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** [[NightmareFetishist Kiri's haircut fetish]] in general comes across as this to some viewers, especially to those with the fairly common fear of getting their hair cut or seeing others get their hair cut.
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** [[NightmareFetishist Kiri's haircut fetish]] in general comes across as this to some viewers, this, especially to those with the fairly common fear of getting their hair cut or seeing others get their hair cut.
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** [[NightmareFetishist Kiri's haircut fetish]] in general comes across as this to some viewers, especially those with those with the fairly common fear of getting their hair cut or seeing others get their hair cut.
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** [[NightmareFetishist Kiri's haircut fetish]] in general comes across as this to some viewers, especially those with to those with the fairly common fear of getting their hair cut or seeing others get their hair cut.
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** Kiri's haircut fetish in general comes across as this to some viewers, [[NightmareFetishist especially those with those with the fairly common fear of getting their hair cut or seeing others get their hair cut.]]
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** [[NightmareFetishist Kiri's haircut fetish fetish]] in general comes across as this to some viewers, [[NightmareFetishist especially those with those with the fairly common fear of getting their hair cut or seeing others get their hair cut.]]
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** Kiri's haircut fetish in general comes across as this to some viewers, [[NightmareFetishist especially those with those with the fairly common fear of getting their hair cut or seeing others get their hair cut.]]
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* {{Narm}}: SO much in episode 6, it's not even funny. Iwai repeatedly being called a monster simply because her hair can't be cut comes off as more silly than dramatic and tragic--[[MoralMyopia especially when coming from someone who's about to kill her]].
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* {{Narm}}: {{Narm}}:
** SO much in episode 6, it's not even funny. Iwai repeatedly being called a monster simply because her hair can't be cut comes off as more silly than dramatic and tragic--[[MoralMyopia especially when coming from someone who's about to kill her]].
** SO much in episode 6, it's not even funny. Iwai repeatedly being called a monster simply because her hair can't be cut comes off as more silly than dramatic and tragic--[[MoralMyopia especially when coming from someone who's about to kill her]].
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* {{Narm}}: SO much in episode 6, it's not even funny. Iwai repeatedly being called a monster simply because her hair can't be cut comes of as more silly than dramatic and tragic--[[MoralMyopia especially when coming from someone who's about to kill her]].
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* {{Narm}}: SO much in episode 6, it's not even funny. Iwai repeatedly being called a monster simply because her hair can't be cut comes of off as more silly than dramatic and tragic--[[MoralMyopia especially when coming from someone who's about to kill her]].
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: When Violet [[spoiler:kisses Kiri]] does she do it because [[spoiler:[[VillainessesWantHeroes she has developed feelings for him]]]] or [[ItAmusedMe she just wanted to get on his nerves]]?
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** The whip author licking her freaking Killing Good along with her friend.
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** The whip author (and her Instead) licking her freaking Killing Good along with her friend.Good.
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*** Giving another Author's Instead half of a GlasgowGrin. Yikes.
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*** Nearly maiming Byouinzaka's hand when she almost kills Iwai.
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*** Nearly maiming Byouinzaka's hand when she almost kills Iwai.Iwai.
* TheWoobie: Iwai and Emily.
* TheWoobie: Iwai and Emily.
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** Also, her stepsister Emily Redhands.
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** The same goes for all of the drama and emotion that gets poured into the moment that Kiri almost cuts another girl's hair. The mount of drama they put into that would make you think he's about to be violated--WHEN HE'S JUST GOING TO CUT HER HAIR.
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** The same goes for all of the drama and emotion that gets poured into the moment that Kiri almost cuts another girl's hair. The mount amount of drama they put into that would make you think he's about to be violated--WHEN HE'S JUST GOING TO CUT HER HAIR.
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* LesYay: ''Loads'' of it between the Byoinzaka twins whenever the Author sister needs to relieve herself of her desire to use Injection of Coma Death.
* {{Moe}}: Iwai is an adorably petite girl with CuteLittleFangs, beautiful long hair and big blue eyes. It's hard for people to not feel an urge to hug and protect her.
* {{Moe}}: Iwai is an adorably petite girl with CuteLittleFangs, beautiful long hair and big blue eyes. It's hard for people to not feel an urge to hug and protect her.
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* {{Moe}}: Iwai is an adorably petite girl with CuteLittleFangs, beautiful long hair and big blue eyes. It's hard for people to not feel an urge to hug and protect her.
* {{Moe}}: Iwai is an adorably petite girl with CuteLittleFangs, beautiful long hair and big blue eyes. It's hard for people to not feel an urge to hug and protect her.
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* {{Narm}}: SO much in episode 6, it's not even funny. Iwai repeatedly being called a monster simply because her hair can't be cut comes of as more silly than dramatic and tragic--[[MoralMyopia especially when coming from someone who's about to kill her]].
** The same goes for all of the drama and emotion that gets poured into the moment that Kiri almost cuts another girl's hair. The mount of drama they put into that would make you think he's about to be violated--WHEN HE'S JUST GOING TO CUT HER HAIR.
* LesYay: ''Loads'' of it between the Byoinzaka twins whenever the Author sister needs to relieve herself of her desire to use Injection of Coma Death.
* {{Moe}}: Iwai is an adorably petite girl with CuteLittleFangs, beautiful long hair and big blue eyes. It's hard for people to not feel an urge to hug and protect her.
* SoBadItsGood: The anime adaptation suffers from the usual problems of adapting manga (i.e. the difficulty of making it ''showing'', not ''telling''). On top of it, there is serious lack of directing, resulting in rather sub-par... everything.
* {{Squick}}:
** The whip author licking her freaking Killing Good along with her friend.
** Kiri [[spoiler: nomming Iwai's hair]] in chapter 18.
** Many of the more gratuitous injuries Kiri inflicts using the Crime Edge of Cutting and Severing.
*** Nearly maiming Byouinzaka's hand when she almost kills Iwai.
** The same goes for all of the drama and emotion that gets poured into the moment that Kiri almost cuts another girl's hair. The mount of drama they put into that would make you think he's about to be violated--WHEN HE'S JUST GOING TO CUT HER HAIR.
* LesYay: ''Loads'' of it between the Byoinzaka twins whenever the Author sister needs to relieve herself of her desire to use Injection of Coma Death.
* {{Moe}}: Iwai is an adorably petite girl with CuteLittleFangs, beautiful long hair and big blue eyes. It's hard for people to not feel an urge to hug and protect her.
* SoBadItsGood: The anime adaptation suffers from the usual problems of adapting manga (i.e. the difficulty of making it ''showing'', not ''telling''). On top of it, there is serious lack of directing, resulting in rather sub-par... everything.
* {{Squick}}:
** The whip author licking her freaking Killing Good along with her friend.
** Kiri [[spoiler: nomming Iwai's hair]] in chapter 18.
** Many of the more gratuitous injuries Kiri inflicts using the Crime Edge of Cutting and Severing.
*** Nearly maiming Byouinzaka's hand when she almost kills Iwai.
