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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: Ari and Laco's dance on the chariots.
** And the scene where she tells him [[spoiler:how Namer was taken away by the Capitol and begs him not to leave her too.]]
** Francesca and Holland are made of these.
** Marshall's "As long as we're together, everything will be fine." Doubles as a {{Tearjerker}}.
** And the scene where she tells him [[spoiler:how Namer was taken away by the Capitol and begs him not to leave her too.]]
** Francesca and Holland are made of these.
** Marshall's "As long as we're together, everything will be fine." Doubles as a {{Tearjerker}}.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: Ari and Laco's dance on the chariots.
** And the scene where she tells him [[spoiler:how Namer was taken away by the Capitol and begs him not to leave her too]].
** Francesca and Holland are made of these.
** Marshall's "As long as we're together, everything will be fine." Doubles as a TearJerker.
** And the scene where she tells him [[spoiler:how Namer was taken away by the Capitol and begs him not to leave her too]].
** Francesca and Holland are made of these.
** Marshall's "As long as we're together, everything will be fine." Doubles as a TearJerker.
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** Poor, poor [[spoiler: Sugar the party crasher.]]
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** Poor, poor [[spoiler: Sugar the party crasher.]]crasher]].
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* {{Tearjerker}}: ''Please let me be worth more than a five...'' [[spoiler:She wasn't.]]
* VillainSue: Iilvsea Crane, in a scary way.
* VillainSue: Iilvsea Crane, in a scary way.
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* {{Tearjerker}}: TearJerker: ''Please let me be worth more than a five...'' [[spoiler:She wasn't.]]
* VillainSue: Iilvsea Crane, in a scary way.]]
* VillainSue: Iilvsea Crane, in a scary way.
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* OneSceneWonder: Notably subverted. While many stories with that number of characters will give only a reaping chapter and ''maybe'' a pre-Games perspective to each, each character gets a reaping of thousands upon thousands of words, and multiple perspective before the beginning of the Games, just in case.
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* CompleteMonster: [[spoiler: Antony.]]
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* CompleteMonster: It seems like most of the Gamemakers fit this trope.
** As do several of the mentors. [[spoiler: Antony being the main culprit.]]
** As do several of the mentors. [[spoiler: Antony being the main culprit.]]
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* CompleteMonster: It seems like most of the Gamemakers fit this trope.
** As do several of the mentors.[[spoiler: Antony being the main culprit.Antony.]]
** As do several of the mentors.
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It Got Worse de-wicking.
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** Evon. Full stop. She gets her hands blown on, and [[ItGotWorse it's all downhill from there]].
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** Evon. Full stop. She gets her hands blown on, and [[ItGotWorse it's all downhill from there]].there.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Poor, poor [[spoiler: Sugar the party crasher.]]
** Evon's prep for the chariot ride also counts.
** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the CreepyTwins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
** Julian's eye color was changed to blue surgically ''while he was still a fetus''.
** Evon's prep for the chariot ride also counts.
** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the CreepyTwins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
** Julian's eye color was changed to blue surgically ''while he was still a fetus''.
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* NightmareFuel:
** Poor, poor [[spoiler: Sugar the party crasher.]]
** Evon's prep for the chariot ride also counts.
** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the CreepyTwins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
** Julian's eye color was changed to blue surgically ''while he was still a fetus''.
** Poor, poor [[spoiler: Sugar the party crasher.]]
** Evon's prep for the chariot ride also counts.
** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the CreepyTwins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
** Julian's eye color was changed to blue surgically ''while he was still a fetus''.
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* FridgeHorror: If making a barely-teenage girl show off her underwear on national television is sweet and innocent, what on ''earth'' do they consider racy?
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* LoveItOrHateIt: Ari is this for the fandom. She simultaneously tops popularity charts, and has a huge, very vocal {{Hatedom}}.
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* LoveItOrHateIt: Ari is this for the fandom. She simultaneously tops popularity charts, and has a huge, very vocal {{Hatedom}}.
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** Several of the training sessions, including Brandit destroying all the training dummies and Jason ripping his newly implanted wings out of his shoulder blades with his bare hands.
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** As Marshall's "As long as we're together, everything will be fine." Doubles as a {{Tearjerker}}.
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** Francesca and Holland are made of these. Most recent one being their tussle-fight before curling up and falling asleep together.
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** Francesca and Holland are made of these. Most recent one being their tussle-fight before curling up and falling asleep together.these.
** As long as we're together, everything will be fine.
** As long as we're together, everything will be fine.
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** As long as we're together, everything will be fine.
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** ''As long as we're together, everything will be fine.''
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** ''As As long as we're together, everything will be fine.''
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** ''As long as we're together, everything will be fine.''
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* DesignatedVillain: The Careers and the Gamemakers.
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* MissedMomentOfAwesome: Dalton Rhodes, the mentor for District 10, won his Games by ''charging out on the back of a bear''.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Dalton Rhodes, the mentor for District 10, won his Games by ''charging out on the back of a bear''.
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** Francesca and Holland are made of these. Most recent one being their tussle-fight before curling up and falling asleep together.
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** For someone who works with corpses all day, Felix is ridiculously upbeat.
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* {{Tearjerker}}: ''Please let me be worth more than a five...'' [[spoiler:She wasn't.]]
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** Evon. Full stop.
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** Evon. Full stop. She gets her hands blown on, and [[ItGotWorse it's all downhill from there]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[spoiler: Vince's murder of the defenseless Sapphire and Liotta are his first true act of cruelty, and shows just how serious he is when he claims he's eager and willing to kill.]]
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** As do several of the mentors. [[spoiler: Antony being the main culprit.]]
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* MissedMomentOfAwesome: Dalton Rhodes, the mentor for District 10, won his Games by ''charging out on the back of a bear''.
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** Julian's eye color was changed to blue surgically ''while he was still a fetus''.
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** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the Creepy Twins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
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** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the Creepy Twins CreepyTwins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
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* AngstWhatAngst: Most of the tributes are only too ready to angst, but Francesca seems a ''liiiiiiiiiittle'' too happy about the whole thing. But it works.
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** And the scene where she tells him [[spoiler:how Namer was taken away by the Capitol and begs him not to leave her too.]]
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** And the scene where she tells him [[spoiler:how Namer was taken away by the Capitol and begs him not to leave her too.]]]]
* CompleteMonster: It seems like most of the Gamemakers fit this trope.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Poor, poor [[spoiler: Sugar the party crasher.]]
** Evon's prep for the chariot ride also counts.
** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the Creepy Twins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
* HilariousInHindsight: Holland's submission profile asked that if he died, that he would at least get to "fall down a tree or something first", which adds a new layer to his accident with the model tree during his private training session.
* VillainSue: Iilvsea Crane, in a scary way.
* TheWoobie: Most characters have an aspect of this at some point or another, but Sector One sticks out, with Liotta young and helpless and Jason having wings painfully implanted into his back.
** Evon. Full stop.
* CompleteMonster: It seems like most of the Gamemakers fit this trope.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Poor, poor [[spoiler: Sugar the party crasher.]]
** Evon's prep for the chariot ride also counts.
** Ferroh and Faye-Anna find Iilvsea Crane and the Creepy Twins torturing someone to death. That's bad enough, but it gets worse when Iilvsea talks to Ferroh, gets him a bandage for Faye-Anna and tells him to go enjoy the party ''while the poor bastard she's torturing is right there'', and she's as happy as a kid in a candy shop.
* HilariousInHindsight: Holland's submission profile asked that if he died, that he would at least get to "fall down a tree or something first", which adds a new layer to his accident with the model tree during his private training session.
* VillainSue: Iilvsea Crane, in a scary way.
* TheWoobie: Most characters have an aspect of this at some point or another, but Sector One sticks out, with Liotta young and helpless and Jason having wings painfully implanted into his back.
** Evon. Full stop.
