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* HarsherInHindsight: Shortly after the pride is freed from the zoo, Safa tells the other lions that [[spoiler:she'd rather stay locked away in captivity and die of old age as opposed to venturing out into the real world and dying much sooner. While she was being selfish at the time, her assumption about the pride perishing from leaving the zoo comes true]].
* MemeticMutation: "I am a magician. Observe." ''head explodes'' "FUCK!" [[labelnote:Explanation]]An edit of the scene where the giraffe's bead is blown off, recontextualized to be a magic trick gone wrong and Zill's reaction being a PrecisionFStrike.[[/labelnote]]
* MemeticMutation: "I am a magician. Observe." ''head explodes'' "FUCK!" [[labelnote:Explanation]]An edit of the scene where the giraffe's bead is blown off, recontextualized to be a magic trick gone wrong and Zill's reaction being a PrecisionFStrike.[[/labelnote]]
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* HarsherInHindsight: Shortly after the pride is freed from the zoo, Safa tells the other lions that [[spoiler:she'd rather stay locked away in captivity and die of old age as opposed to venturing than venture out into the real world and dying die much sooner. While she was being selfish at the time, her assumption about the pride perishing from leaving the zoo comes true]].
* MemeticMutation: "I am a magician. Observe." ''head explodes'' "FUCK!" [[labelnote:Explanation]]An edit of the scene where the giraffe'sbead head is blown off, recontextualized to be a magic trick gone wrong and Zill's reaction being a PrecisionFStrike.[[/labelnote]]
* MemeticMutation: "I am a magician. Observe." ''head explodes'' "FUCK!" [[labelnote:Explanation]]An edit of the scene where the giraffe's
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* MemeticMutation: The giraffe's head being blown off has been used in multiple manners, often to indicate misfortune suddenly befalling somebody to the shock of others.
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* MemeticMutation: The "I am a magician. Observe." ''head explodes'' "FUCK!" [[labelnote:Explanation]]An edit of the scene where the giraffe's head bead is blown off, recontextualized to be a magic trick gone wrong and Zill's reaction being blown off has been used in multiple manners, often to indicate misfortune suddenly befalling somebody to the shock of others.a PrecisionFStrike.[[/labelnote]]
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* {{Anvilicious}}: While no particular side in the war is implicated as the bad guy, the hits in the face as hard as it can with the message that WarIsHell. ''With the suffering of adorable animals.''
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* SomeAnvilsNeedToBeDropped: While no particular side in the war is implicated as the bad guy, the story's power is derived from hitting you in the face with the aftermath of war. ''With the suffering of adorable animals.''
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Fajer’s lips weren’t pulled on, bears just have very loose lips.
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** Fajer the bear's bottom lip looks as if some other animal had tried to rip it off. As a result, it's permanently hanging open and exposing part of his gums.
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** Fajer the bear's bottom lip looks as if some other animal had tried to rip it off. As a result, it's permanently hanging open and exposing part of his gums. [[TruthInTelevision However]], [[https://pbs.twimg.com/media/E4rR4emXMAMtgSw.jpg the lips of bears aren’t attached to their gums, meaning they can pull all sorts of facial expressions.]]
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* MemeticMutation: The giraffe's head being blown off has been used in multiple manners, often to indicate misfortune suddenly befalling somebody to the shock of others.
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* TheWoobie: Dear God. All of them.
** JerkassWoobie: Safa.
** JerkassWoobie: Safa.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: Yeah.HarsherInHindsight: Shortly after the pride is freed from the zoo, Safa tells the other lions that [[spoiler:she'd rather stay locked away in captivity and die of old age as opposed to venturing out into the real world and dying much sooner. While she was being selfish at the time, her assumption about the pride perishing from leaving the zoo comes true]].
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* NightmareFuel: If not the whole story in and of itself, then definitely [[spoiler:when Fajer appears as Rashid's torturer. Also the giraffe's {{Squick}}y death, and the sea turtle finding his family.]]
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* TearJerker: If you don't think so, you may want to check for your soul somewhere. Especially [[spoiler:"No. They're free." and "There were other casualties that day."]] Also, the very last page, which is also something of a bittersweet CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* TearJerker: If you don't think so, you may want to check for your soul somewhere. Especially [[spoiler:"No. They're free." and "There were {{Squick}}:
** The death of [[YourHeadASplode the giraffe]] when the bombing begins.
** Fajer the bear's bottom lip looks as if some othercasualties that day."]] Also, the very last page, which is also something animal had tried to rip it off. As a result, it's permanently hanging open and exposing part of a bittersweet CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.his gums.
** The death of [[YourHeadASplode the giraffe]] when the bombing begins.
** Fajer the bear's bottom lip looks as if some other
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** JerkassWoobie: Safa.Safa.
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* CompleteMonster: The bear, Fajer.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: Yeah. Just ... yeah.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: Yeah. Just ... yeah.
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* TearJerker: If you don't think so, you may want to check for your soul somewhere. Especially [[spoiler:"No. They're free." and "There were other casualties that day."]]
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* TearJerker: If you don't think so, you may want to check for your soul somewhere. Especially [[spoiler:"No. They're free." and "There were other casualties that day."]]"]] Also, the very last page, which is also something of a bittersweet CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* NightmareFuelUnleaded: If not the whole story in and of itself, then definitely [[spoiler:when Fajer appears as Rashid's torturer. Also the giraffe's {{Squick}}y death, and the sea turtle finding his family.]]
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* NightmareFuelUnleaded: NightmareFuel: If not the whole story in and of itself, then definitely [[spoiler:when Fajer appears as Rashid's torturer. Also the giraffe's {{Squick}}y death, and the sea turtle finding his family.]]
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* {{Narm}}: Many a reader had the wrong reaction to the lion-rapin'.
