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* CrossesTheLineTwice: Legolas saving Laura. A ten-year-old being beaten up and raped and poisoned by Sauron? HJorrifying. Legolas ruining the moment with a chipper "When I was your age, they did the same thing to me!"? ''Hysterical!''
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: Legolas saving Laura. A ten-year-old being beaten up and raped and poisoned by Sauron? HJorrifying.Horrifying. Legolas ruining the moment with a chipper "When I was your age, they did the same thing to me!"? ''Hysterical!''
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* CrossesTheLineTwice: Legolas saving Laura. A ten-year-old being beaten up and raped and poisoned by Sauron? HJorrifying. Legolas ruining the moment with a chipper "When I was your age, they did the same thing to me!"? ''Hysterical!''
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Legolas' own rape by orcs, and Laura's never-used "power".
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The DramaticReading by Tropers/ManWithoutABody.
* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Legolas' own rape by orcs, and Laura's never-used "power".
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The DramaticReading by Tropers/ManWithoutABody.
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Dead Link and there's no other context to find a reupload so 🤷♀️
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* MemeticMutation: It's been featured in [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tSpEr0ECMeY this]] WebAnimation/YouTubePoop.
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* TheWoobie: In any other story, a 10 year old who gets abandoned, kidnapped, tortured, beat up, whipped, raped by orcs, posioned, and kissed by her significantly older adoptive brother ''in the space of two pages'' would have every ounce of the audience's pity. [[{{Narm}} This story, however . . .however...]]
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* FridgeLogic: Sauron specifically orders his minions not to kill Laura. Which raises the question: if he wanted to keep her alive, then why did he poison her?
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* MemeticMutation: It's been featured in [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tSpEr0ECMeY this]] YouTubePoop.
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* TheWoobie: In any other story, a 10 year old who gets abandoned, kidnapped, tortured, beat up, whipped, raped by orcs, poisoned, and kissed by her significantly older adoptive brother ''in the space of two pages'' would have every ounce of the audience's pity. [[{{Narm}} This story, however . . .]]
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* TheWoobie: In any other story, a 10 year old who gets abandoned, kidnapped, tortured, beat up, whipped, raped by orcs, poisoned, and kissed by her significantly older adoptive brother ''in the space of two pages'' would have every ounce of the audience's pity. [[{{Narm}} This story, however . . .]]]]
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* NightmareRetardant: Normally, anything involving a ten year old getting raped by orcs would be downright [[NightmareFuelUnleaded horrifying]], yet, considering the [[BeigeProse blunt and uninteresting]] way in which it's written, it just [[{{Narm}} can't be taken seriously]].
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* NightmareRetardant: Normally, anything involving a ten year old getting raped by orcs would be downright [[NightmareFuelUnleaded [[NightmareFuel horrifying]], yet, considering the [[BeigeProse blunt and uninteresting]] way in which it's written, it just [[{{Narm}} can't be taken seriously]].
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: "Then Frodo said "we came to help you and also we got rid of the ring" and then the Dark Lord said"oh no" and then the magical powers from Gandalf distoryed the Dark lord."
** "Then the fright began" is so wonderful when Tropers/ManWithoutABody reads it. And every instance of "GARDS".
** "Then the fright began" is so wonderful when Tropers/ManWithoutABody reads it. And every instance of "GARDS".
