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* EvilIsSexy: Some fans can find the "Lolita" to be very attractive, if they do not see her as a CreepyChild, but rather a woman masquerading as one, albeit in a more macabre fashion and even sometimes view her as a DracoInLeatherPants.
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* Narm: The panty shots and topless scene of Hikari may be intended as FanDisservice, but to some it adds MoodDissonance instead.
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* Narm: {{Narm}}: The panty shots and topless scene of Hikari may be intended as FanDisservice, but to some it adds MoodDissonance instead.
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* Narm: The panty shots and topless scene of Hikari may be intended as FanDisservice, but to some it adds MoodDissonance instead.
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* EvilIsSexy: Some fans even find the "Lolita" to be very attractive, if they do not see her as a CreepyChild, but rather a woman masquerading as one, albeit in a more macabre fashion and even sometimes view her as a DracoInLeatherPants.
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* EvilIsSexy: Some fans even can find the "Lolita" to be very attractive, if they do not see her as a CreepyChild, but rather a woman masquerading as one, albeit in a more macabre fashion and even sometimes view her as a DracoInLeatherPants.
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* EvilIsCool: The CreepyAwesome Lolita, due to her being absolutely scary and creepy in appearance and personality, [[spoiler:being successful in pulling off her serial killings through elaborate scare tactics]] and no small part to the author's nightmarish artwork.
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* EvilIsCool: The CreepyAwesome Lolita, due to her being absolutely scary and creepy in appearance and personality, [[spoiler:being successful in pulling off her serial killings through elaborate scare tactics]] and no small part due to the author's nightmarish artwork.
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* EvilIsSexy: Some fans even find the "Lolita" to be very attractive, if they do not see her as a CreepyChild, but rather a woman masquerading as one, albeit in a more macabre fashion.fashion and even sometimes view her as a DracoInLeatherPants.
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* EvilIsCool: The CreepyAwesome Lolita, due to her being absolutely scary and creepy in appearance and personality, [[spoiler:being successful in pulling off her serial killings through elaborate scare tactics]] and no small part to the author's nightmarish artwork.
* EvilIsSexy: Some fans even find the "Lolita" to be very attractive, if they do not see her as a CreepyChild, but rather a woman masquerading as one, albeit in a more macabre fashion.
* EvilIsSexy: Some fans even find the "Lolita" to be very attractive, if they do not see her as a CreepyChild, but rather a woman masquerading as one, albeit in a more macabre fashion.
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* CompleteMonster: The "[[{{Yandere}} Strange Lolita]]" is a SerialKiller implied to be a malevolent spirit. Having claimed enough victims to be known as an UrbanLegend, the Lolita obsessively stalks men after asking them if they want a younger sister, tormenting them and murdering their loved ones before killing and implicating her victim as the perpetrator of a murder-suicide. Torturing a victim after butchering his family, she broke the man into thinking he was her younger sister, making him always wear a filthy dress and eat garbage. After eliminating [[TheProtagonist Kazuki]]'s friends and family, the Lolita captures him and keeps him locked inside his house for days, mutilating him whenever he displeases her before finally [[spoiler:killing and framing him too]].
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* CompleteMonster: The "[[{{Yandere}} Strange Lolita]]" "Strange Lolita" is a SerialKiller implied to be a malevolent spirit. Having claimed enough victims to be known as an UrbanLegend, the Lolita obsessively stalks men after asking them if they want a younger sister, men, tormenting them and murdering their loved ones before killing and implicating her victim as the perpetrator of a murder-suicide. MurderSuicide. Torturing a victim after butchering his family, she broke the man into thinking he was her younger sister, man, making him always wear a filthy dress and eat garbage. After eliminating [[TheProtagonist Kazuki]]'s Kazuki's friends and family, the Lolita captures him and keeps him locked inside his house for days, mutilating him whenever he displeases her before finally [[spoiler:killing and framing him too]].him]] too.
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* CompleteMonster: The "[[{{Yandere}} Strange Lolita]]" is a SerialKiller implied to be a malevolent spirit. Having claimed enough victims to be known as an UrbanLegend, the Lolita obsessively stalks men after asking them if they want a younger sister, tormenting them and murdering their loved ones before killing and implicating her victim as the perpetrator of a murder-suicide. Torturing a victim after butchering his family, she broke the man into thinking he was her younger sister, making him always wear a filthy dress and eat garbage. After eliminating [[TheProtagonist Kazuki]]'s friends and family, the Lolita captures him and keeps him locked inside his house for days, mutilating him whenever he displeases her before finally killing and framing him too.
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* CompleteMonster: The "[[{{Yandere}} Strange Lolita]]" is a SerialKiller implied to be a malevolent spirit. Having claimed enough victims to be known as an UrbanLegend, the Lolita obsessively stalks men after asking them if they want a younger sister, tormenting them and murdering their loved ones before killing and implicating her victim as the perpetrator of a murder-suicide. Torturing a victim after butchering his family, she broke the man into thinking he was her younger sister, making him always wear a filthy dress and eat garbage. After eliminating [[TheProtagonist Kazuki]]'s friends and family, the Lolita captures him and keeps him locked inside his house for days, mutilating him whenever he displeases her before finally killing [[spoiler:killing and framing him too.too]].
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* NightmareFuel: The "Lolita" stabbing herself in the legs. Also, '''everything else'''.
* TheWoobie: Kazuki and his sister Hikari.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother who regularly abusing her (and impied he molested her) and then kill her parents then himself]].
** [[spoiler: Then subverted, she was the one who killed the parents. The brother was one of her victims]].
* TheWoobie: Kazuki and his sister Hikari.
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother who regularly abusing her (and impied he molested her) and then kill her parents then himself]].
** [[spoiler: Then subverted, she was the one who killed the parents. The brother was one of her victims]].
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother who regularly abusing her (and impied he molested her) and then kill her parents then himself]].
** [[spoiler: Then subverted, she was the one who killed the parents. The brother was one of her victims]].
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* CompleteMonster: The "[[AxCrazy Strange Lolita]]" is a SerialKiller implied to be a malevolent spirit. Having claimed enough victims to be known as an UrbanLegend, the Lolita obsessively stalks men after asking them if they want a younger sister, tormenting them and murdering their loved ones before killing and implicating her victim as the perpetrator of a murder-suicide. Torturing a victim after butchering his family, she broke the man into thinking he was her younger sister, making him always wear a filthy dress and eat garbage. After eliminating [[TheProtagonist Kazuki]]'s friends and family, the Lolita captures him and keeps him locked inside his house for days, mutilating him whenever he displeases her before finally killing and framing him too.
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* CompleteMonster: The "[[AxCrazy "[[{{Yandere}} Strange Lolita]]" is a SerialKiller implied to be a malevolent spirit. Having claimed enough victims to be known as an UrbanLegend, the Lolita obsessively stalks men after asking them if they want a younger sister, tormenting them and murdering their loved ones before killing and implicating her victim as the perpetrator of a murder-suicide. Torturing a victim after butchering his family, she broke the man into thinking he was her younger sister, making him always wear a filthy dress and eat garbage. After eliminating [[TheProtagonist Kazuki]]'s friends and family, the Lolita captures him and keeps him locked inside his house for days, mutilating him whenever he displeases her before finally killing and framing him too.
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* IdiotPlot: Let's just say that the MC or hell, everyone'd be save themselves a lot of time if they didn't care about the "Lolita"
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*CompleteMonster: The "[[AxCrazy Strange Lolita]]" is a SerialKiller implied to be a malevolent spirit. Having claimed enough victims to be known as an UrbanLegend, the Lolita obsessively stalks men after asking them if they want a younger sister, tormenting them and murdering their loved ones before killing and implicating her victim as the perpetrator of a murder-suicide. Torturing a victim after butchering his family, she broke the man into thinking he was her younger sister, making him always wear a filthy dress and eat garbage. After eliminating [[TheProtagonist Kazuki]]'s friends and family, the Lolita captures him and keeps him locked inside his house for days, mutilating him whenever he displeases her before finally killing and framing him too.
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* TheWoobie: Kazuki and his sister Hakari
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother who regularly abusing her (and impied he molested her) and then kill her parents then himself]]
** [[spoiler: Then subverted, she was the one who killed the parents. The brother was one of her victims]]
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother who regularly abusing her (and impied he molested her) and then kill her parents then himself]]
** [[spoiler: Then subverted, she was the one who killed the parents. The brother was one of her victims]]
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* TheWoobie: Kazuki and his sister Hakari
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himself]].
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother who regularly abusing her (and impied he molested her) and then kill her parents then
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* IdiotPlot: Let's just say that the MC or hell, everyone'd be save themselves a lot of time if they didn't care about the "Lolita"
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* NightmareFuel: The "Lolita" stabbing herself in the legs.
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* NightmareFuel: The "Lolita" stabbing herself in the legs. Also, '''everything else'''.
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** [[spoiler: then subvert, Then subverted, she was the one who killed the parents. The brother was one of her victims]]
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** [[spoiler: then subvert, she was the one who kill the parents the boy was one of the victims]]
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** [[spoiler: then subvert, she was the one who kill killed the parents the boy parents. The brother was one of the her victims]]
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother repeating abusing her and then murdering her parents then killing himself]]
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother repeating who regularly abusing her (and impied he molested her) and then murdering kill her parents then killing himself]]
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* TheWoobie: Kazuki and his sister Hakari
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother repeating abusing her and then murdering her parents then killing himself]]
** [[spoiler: then subvert, she was the one who kill the parents the boy was one of the victims]]
* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: The Lolita after learning her back story [[spoiler: her brother repeating abusing her and then murdering her parents then killing himself]]
** [[spoiler: then subvert, she was the one who kill the parents the boy was one of the victims]]
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* CompleteMonster: "Strange Lolita"
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* NightmareFuel: The "Lolita" stabbing herself in the legs.
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* NightmareFuel: The "Lolita" stabbing herself in the legs.legs.
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* CompleteMonster: "Strange Lolita"
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* CompleteMonster: "Strange Lolita"Lolita"
* NightmareFuel: The "Lolita" stabbing herself in the legs.
* NightmareFuel: The "Lolita" stabbing herself in the legs.
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* CompleteMonster: "Strange Lolita"
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[http://i26.mangareader.net/ibitsu/13/ibitsu-1682264.jpg Have fun sleeping at night!]]
** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.
*** No, literally EVERYTHING. Every scene in which there are characters, Things will go bad and it will end horribly. You also will have nightmares. Guaranteed.
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[http://i26.mangareader.net/ibitsu/13/ibitsu-1682264.jpg Have fun sleeping at night!]]
** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.
*** No, literally EVERYTHING. Every scene in which there are characters, Things will go bad and it will end horribly. You also will have nightmares. Guaranteed.
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* CompleteMonster: "Strange Lolita"
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[http://i26.mangareader.net/ibitsu/13/ibitsu-1682264.jpg Have fun sleeping at night!]]
** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.
*** No, literally EVERYTHING. Every scene in which there are characters, Things will go bad and it will end horribly. You also will have nightmares. Guaranteed.Lolita"
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[http://i26.mangareader.net/ibitsu/13/ibitsu-1682264.jpg Have fun sleeping at night!]]
** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.
*** No, literally EVERYTHING. Every scene in which there are characters, Things will go bad and it will end horribly. You also will have nightmares. Guaranteed.
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** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.
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** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.fuck.
*** No, literally EVERYTHING. Every scene in which there are characters, Things will go bad and it will end horribly. You also will have nightmares. Guaranteed.
*** No, literally EVERYTHING. Every scene in which there are characters, Things will go bad and it will end horribly. You also will have nightmares. Guaranteed.
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[http://i26.mangareader.net/ibitsu/13/ibitsu-1682264.jpg Have fun sleeping at night!]]night!]]
** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.
** Basically, almost everything about Ibitsu is scary as fuck.
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* CompleteMonster: "Strange Lolita"Lolita"
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[http://i26.mangareader.net/ibitsu/13/ibitsu-1682264.jpg Have fun sleeping at night!]]
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: [[http://i26.mangareader.net/ibitsu/13/ibitsu-1682264.jpg Have fun sleeping at night!]]