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Removed Zero Content Examples and misuse of trope titles. (Along with a fridge entry that I accidentally deleted and then couldn't recover because mobile. Sorry.)
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* DieForOurShip / TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The author announced BetaCouple Char and Laura, people were happy. Turns out it would '''not''' be a [[{{Yuri}} Yuri pairing]], [[RageQuit cue the whining]].
** Fan reaction is justified because Char and Laura is the most shipped harem member with Ichika (or some random OC) in the fandom, and the canon material has shades of RomanticTwoGirlFriendship.
** fellow author's reaction is way more hilarious, [[JustHereForGodzilla they said most reader are reading it for the Twincest anyway]].
** Fan reaction is justified because Char and Laura is the most shipped harem member with Ichika (or some random OC) in the fandom, and the canon material has shades of RomanticTwoGirlFriendship.
** fellow author's reaction is way more hilarious, [[JustHereForGodzilla they said most reader are reading it for the Twincest anyway]].
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** Kurogane is so unstable that nobody else can use it but Chifuyu, who's godly skilled pilot. And how Ichika and Madoka can use it? [[BornWinner Super reflex and inhuman stability respectively]].
*** Also, since Ichika is somewhat accustomed with that unstable machine, he quickly conquers Byakushiki, unlike in canon where he's having a hard time.
*** And why they allow Madoka to hog and monopolize Kurogane's usage? She was planned to be it's permanent pilot after those combat data she sent, which is deemed satisfactory.
** Houki perform badly against Charles in the Canon, well, she's a DualWielding LadyOfWar, as shown by her future I.S.' armaments.
* GrowingTheBeard: The first three chapter started up as dolled-up LN chapter, cue chapter 4 rolls in with all the badassery.
* HarsherInHindsight: Ichika's title
* '''HoYay''': Exceeding the level of Canon does, partly because Char IS a real guy (or so it's seems)
* TearJerker: Madoka's Monologue in chapter.
** Chapter 11 as well, filled with them.
*** Also, since Ichika is somewhat accustomed with that unstable machine, he quickly conquers Byakushiki, unlike in canon where he's having a hard time.
*** And why they allow Madoka to hog and monopolize Kurogane's usage? She was planned to be it's permanent pilot after those combat data she sent, which is deemed satisfactory.
** Houki perform badly against Charles in the Canon, well, she's a DualWielding LadyOfWar, as shown by her future I.S.' armaments.
* GrowingTheBeard: The first three chapter started up as dolled-up LN chapter, cue chapter 4 rolls in with all the badassery.
* HarsherInHindsight: Ichika's title
* '''HoYay''': Exceeding the level of Canon does, partly because Char IS a real guy (or so it's seems)
* TearJerker: Madoka's Monologue in chapter.
** Chapter 11 as well, filled with them.
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** Kurogane is so unstable that nobody else can use it but Chifuyu, who's a godly skilled pilot. And how Then why do Ichika and Madoka can also turn out to be able to use it? [[BornWinner Super reflex and inhuman stability respectively]].
*** Also, since ** Since Ichika is somewhat accustomed with that unstable machine, Kurogane in this fic, he quickly conquers Byakushiki, unlike in canon where he's having a hard time.
*** And why they allow Madoka to hog and monopolize Kurogane's usage? She was planned to be it's permanent pilot after those combat data she sent, which is deemed satisfactory.
time with the latter.
** Houki perform badly against Charles in theCanon, well, Canon... Well, she's a DualWielding LadyOfWar, as shown by her future I.S.' armaments.
* GrowingTheBeard: The first three chapter started up as dolled-up LNchapter, cue chapter 4 rolls in with all a RecycledScript,
* HoYay: While thebadassery.
* HarsherInHindsight: Ichika's title
* '''HoYay''': Exceedingoriginal series had some, the level of Canon does, partly because author exaggerates it in the series, in part thanks to Char IS being a real guy (or so it's seems)
* TearJerker: Madoka's Monologue in chapter.
** Chapter 11 as well, filled with them.man who still likes Ichika.
*** And why they allow Madoka to hog and monopolize Kurogane's usage? She was planned to be it's permanent pilot after those combat data she sent, which is deemed satisfactory.
** Houki perform badly against Charles in the
* GrowingTheBeard: The first three chapter started up as dolled-up LN
* HoYay: While the
* HarsherInHindsight: Ichika's title
* '''HoYay''': Exceeding
* TearJerker: Madoka's Monologue in chapter.
** Chapter 11 as well, filled with them.
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* JumpingTheShark: [[BerserkButton The part where the author announced that Char is a guy]], [[WildMassGuessing probably on purpose]]...
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Badass is no longer a trope.
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* GrowingTheBeard: The first three chapter started up as dolled-up LN chapter, cue chapter 4 rolls in with all the {{badass}}ery.
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* GrowingTheBeard: The first three chapter started up as dolled-up LN chapter, cue chapter 4 rolls in with all the {{badass}}ery.badassery.
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* DieForOurShip / TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The author announced BetaCouple Char and Laura, AndTheFandomRejoiced. Turns out it would '''not''' be a [[{{Yuri}} Yuri pairing]], [[RageQuit cue the whining]].
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* DieForOurShip / TheyChangedItNowItSucks: The author announced BetaCouple Char and Laura, AndTheFandomRejoiced.people were happy. Turns out it would '''not''' be a [[{{Yuri}} Yuri pairing]], [[RageQuit cue the whining]].
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* FridgeBrilliance: and HOW.
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* FridgeBrilliance: and HOW.FridgeBrilliance:
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* FridgeBrilliance: and HOW.
** Kurogane is so unstable that nobody else can use it but Chifuyu, who's godly skilled pilot. And how Ichika and Madoka can use it? [[BornWinner Super reflex and inhuman stability respectively]].
*** Also, since Ichika is somewhat accustomed with that unstable machine, he quickly conquers Byakushiki, unlike in canon where he's having a hard time.
*** And why they allow Madoka to hog and monopolize Kurogane's usage? She was planned to be it's permanent pilot after those combat data she sent, which is deemed satisfactory.
** Houki perform badly against Charles in the Canon, well, she's a DualWielding LadyOfWar, as shown by her future I.S.' armaments.
** Kurogane is so unstable that nobody else can use it but Chifuyu, who's godly skilled pilot. And how Ichika and Madoka can use it? [[BornWinner Super reflex and inhuman stability respectively]].
*** Also, since Ichika is somewhat accustomed with that unstable machine, he quickly conquers Byakushiki, unlike in canon where he's having a hard time.
*** And why they allow Madoka to hog and monopolize Kurogane's usage? She was planned to be it's permanent pilot after those combat data she sent, which is deemed satisfactory.
** Houki perform badly against Charles in the Canon, well, she's a DualWielding LadyOfWar, as shown by her future I.S.' armaments.
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* '''HoYay''': Exceeding the level of Canon does, partly because Char IS a real guy (or so it's seems)
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* TearJerker: Madoka's Monologue in chapter 5, {{YMMV}}.
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* TearJerker: Madoka's Monologue in chapter 5, {{YMMV}}.chapter.
