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* HarsherInHindsight: Kelsey's last farewell to the Genie
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* ContrivedCoincidence: Around the same time as the Lion King arc, a member of the Kingdom Hearts Insider forums was working on their own way of blending scenes from the first film and the Lion King 1-1/2. The way the scenes played out was almost a coincidence as revealed in one of the reader reviews.
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* ArchivePanic: The 3rd story is over 100 chapters long, and not all those chapters are tight, making the story feel pretty long.
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*HarsherInHindsight: Kelsey's last farewell to the Genie
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* CompleteMonster: Frollo isn't any nicer in this fic than he was normally. Not to mention him using magic water to communicate means he's even more of a hypocrite.
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* NeedsMoreLove: Please? It's a big fic which needs more love from people.
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* CompleteMonster: Frollo isn't any nicer in this fic than he was normally. Not to mention him using magic water to communicate means he's even more of a hypocrite.
* JerkassWoobie: Aaron, who's definitely not a good guy right now, but still somewhat sympathetic for his foster background.
* NeedsMoreLove: Please? It's a big fic which needs more love from people.
* JerkassWoobie: Aaron, who's definitely not a good guy right now, but still somewhat sympathetic for his foster background.
* NeedsMoreLove: Please? It's a big fic which needs more love from people.
