Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Removed sinkhole(s) to Understatement.
Changed line(s) 50 (click to see context) from:
** The [[NiceGuysFinishLast apparent take]] on the breakdown of Snape and Lily's friendship has [[{{Understatement}} drawn some flak]], causing Yudkowsky to irritatedly point out that 'views expressed by Severus Snape are not necessarily those of the author'. He later admitted that he had been labouring under certain misconceptions regarding the nature of their relationship prior to the whole '[[FantasticRacism mudblood]]' incident - see DidNotDoTheResearch, above.
to:
** The [[NiceGuysFinishLast apparent take]] on the breakdown of Snape and Lily's friendship has [[{{Understatement}} drawn some flak]], flak, causing Yudkowsky to irritatedly point out that 'views expressed by Severus Snape are not necessarily those of the author'. He later admitted that he had been labouring under certain misconceptions regarding the nature of their relationship prior to the whole '[[FantasticRacism mudblood]]' incident - see DidNotDoTheResearch, above.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*** I think the implication here was less that she was prettier and able to get someone better, but more that the event led to Petunia being on better terms with her sister, which resulted in her growing into a more tolerant person.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 43 (click to see context) from:
** It's actually a bit of FridgeBrilliance. If Ron really does represent emotion, then ''of course'' Rationalist!Harry doesn't understand why he exists!
to:
** It's actually also a bit of FridgeBrilliance. If Ron really does represent emotion, then ''of course'' Rationalist!Harry doesn't understand why he exists!there is at least ''less'' need for him since ''this'' Harry isn't as emotionally damaged as canon!Harry.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
**Don't forget:
---> God he loved his Time-Turner and someday, when he was old enough, they would get married.
---> God he loved his Time-Turner and someday, when he was old enough, they would get married.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Your Mileage May Vary is no longer a trope.
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
* AuthorTract: Definitely, but [[TropesAreTools it's not]] [[YourMileageMayVary necessarily]] [[TropesAreTools a bad thing]].
to:
* AuthorTract: Definitely, but [[TropesAreTools it's not]] [[YourMileageMayVary necessarily]] [[TropesAreTools not necessarily a bad thing]].
Changed line(s) 57,59 (click to see context) from:
* TheWoobie: Poor, poor Bellatrix. Quite remarkable, considering that her characterization here is merely an expansion upon her characterization in canon.
* YourMileageMayVary: This story, as pointed out earlier, seems to be a LoveItOrHateIt situation all around. Reviewers seem torn between loving the story for its rationalist approach and the comedic situations that follow to hating it for its re-characterizations, pacing, and often rather scattershot tone. Consider: In nine months, the 60-chapter, 336,500-word story has [[ReadingsAreOffTheScale over 9,000]] reviews, yet has only made it to February of Harry's first year at Hogwarts. This has led many to wonder just how many [[WrongTurnAtAlbuquerque Wrong Turns]] will actually drive the plot in some manner.
** Additionally, what some reviewers might identify as fallacies in the author's own reasoning (as well as the UnfortunateImplications above) are not universally accepted as such, so there's been a lot of spirited debate on both sides of any perceived issue with the fic.
* YourMileageMayVary: This story, as pointed out earlier, seems to be a LoveItOrHateIt situation all around. Reviewers seem torn between loving the story for its rationalist approach and the comedic situations that follow to hating it for its re-characterizations, pacing, and often rather scattershot tone. Consider: In nine months, the 60-chapter, 336,500-word story has [[ReadingsAreOffTheScale over 9,000]] reviews, yet has only made it to February of Harry's first year at Hogwarts. This has led many to wonder just how many [[WrongTurnAtAlbuquerque Wrong Turns]] will actually drive the plot in some manner.
** Additionally, what some reviewers might identify as fallacies in the author's own reasoning (as well as the UnfortunateImplications above) are not universally accepted as such, so there's been a lot of spirited debate on both sides of any perceived issue with the fic.
to:
* TheWoobie: Poor, poor Bellatrix. Quite remarkable, considering that her characterization here is merely an expansion upon her characterization in canon.
* YourMileageMayVary: This story, as pointed out earlier, seems to be a LoveItOrHateIt situation all around. Reviewers seem torn between loving the story for its rationalist approach and the comedic situations that follow to hating it for its re-characterizations, pacing, and often rather scattershot tone. Consider: In nine months, the 60-chapter, 336,500-word story has [[ReadingsAreOffTheScale over 9,000]] reviews, yet has only made it to February of Harry's first year at Hogwarts. This has led many to wonder just how many [[WrongTurnAtAlbuquerque Wrong Turns]] will actually drive the plot in some manner.
** Additionally, what some reviewers might identify as fallacies in the author's own reasoning (as well as the UnfortunateImplications above) are not universally accepted as such, so there's been a lot of spirited debate on both sides of any perceived issue with the fic.canon.
* YourMileageMayVary: This story, as pointed out earlier, seems to be a LoveItOrHateIt situation all around. Reviewers seem torn between loving the story for its rationalist approach and the comedic situations that follow to hating it for its re-characterizations, pacing, and often rather scattershot tone. Consider: In nine months, the 60-chapter, 336,500-word story has [[ReadingsAreOffTheScale over 9,000]] reviews, yet has only made it to February of Harry's first year at Hogwarts. This has led many to wonder just how many [[WrongTurnAtAlbuquerque Wrong Turns]] will actually drive the plot in some manner.
** Additionally, what some reviewers might identify as fallacies in the author's own reasoning (as well as the UnfortunateImplications above) are not universally accepted as such, so there's been a lot of spirited debate on both sides of any perceived issue with the fic.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** It's actually a bit of FridgeBrilliance. If Ron really does represent emotion, then ''of course'' Rationalist!Harry doesn't understand why he exists!
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
**** Well. Technically coming from non-English-speaker culture and being non-English speaker are two different things...
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*** Techically NP-complete problem can be solved quickly iff P=NP.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* HighOctaneNightmareFuel:
** [[spoiler: DO NOT MESS WITH TIME]]
** [[spoiler: When Harry catches the Remembrall, and it glows like a sun.]]
** [=McGonagall=]'s speech about the dangers of transfiguration.
--> If you transfigure your hair blonde it will fall out. If you transform your skin to be clear...you will be very ill and spend a long time at St.Mungos.
** The terrifying ''Welcome to the Real World'' {{Omake}} in Chapter 64.
** [[spoiler:After meeting the Dementors, Harry briefly becomes hyper-rationalist. Specifically, he divides everyone into useful or non-useful categories. If they aren't useful, if they're doing so much as annoying him by crying, he wants to kill them.]]
** [[spoiler: DO NOT MESS WITH TIME]]
** [[spoiler: When Harry catches the Remembrall, and it glows like a sun.]]
** [=McGonagall=]'s speech about the dangers of transfiguration.
--> If you transfigure your hair blonde it will fall out. If you transform your skin to be clear...you will be very ill and spend a long time at St.Mungos.
** The terrifying ''Welcome to the Real World'' {{Omake}} in Chapter 64.
** [[spoiler:After meeting the Dementors, Harry briefly becomes hyper-rationalist. Specifically, he divides everyone into useful or non-useful categories. If they aren't useful, if they're doing so much as annoying him by crying, he wants to kill them.]]
Changed line(s) 32,39 (click to see context) from:
** Read chapter 31; the "no reason to exist" comment was meant to set up a flaw of Harry's- namely the assumption that he is always the smartest one in the room and as such no one else can contribute. Harry (and Draco) tries to run his army by himself while Hermione uses the strategic genius of Ron (and others) to make up for any shortcomings of her's.
* NightmareFuel:
** [[spoiler: DO NOT MESS WITH TIME]]
** [[spoiler: When Harry catches the Remembrall, and it glows like a sun.]]
** [=McGonagall=]'s speech about the dangers of transfiguration.
--> If you transfigure your hair blonde it will fall out. If you transform your skin to be clear...you will be very ill and spend a long time at St.Mungos.
** The terrifying ''Welcome to the Real World'' {{Omake}} in Chapter 64.
** [[spoiler:After meeting the Dementors, Harry briefly becomes hyper-rationalist. Specifically, he divides everyone into useful or non-useful categories. If they aren't useful, if they're doing so much as annoying him by crying, he wants to kill them.]]
* NightmareFuel:
** [[spoiler: DO NOT MESS WITH TIME]]
** [[spoiler: When Harry catches the Remembrall, and it glows like a sun.]]
** [=McGonagall=]'s speech about the dangers of transfiguration.
--> If you transfigure your hair blonde it will fall out. If you transform your skin to be clear...you will be very ill and spend a long time at St.Mungos.
** The terrifying ''Welcome to the Real World'' {{Omake}} in Chapter 64.
** [[spoiler:After meeting the Dementors, Harry briefly becomes hyper-rationalist. Specifically, he divides everyone into useful or non-useful categories. If they aren't useful, if they're doing so much as annoying him by crying, he wants to kill them.]]
to:
** Read chapter 31; the "no reason to exist" comment was meant to set up a flaw of Harry's- namely the assumption that he is always the smartest one in the room and as such no one else can contribute. Harry (and Draco) tries to run his army by himself while Hermione uses the strategic genius of Ron (and others) to make up for any shortcomings of her's.
* NightmareFuel:
** [[spoiler: DO NOT MESS WITH TIME]]
** [[spoiler: When Harry catches the Remembrall, and it glows like a sun.]]
** [=McGonagall=]'s speech about the dangers of transfiguration.
--> If you transfigure your hair blonde it will fall out. If you transform your skin to be clear...you will be very ill and spend a long time at St.Mungos.
** The terrifying ''Welcome to the Real World'' {{Omake}} in Chapter 64.
** [[spoiler:After meeting the Dementors, Harry briefly becomes hyper-rationalist. Specifically, he divides everyone into useful or non-useful categories. If they aren't useful, if they're doing so much as annoying him by crying, he wants to kill them.]]hers.
* NightmareFuel:
** [[spoiler: DO NOT MESS WITH TIME]]
** [[spoiler: When Harry catches the Remembrall, and it glows like a sun.]]
** [=McGonagall=]'s speech about the dangers of transfiguration.
--> If you transfigure your hair blonde it will fall out. If you transform your skin to be clear...you will be very ill and spend a long time at St.Mungos.
** The terrifying ''Welcome to the Real World'' {{Omake}} in Chapter 64.
** [[spoiler:After meeting the Dementors, Harry briefly becomes hyper-rationalist. Specifically, he divides everyone into useful or non-useful categories. If they aren't useful, if they're doing so much as annoying him by crying, he wants to kill them.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** [[spoiler:After meeting the Dementors, Harry briefly becomes hyper-rationalist. Specifically, he divides everyone into useful or non-useful categories. If they aren't useful, if they're doing so much as annoying him by crying, he wants to kill them.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 42 (click to see context) from:
** Also and [[YMMV arguably more so]] the very next chapter, Chapter 47.
to:
** Also and [[YMMV [[YourMileageMayVary arguably more so]] the very next chapter, Chapter 47.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Also and [[YMMV arguably more so]] the very next chapter, Chapter 47.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 18,20 (click to see context) from:
** Exhibit A: The Pioneer plaque.
** Exhibit B: [[ItMakesSenseInContext The remains of a beautiful blue beetle.]]
** Exhibit C: Bellatrix Black.
** Exhibit B: [[ItMakesSenseInContext The remains of a beautiful blue beetle.]]
** Exhibit C: Bellatrix Black.
to:
** Exhibit A: The Pioneer plaque.
plaque [[spoiler: is a horcrux.]]
** Exhibit B: [[ItMakesSenseInContext The remains of a beautiful bluebeetle.]]
beetle are seen in his office]] [[spoiler: suggesting that he has killed Rita Skeeter.]]
** Exhibit C: BellatrixBlack.Black [[spoiler: has been broken out of prison by him and Harry.]]
** Exhibit B: [[ItMakesSenseInContext The remains of a beautiful blue
** Exhibit C: Bellatrix
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Chapter 72 shows that [[spoiler: he is on his way to a HeelFaceTurn]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** Read chapter 31; the "no reason to exist" comment was meant to set up a flaw of Harry's- namely the assumption that he is always the smartest one in the room and as such no one else can contribute. Harry (and Draco) tries to run his army by himself while Hermione uses the strategic genius of Ron (and others) to make up for any shortcomings of her's.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* TastesLikeDiabetes: Harry's "romantic" first date, organized by the rest of the girls in his class. He is not. Happy. At all.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
** He's still a VillainProtagonist at worst. And there's a little "pantsification" when Harry points out to himself that Draco is not a psychopath -- he's just the product of a very old and familiar culture in which nobles are above the law and in which you don't treat enemies as people. One of Harry's major goals after all is to "turn" Draco.
to:
** He's still a VillainProtagonist at worst. And there's a little "pantsification" when Harry points out to himself that Draco is not a psychopath -- he's just the product of a very old and familiar culture in which nobles are above the law and in which you don't treat enemies as people. One of Harry's major goals after all is to "turn" Draco. And while that may be rationally excusable, Harry at several points implies he considers Draco a genuine friend, despite him never having renounced the whole child rape thing.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* FridgeHorror: If horcruxes work the same way as in canon, then [[spoiler:someone has been horribly murdered while in the presence of the Pioneer plaque]] and the deed has been covered up afterwards.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 47 (click to see context) from:
* TheWoobie: Poor, poor Bella. Quite remarkable, considering that her characterization here is merely an expansion upon her characterization in canon.
to:
** Apparently, the only thing keeping Petunia with Vernon Dursley in-canon was that she didn't think she was pretty enough to get someone better. Never mind that the canon indicates that they sincerely love each other and Dudley, this Petunia has enough strength of character to leave Vernon after he wants to give their future child a silly name, but not enough to even try and convince him otherwise.
* TheWoobie: Poor, poorBella.Bellatrix. Quite remarkable, considering that her characterization here is merely an expansion upon her characterization in canon.
* TheWoobie: Poor, poor
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* MisaimedFandom: The author, like a lot of readers, seems to have missed the point of Ron, and "sees no reason for him to exist". Canonically, Ron represents emotion, as Hermione represents reason. Largely excising him from the story leaves out some great opportunities for character development for the hyper-rational Harry. On the other hand, their friendship was founded largely on Harry ''not'' being kind of a jerk.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not a YMMV trope. I\'ll probably see about moving it properly to the main page in the morning since it\'s not much good there as is.
Deleted line(s) 35 (click to see context) :
* OrwellianRetCon: See UnfortunateImplications below.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
moving an in-universe example back to the Main
Deleted line(s) 15 (click to see context) :
* LowestCommonDenominator: Harry suspects the Sorting Hat is being forced to fill up Slytherin with these people because Death Eater reputation leads to anyone with a brain pleading with the hat not to be put into Slytherin.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Welcome to the Real World deeply frightened me
Added DiffLines:
** The terrifying ''Welcome to the Real World'' {{Omake}} in Chapter 64.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*** Yes, and English-speaking people (which is everyone reading this fic) are capable of being offended...
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
*** That strikes me as being more of a TakeThat against English-speaking cultures than a mockery of non-English-speaking cultures.
to:
*** That strikes me as being more a case of a TakeThat against English-speaking cultures SelfDeprecation, rather than a mockery of non-English-speaking cultures.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 45 (click to see context) from:
*** That strikes me as being more of a TakeThat against English-speakers.
to:
*** That strikes me as being more of a TakeThat against English-speakers.English-speaking cultures than a mockery of non-English-speaking cultures.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*** That strikes me as being more of a TakeThat against English-speakers.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Moved back to main as an in-universe trope.
Deleted line(s) 35,37 (click to see context) :
* NoTrueScotsman: Harry tries to convince the Sorting Hat that he's not like the other potential Dark Lords the hat has met:
-->'''Harry:''' Just what kind of statistical summary do your 'feelings' come from, anyway! Do they take into account that I come from an Enlightenment culture, or were these other potential Dark Lords the children of spoiled Dark Age nobility, who didn't know doodly-squat about the historical lessons of how Lenin and Hitler actually turned out, or about the evolutionary psychology of self-delusion, or the value of self-awareness and rationality, or -
-->'''Hat:''' No, of course they were not in this new reference class which you have [[MovingTheGoalposts just now constructed]] in such a way [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative as to contain only yourself.]]
-->'''Harry:''' Just what kind of statistical summary do your 'feelings' come from, anyway! Do they take into account that I come from an Enlightenment culture, or were these other potential Dark Lords the children of spoiled Dark Age nobility, who didn't know doodly-squat about the historical lessons of how Lenin and Hitler actually turned out, or about the evolutionary psychology of self-delusion, or the value of self-awareness and rationality, or -
-->'''Hat:''' No, of course they were not in this new reference class which you have [[MovingTheGoalposts just now constructed]] in such a way [[OverlyNarrowSuperlative as to contain only yourself.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
** He's still a VillainProtagonist at worst. And there's a little "pantsification" when Harry points out to himself that Draco is not a psychopath -- he's just the product of a very old and familiar culture in which nobles are above the law and in which you don't treat enemies as people. One of Harry's major goals after all is to "turn" Draco.
Added DiffLines:
*** He may be enraged by the recklessness of science's openness with dangerous secrets, but he's more than willing to exploit Muggle technology and resources in ways "no blood purist" would think of. (e.g. [[spoiler:The phone book or the Pioneer 11 probe.]])
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* CargoShip:
---> Harry was in love. It would be a three-way wedding: him, the Time-Turner, and [[HoYay Professor Quirrell]].
---> Harry was in love. It would be a three-way wedding: him, the Time-Turner, and [[HoYay Professor Quirrell]].