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Nobody forgot that.
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** And let's not forget the numerous shots in the Western countryside where you can see tire tracks from cars in the grass.
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** And let's not forget the The numerous shots in the Western countryside where you can see tire tracks from cars in the grass.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The mayor. With Cane's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cane arrested or arm himself for self-defense on an equal level. Even after he witnesses Joshua get shot, he remains unarmed and in the open while his wife goes to find a gun. She ends up TakingTheBullet for him and he dies moments later.
** Well, he *did* have that pitchfork...
** Well, he *did* have that pitchfork...
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* HoYay: Implied after the mayor's wife kisses Rose's cheek.
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* HoYay: LesYay: Implied after the mayor's wife kisses Rose's cheek.
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** Well, he *did* have that pitchfork...
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** Well, he *did* have that pitchfork...pitchfork...
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* LesYay: Implied after the mayor's wife kisses Rose's cheek.
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* LesYay: HoYay: Implied after the mayor's wife kisses Rose's cheek.
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I made "mayor" lower case. The word isn't capitalized when it's not in the form of a name.
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* LesYay: Implied after the Mayor's wife kisses Rose's cheek.
* MoralEventHorizon: Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife. He was aiming for the Mayor, but shows absolutely no guilt or remorse over his mistake.
* MoralEventHorizon: Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife. He was aiming for the Mayor, but shows absolutely no guilt or remorse over his mistake.
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* LesYay: Implied after the Mayor's mayor's wife kisses Rose's cheek.
* MoralEventHorizon: Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots theMayor's mayor's wife. He was aiming for the Mayor, mayor, but shows absolutely no guilt or remorse over his mistake.
* MoralEventHorizon: Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cane's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cane arrested or arm himself for self-defense on an equal level. Even after he witnesses Joshua get shot, he remains unarmed and in the open while his wife goes to find a gun. She ends up TakingTheBullet for him and he dies moments later.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor.mayor. With Cane's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cane arrested or arm himself for self-defense on an equal level. Even after he witnesses Joshua get shot, he remains unarmed and in the open while his wife goes to find a gun. She ends up TakingTheBullet for him and he dies moments later.
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** And let's not forget the numerous shots in the Western countryside where you can see tire tracks from cars in the grass.
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* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times:
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* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring A few incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times:
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** There are several action scenes where people are clearly just walking behind the false fronts of the building, even taking cover behind them in ways that should mean they're standing inside a wall.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cane's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cane arrested or arm himself for self-defense on an equal level. Even after he witnesses Joshua get shot, he remains unarmed and in the open while his wife goes to find a gun. She ends up TakingTheBullet for him and he dies moments later.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cane's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cane arrested or arm himself for self-defense on an equal level. Even after he witnesses Joshua get shot, he remains unarmed and in the open while his wife goes to find a gun. She ends up TakingTheBullet for him and he dies moments later.later.
** Well, he *did* have that pitchfork...
** Well, he *did* have that pitchfork...
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* TheyJustDidntCare: One scene opens with two horsemen standing around waiting for their cue. They didn't even trim the shot.
-->'''Joel:''' Cue the horses!\\
'''Crow:''' '''''Corman!'''''
** Characters frequently just walk out from behind the false fronts that make up the town. A few of the gunfights actually seem to incorporate it.
-->'''Joel:''' Cue the horses!\\
'''Crow:''' '''''Corman!'''''
** Characters frequently just walk out from behind the false fronts that make up the town. A few of the gunfights actually seem to incorporate it.
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** Characters frequently just walk out from behind the false fronts that make up the town. A few of the gunfights actually seem to incorporate it.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Caine doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife (he was aiming for the Mayor, but still...)
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times. The first is when Erica enters Caine's room and the door opens ''outward'', leading to the first of many running gags:
-->'''Crow:''' Wha... Doors don't open like that! There's a number... ''he's in the hall!''
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times. The first is when Erica enters Caine's room and the door opens ''outward'', leading to the first of many running gags:
-->'''Crow:''' Wha... Doors don't open like that! There's a number... ''he's in the hall!''
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* MoralEventHorizon: Caine Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife (he wife. He was aiming for the Mayor, but still...)
shows absolutely no guilt or remorse over his mistake.
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multipletimes. times:
** The first is when Erica entersCaine's Cane's room and the door opens ''outward'', leading to the first of many running gags:
-->'''Crow:''' --->'''Crow:''' Wha... Doors don't open like that! There's a number... ''he's in the hall!''
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple
** The first is when Erica enters
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Caine's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Caine arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.
** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.
*** It's not even that: He remained unarmed even after witnessing Joshua get shot and it was his wife's idea to go ''find'' a gun, not retrieve one, while he stayed out in the open.
** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.
*** It's not even that: He remained unarmed even after witnessing Joshua get shot and it was his wife's idea to go ''find'' a gun, not retrieve one, while he stayed out in the open.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Caine's Cane's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Caine Cane arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself level. Even after he witnesses Joshua get shot, he remains unarmed and in the open while his wife dying needlessly.
** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wifegoes to get his gun, but she's killed find a gun. She ends up TakingTheBullet for him.
*** It's not even that: He remained unarmed even after witnessing Joshua get shothim and it was his wife's idea to go ''find'' a gun, not retrieve one, while he stayed out in the open.dies moments later.
** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife
*** It's not even that: He remained unarmed even after witnessing Joshua get shot
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** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.
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** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife (he was aiming for the Mayor, but still...)
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times. The first is when Erica enters Cane's room and the door opens ''outward'', leading to the first of many running gags:
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times. The first is when Erica enters Cane's room and the door opens ''outward'', leading to the first of many running gags:
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* MoralEventHorizon: Cane Caine doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife (he was aiming for the Mayor, but still...)
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times. The first is when Erica entersCane's Caine's room and the door opens ''outward'', leading to the first of many running gags:
* SpecialEffectsFailure: Two glaring incidents in the movie, and they're done multiple times. The first is when Erica enters
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* TheyJustDidntCare: One scene opens with three horseman standing around waiting for their cue. They didn't even trim the shot.
-->'''Joel:''' Cue the horses!
-->'''Crow:''' '''''Corman'''''!
* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cain's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cain arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.
-->'''Joel:''' Cue the horses!
-->'''Crow:''' '''''Corman'''''!
* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cain's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cain arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.
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* TheyJustDidntCare: One scene opens with three horseman two horsemen standing around waiting for their cue. They didn't even trim the shot.
-->'''Joel:''' Cue thehorses!
-->'''Crow:''' '''''Corman'''''!
horses!\\
'''Crow:''' '''''Corman!'''''
* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. WithCain's Caine's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cain Caine arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.
-->'''Joel:''' Cue the
-->'''Crow:''' '''''Corman'''''!
'''Crow:''' '''''Corman!'''''
* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With
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** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.
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** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.him.
*** It's not even that: He remained unarmed even after witnessing Joshua get shot and it was his wife's idea to go ''find'' a gun, not retrieve one, while he stayed out in the open.
*** It's not even that: He remained unarmed even after witnessing Joshua get shot and it was his wife's idea to go ''find'' a gun, not retrieve one, while he stayed out in the open.
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-->'''Joel:''' Cue the horses!
-->'''Crow:''' '''''Corman'''''!
-->'''Crow:''' '''''Corman'''''!
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* TheyJustDidntCare: One scene opens with three horseman standing around waiting for their cue. They didn't even trim the shot.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cain's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cain arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.
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* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cain's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cain arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.needlessly.
** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.
** In defense of the last one, before the final confrontation, he tells his wife to get get his gun, but she's killed TakingTheBullet for him.
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** Another are some of the nighttime scenes where you know it's still sunny out there. One scene accidentally gives Rose an eerie glow to her, leaving Servo to let out a hum similar to ''Film/{{Cocoon}}''
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** Another are some of the nighttime scenes where you know it's still sunny out there. One scene accidentally gives Rose an eerie glow to her, leaving Servo to let out a hum similar to ''Film/{{Cocoon}}''''Film/{{Cocoon}}''
* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cain's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cain arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.
* WhatAnIdiot: The Mayor. With Cain's increased desire and efforts to kill him, he does nothing to have Cain arrested or does nothing to arm himself for self-defense on an equal level, leading to both himself and his wife dying needlessly.
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** Another are some of the nighttime scenes where you know it's still sunny out there. One scene accidentally gives Rose an eerie glow to her, leaving Servo to let out a hum similar to ''Film/Cocoon''
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** Another are some of the nighttime scenes where you know it's still sunny out there. One scene accidentally gives Rose an eerie glow to her, leaving Servo to let out a hum similar to ''Film/Cocoon''''Film/{{Cocoon}}''
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* LesYay: Implied after the Mayor's wife kisses Rose's cheek.
* MoralEventHorizon: Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife (he was aiming for the Mayor, but still...)
* MoralEventHorizon: Cane doesn't actually cross this until he shoots the Mayor's wife (he was aiming for the Mayor, but still...)