have inflicted atrocities, by any standard, against Spectres and those affiliated with them, and have attempted similar acts against the families and loved ones of other Spectres...There is nothing that legally prevents me from having you shot and fed to the damn varren for dinner....Council put me outside the law, so if I remand you to their custody in the form of varren shit in a waste receptacle this big," Shepard held up her hands a couple of feet apart, "they really can't complain, can they?"
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Memetic Sex God has been cut per TRS. All wicks will be deleted.
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Sam's daughter. Worked as an Intern under Mordin Solus before going on to become a combat medic. During her internship a Krogan came in with a severed arm and was in full blood rage mode, to calm him down she grabbed his arm, waved it in his face, punched him, and told him to sit still and shut up while it is sown back on.
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Test subject from a Cerberus Super Soldier program. Was rescued thanks to the data Katsumi stole back from Hock in ME2.
''Mass Effect 2''.
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