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* SoBadItsGood: the occasional awkward English in text and narration [[labelnote:note]]a product of the author writing in English when it isn't his native language, but still better-done than in [[SturgeonsLaw the majority of fics written BY authors that have English as their native language]][[/labelnote]] can actually add a bit more charm to the fic and make it more enjoyable to read. Ditto Rasyid sometimes delivering spectacularly cheesy hero speeches.
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* SoBadItsGood: the occasional awkward English in text and narration [[labelnote:note]]a product of the author writing in English when it isn't his native language, but still better-done than in [[SturgeonsLaw the majority of fics written BY authors that have English as their native language]][[/labelnote]] language[[/labelnote]] can actually add a bit more charm to the fic and make it more enjoyable to read. Ditto Rasyid sometimes delivering spectacularly cheesy hero speeches.
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* MagnificentBastard: Daguva, who is 1) working off the same meta-knowledge that Rasyid is, and 2) can [[SubvertedTrope actually pull off]] [[NeverRecycleYourSchemes using the same general plot outline]].
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: [[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Rasyid often lets his mouth get the better of him]] when he's talking about relationships, but probably the most ''spectacular'' example is when [[CovertPervert he accidentally lets slip that]] [[ChivalrousPervert he's a]] HaremSeeker. In front of several [[LoveInterest women]] ''he barely even knows'' at that point.
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** [[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Rasyid often lets his mouth get the better of him]] when he's talking about relationships, but probably the most ''spectacular'' example is when [[CovertPervert he accidentally lets slip that]] [[ChivalrousPervert he's a]] HaremSeeker. In front of several [[LoveInterest women]] ''he barely even knows'' at that point.
** [[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Rasyid often lets his mouth get the better of him]] when he's talking about relationships, but probably the most ''spectacular'' example is when [[CovertPervert he accidentally lets slip that]] [[ChivalrousPervert he's a]] HaremSeeker. In front of several [[LoveInterest women]] ''he barely even knows'' at that point.
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-->Narrator:''The seemingly adult Taki Asuka is apparently fangirling me…. ME, of all people, how the hell does this happen—I felt two soft somethings on my chest… [[ClosetPervert Giggity]]. Wait, not now brain!''
-->Narrator: ''But titties!''
-->Narrator: ''[[SickAndWrong Not like this!]]''
-->Narrator: ''She's a [[StatuesqueStunner tall, hot]], {{action girl}}; [[AmazonChaser YOUR kind of girl]], and you say [[AboveTheInfluence no? What's wrong with you?]]''
-->Narrator: ''Me? Dammit, [[FridgeLogic why the hell am I arguing with myself]]—''
-->Narrator: ''But titties!''
-->Narrator: ''[[SickAndWrong Not like this!]]''
-->Narrator: ''She's a [[StatuesqueStunner tall, hot]], {{action girl}}; [[AmazonChaser YOUR kind of girl]], and you say [[AboveTheInfluence no? What's wrong with you?]]''
-->Narrator: ''Me? Dammit, [[FridgeLogic why the hell am I arguing with myself]]—''
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'''Narrator:''' ''But
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'''Narrator:''' ''[[SickAndWrong Not like
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'''Narrator:''' ''She's a [[StatuesqueStunner tall, hot]], {{action girl}}; [[AmazonChaser YOUR kind of girl]], and you say [[AboveTheInfluence no? What's wrong with
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'''Narrator:''' ''Me? Dammit, [[FridgeLogic why the hell am I arguing with myself]]—''
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-->'''Rasyid:''' "In the name of Allah, [[HeroicResolve I swear I will not let myself be consumed by the darkness]], and [[DeclarationOfProtection I will protect everyone's smile... Yours is my number one priority]]. So please... won't you show me that beautiful smile of yours?"
-->''It felt like hours to me, but Asuka slowly showed me that smile of hers. I could see a bit of redness on her face, whether it's because of her crying or me calling her beautiful, it doesn't really matter...''
-->''It felt like hours to me, but Asuka slowly showed me that smile of hers. I could see a bit of redness on her face, whether it's because of her crying or me calling her beautiful, it doesn't really matter...''
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-->'''Rasyid:''' "In the name of Allah, [[HeroicResolve I swear I will not let myself be consumed by the darkness]], and [[DeclarationOfProtection I will protect everyone's smile... Yours is my number one priority]]. So please... won't you show me that beautiful smile of yours?"
-->''Ityours?"\\
''It felt like hours to me, but Asuka slowly showed me that smile of hers. I could see a bit of redness on her face, whether it's because of her crying or me calling her beautiful, it doesn't really matter...''
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''It felt like hours to me, but Asuka slowly showed me that smile of hers. I could see a bit of redness on her face, whether it's because of her crying or me calling her beautiful, it doesn't really matter...''
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: This moment from chapter 6. May also double as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome in its own way.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: This moment from chapter 6. May also double as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome in its own way.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: in episode 5, Rasyid ''finally'' achieves the HeroicResolve to obtain Mighty Form, and then teams up with the Precures to give an epic combined InTheNameOfTheMoon spiel to the bat Grongi, and then working with them to kick all kinds of ass, [[ThemeMusicPowerUp all set to "Red Desire", an insert song from the Kuuga television show]].
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Rasyid often lets his mouth get the better of him]] when he's talking about relationships, but probably the most ''spectacular'' example is when [[CovertPervert he accidentally lets slip that]] [[ChivalrousPervert he's a]] HaremSeeker. In front of several [[LoveInterest women]] ''he barely even knows'' at that point.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Rasyid often lets his mouth get the better of him]] when he's talking about relationships, but probably the most ''spectacular'' example is when [[CovertPervert he accidentally lets slip that]] [[ChivalrousPervert he's a]] HaremSeeker. In front of several [[LoveInterest women]] ''he barely even knows'' at that point.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: in episode 5, Rasyid ''finally'' achieves the HeroicResolve to obtain Mighty Form, and then teams up with the Precures to give an epic combined InTheNameOfTheMoon spiel to the bat Grongi, and then working with them to kick all kinds of ass, [[ThemeMusicPowerUp all set to "Red Desire", an insert song from the Kuuga television show]].
* CrowningMomentOfFunny:SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: [[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Rasyid often lets his mouth get the better of him]] when he's talking about relationships, but probably the most ''spectacular'' example is when [[CovertPervert he accidentally lets slip that]] [[ChivalrousPervert he's a]] HaremSeeker. In front of several [[LoveInterest women]] ''he barely even knows'' at that point.
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* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: in episode 5, Rasyid ''finally'' achieves the HeroicResolve to obtain Mighty Form, and then teams up with the Precures to give an epic combined InTheNameOfTheMoon spiel to the bat Grongi, and then working with them to kick all kinds of ass, [[ThemeMusicPowerUp all set to "Red Desire", an insert song from the Kuuga television show]].
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* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming: This moment from chapter 6. May also double as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome in its own way.
-->'''Rasyid:''' "In the name of Allah, [[HeroicResolve I swear I will not let myself be consumed by the darkness]], and [[DeclarationOfProtection I will protect everyone's smile... Yours is my number one priority]]. So please... won't you show me that beautiful smile of yours?"
-->''It felt like hours to me, but Asuka slowly showed me that smile of hers. I could see a bit of redness on her face, whether it's because of her crying or me calling her beautiful, it doesn't really matter...''
-->'''Rasyid:''' "In the name of Allah, [[HeroicResolve I swear I will not let myself be consumed by the darkness]], and [[DeclarationOfProtection I will protect everyone's smile... Yours is my number one priority]]. So please... won't you show me that beautiful smile of yours?"
-->''It felt like hours to me, but Asuka slowly showed me that smile of hers. I could see a bit of redness on her face, whether it's because of her crying or me calling her beautiful, it doesn't really matter...''
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*CrowningMomentOfAwesome: in episode 5, Rasyid ''finally'' achieves the HeroicResolve to obtain Mighty Form, and then teams up with the Precures to give an epic combined InTheNameOfTheMoon spiel to the bat Grongi, and then working with them to kick all kinds of ass, [[ThemeMusicPowerUp all set to "Red Desire", an insert song from the Kuuga television show]].
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-->Narrator:''The seemingly adult Taki Asuka is apparently fangirling me…. ME, of all people, how the hell does this happen—I felt two soft somethings on my chest… [[ClosetPervert Giggity]]. Wait, not now brain!]]''
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-->Narrator:''The seemingly adult Taki Asuka is apparently fangirling me…. ME, of all people, how the hell does this happen—I felt two soft somethings on my chest… [[ClosetPervert Giggity]]. Wait, not now brain!]]''brain!''
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* SoBadItsGood: the occasional spelling problems [[labelnote:note]]a product of the author writing in English when it isn't his native language, but are still far less frequent than in [[SturgeonsLaw several fics written BY authors that have English as their native language]][[/labelnote]] can actually add a bit more charm to the fic and make it more enjoyable to read. Ditto Rasyid sometimes delivering spectacularly cheesy hero speeches.
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* SoBadItsGood: the occasional spelling problems awkward English in text and narration [[labelnote:note]]a product of the author writing in English when it isn't his native language, but are still far less frequent better-done than in [[SturgeonsLaw several the majority of fics written BY authors that have English as their native language]][[/labelnote]] can actually add a bit more charm to the fic and make it more enjoyable to read. Ditto Rasyid sometimes delivering spectacularly cheesy hero speeches.
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**Some of Rasyid's mental arguments with Riku - or, more commonly, with ''himself'' can end up like this. One notable example of what happens when this CovertPervert gets DistractedByTheSexy:
-->Narrator:''The seemingly adult Taki Asuka is apparently fangirling me…. ME, of all people, how the hell does this happen—I felt two soft somethings on my chest… [[ClosetPervert Giggity]]. Wait, not now brain!]]''
-->Narrator: ''But titties!''
-->Narrator: ''[[SickAndWrong Not like this!]]''
-->Narrator: ''She's a [[StatuesqueStunner tall, hot]], {{action girl}}; [[AmazonChaser YOUR kind of girl]], and you say [[AboveTheInfluence no? What's wrong with you?]]''
-->Narrator: ''Me? Dammit, [[FridgeLogic why the hell am I arguing with myself]]—''
-->Narrator:''The seemingly adult Taki Asuka is apparently fangirling me…. ME, of all people, how the hell does this happen—I felt two soft somethings on my chest… [[ClosetPervert Giggity]]. Wait, not now brain!]]''
-->Narrator: ''But titties!''
-->Narrator: ''[[SickAndWrong Not like this!]]''
-->Narrator: ''She's a [[StatuesqueStunner tall, hot]], {{action girl}}; [[AmazonChaser YOUR kind of girl]], and you say [[AboveTheInfluence no? What's wrong with you?]]''
-->Narrator: ''Me? Dammit, [[FridgeLogic why the hell am I arguing with myself]]—''
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* JustHereForGodzilla: for some readers, the fact that it's a Series/KamenRiderKuuga fic is enough incentive to read it.
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* MagnificentBastard: Daguva.
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*CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[DidIJustSayThatOutLoud Rasyid often lets his mouth get the better of him]] when he's talking about relationships, but probably the most ''spectacular'' example is when [[CovertPervert he accidentally lets slip that]] [[ChivalrousPervert he's a]] HaremSeeker. In front of several [[LoveInterest women]] ''he barely even knows'' at that point.
* MagnificentBastard:Daguva.Daguva, who is 1) working off the same meta-knowledge that Rasyid is, and 2) can [[SubvertedTrope actually pull off]] [[NeverRecycleYourSchemes using the same general plot outline]].
* MagnificentBastard:
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*MagnificentBastard: Daguva.
*NightmareFuel: Daguva. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Just]]. [[PrecisionFStrike Fucking]]. ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Daguva]]''. For starters, [[EstablishingCharacterMoment there's the scene in the prologue]], where he goes from being a harmless model figurine to a full-sized flesh-and-blood creature, openly pondering whether or not to go ahead and kill the scared kid with the Arcle belt hovering in front of him, before then deciding to go ahead and start another Gegeru in the new universe that he and Rasyid are being sent to. And when Rasyid attempts a BadassBoast that he'll come at Daguva in Kuuga Ultimate Form like Godai did, [[PretenderDiss Daguva just laughs and remarks how Rasyid isn't a badass with incorruptible pure pureness like Godai was]].
*SoBadItsGood: the occasional spelling problems [[labelnote:note]]a product of the author writing in English when it isn't his native language, but are still far less frequent than in [[SturgeonsLaw several fics written BY authors that have English as their native language]][[/labelnote]] can actually add a bit more charm to the fic and make it more enjoyable to read. Ditto Rasyid sometimes delivering spectacularly cheesy hero speeches.
*NightmareFuel: Daguva. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Just]]. [[PrecisionFStrike Fucking]]. ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Daguva]]''. For starters, [[EstablishingCharacterMoment there's the scene in the prologue]], where he goes from being a harmless model figurine to a full-sized flesh-and-blood creature, openly pondering whether or not to go ahead and kill the scared kid with the Arcle belt hovering in front of him, before then deciding to go ahead and start another Gegeru in the new universe that he and Rasyid are being sent to. And when Rasyid attempts a BadassBoast that he'll come at Daguva in Kuuga Ultimate Form like Godai did, [[PretenderDiss Daguva just laughs and remarks how Rasyid isn't a badass with incorruptible pure pureness like Godai was]].
*SoBadItsGood: the occasional spelling problems [[labelnote:note]]a product of the author writing in English when it isn't his native language, but are still far less frequent than in [[SturgeonsLaw several fics written BY authors that have English as their native language]][[/labelnote]] can actually add a bit more charm to the fic and make it more enjoyable to read. Ditto Rasyid sometimes delivering spectacularly cheesy hero speeches.
