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** Dima, a kind and very smart, but subsequently very nerdy, little Russian boy who hasn't quite managed to get the hang of English yet.
** Emily as well, as she's small and mousy with hair like a dandelion, and though she means well she comes off a bit dorky in her excitement to learn more about the present. [[spoiler: This goes away as she begins showing her crueler nature, with even her appearance changing to make her look less mousy.]]
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then ruining that too by trying to kill her and her family? Grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be? All of them?]]
** Emily as well, as she's small and mousy with hair like a dandelion, and though she means well she comes off a bit dorky in her excitement to learn more about the present. [[spoiler: This goes away as she begins showing her crueler nature, with even her appearance changing to make her look less mousy.]]
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then ruining that too by trying to kill her and her family? Grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be? All of them?]]
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** Dima, a kind and very smart, but subsequently very nerdy, little short Russian boy who hasn't quite managed to get the hang of English yet.
yet.
** Emilyas well, as she's small is small, thin, and mousy with hair like a dandelion, and though she means well she comes off a bit dorky in her excitement to learn more about the present. [[spoiler: This goes away as she begins showing her crueler nature, with even her appearance changing to make her look less mousy.]]
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation:[[spoiler:After After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then ruining that too by trying to kill her and her family? Grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be? All of them?]]them?
** Emily
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation:
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: When Anya first meets Emily in the well, there's something [[BlackComedy funny]] about how she keeps acting [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror unbothered]] by her situation. The more she [[InnocentlyInsensitive casually]] brings up things like [[AndIMustScream how she died of thirst or how she can't smell anymore]], the more it [[NotHelpingYourCase freaks out]] Anya that she could end up like Emily if she doesn't get out.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Anya comforts Dima. It's actually very meaningful than it appears because, initially, Anya wanted nothing to do with him.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Anya comforts Dima. It's actually very meaningful than it appears because, initially, Anya wanted nothing to do with him.
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: When Anya first meets Emily in the well, there's something [[BlackComedy darkly funny]] about how she keeps acting [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror unbothered]] by her Anya's situation. The more she Emily [[InnocentlyInsensitive casually]] brings up things like [[AndIMustScream how she likely died of thirst or how she can't smell anymore]], the more it [[NotHelpingYourCase freaks out]] Anya that she could end up like Emily if she doesn't get out.
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Anya comforts Dima. It's actually very meaningfulthan it appears because, because initially, Anya wanted nothing to do with him.him and [[AnnoyingYoungerSibling considered him annoying]].
* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Anya comforts Dima. It's actually very meaningful
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** Anya telling Dima that he [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre doesn't deserve to be bullied]], and that "impressing a bunch of snooty teenagers" is a "pretty lame life goal". This shows marvelous CharacterDevelopment from the girl who thought she wanted to have [[spoiler: Sean's attention]]. If she can show more personal growth in a couple weeks than a [[spoiler: a ghost ever did in ninety years]], then she's doing something right.
** Anya's [[spoiler: second-to-last]] confrontation with [[spoiler: Emily]].
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Emily's]] last rant and departure.
* ViewerGenderConfusion: Apart from the obscure feminine name and a couple fleeting snippets of dialogue, it can be hard for some readers to tell that Siobhan's a girl. It doesn't help that she wears a necktie and the male school uniform.
** Anya's [[spoiler: second-to-last]] confrontation with [[spoiler: Emily]].
* TearJerker: [[spoiler: Emily's]] last rant and departure.
* ViewerGenderConfusion: Apart from the obscure feminine name and a couple fleeting snippets of dialogue, it can be hard for some readers to tell that Siobhan's a girl. It doesn't help that she wears a necktie and the male school uniform.
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** Anya telling Dima that he [[YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre doesn't deserve to be bullied]], and that "impressing a bunch of snooty teenagers" is a "pretty lame life goal". This shows marvelous CharacterDevelopment from the girl who thought she wanted to have [[spoiler: Sean's attention]]. attention and not appear as Russian as she is. If she can show more personal growth in a couple weeks than a [[spoiler: a ghost ever did in ninety years]], years, then she's doing something right.
**Anya's [[spoiler: second-to-last]] [[spoiler:Anya's second-to-last confrontation with [[spoiler: Emily]].
Emily She outright bolts for the park with Emily's [[SoulJar little finger bone]] in her hand and then, when Emily threatens her, she just drops it in the well -- sending Emily plummeting with it.]]
* TearJerker:[[spoiler: Emily's]] Emily's last rant gasp towards life and departure.
departure. At first she's standing, barely able to hold her bones up out of the well; then after Anya's rant, there are tears in her eyes just before her bones fall into the well, while her spirit drifts up to heaven.
* ViewerGenderConfusion: Apart from the obscure feminine name and a couple fleeting snippets of dialogue, it can be hard for some readers to tell that [[LadyLooksLikeADude Siobhan's agirl. girl]]. It doesn't help that she wears a necktie and [[{{Crossdresser}} the male school uniform.uniform]].
**
* TearJerker:
* ViewerGenderConfusion: Apart from the obscure feminine name and a couple fleeting snippets of dialogue, it can be hard for some readers to tell that [[LadyLooksLikeADude Siobhan's a
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** Dima is a sweet kid who gets picked on for being small and nerdy. His glasses have been broken so many times that he's excused from gym class.
** [[spoiler:At Matt's party, Elizabeth reveals that she knows Sean cheats on her, but she still stays with him and helps him cover it up because [[LoveMartyr she loves him that much.]]]]
** [[spoiler:At Matt's party, Elizabeth reveals that she knows Sean cheats on her, but she still stays with him and helps him cover it up because [[LoveMartyr she loves him that much.]]]]
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** Dima is a sweet kid who gets picked on for being small and nerdy. His glasses have been broken so many times that he's excused from gym class.
class because his family can't afford to keep replacing them.
**[[spoiler:At At Matt's party, Elizabeth reveals that she knows Sean cheats on her, but she still stays with him and helps him cover it up because [[LoveMartyr she loves him that much.]]]]]]
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** Dima. Poor, poor little Dima.
** After the reveal at Matt's party, [[spoiler:Elizabeth]] starts to be seen [[LoveMartyr like]] [[BrokenAce this]].
** After the reveal at Matt's party, [[spoiler:Elizabeth]] starts to be seen [[LoveMartyr like]] [[BrokenAce this]].
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** Dima. Poor, poor little Dima.
Dima is a sweet kid who gets picked on for being small and nerdy. His glasses have been broken so many times that he's excused from gym class.
**After the reveal at [[spoiler:At Matt's party, [[spoiler:Elizabeth]] starts to be seen Elizabeth reveals that she knows Sean cheats on her, but she still stays with him and helps him cover it up because [[LoveMartyr like]] [[BrokenAce this]].she loves him that much.]]]]
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* SugarWiki/FunnyMoments: When Anya first meets Emily in the well, there's something [[BlackComedy funny]] about how she keeps acting [[ConditionedToAcceptHorror unbothered]] by her situation. The more she [[InnocentlyInsensitive casually]] brings up things like [[AndIMustScream how she died of thirst or how she can't smell anymore]], the more it [[NotHelpingYourCase freaks out]] Anya that she could end up like Emily if she doesn't get out.
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* SugarWiki/FriendlyFandoms: With ''ComicBook/{{Persepolis}}'', after some people mistook this as being associated some way.
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* SugarWiki/FriendlyFandoms: FriendlyFandoms: With ''ComicBook/{{Persepolis}}'', after some people mistook this as being associated some way.
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* SugarWiki/FriendlyFandoms: With ''ComicBook/{{Persepolis}}'', after some people mistook this as being associated some way.
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* MemeticMutation: This is ''not'' ''ComicBook/{{Persepolis}}''. [[labelnote:Explanation]]The DeliberatelyMonochrome colour scheme, black-haired female protagonist, and the cover depicting them looking to the right has made a few people mistake this book for ''Persepolis''.[[/labelnote]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then ruining that too by trying to kill her and her family? Or just grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be?]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then ruining that too by trying to kill her and her family? Or just grief Grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be?]]be? All of them?]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then screwing that up too by trying to kill her and her family? Or just grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be?]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then screwing ruining that up too by trying to kill her and her family? Or just grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be?]]
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** Anya may technically count too.
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** Anya may technically count too.Anya, with certain shades of JerkassWoobie given her own flawed and selfish tendencies.
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** [[spoiler:[[LoveMartyr Elizabeth]]]].
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** [[spoiler:[[LoveMartyr Elizabeth]]]].After the reveal at Matt's party, [[spoiler:Elizabeth]] starts to be seen [[LoveMartyr like]] [[BrokenAce this]].
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Anya comforts Dima.
* IronWoobie: Dima.
* IronWoobie: Dima.
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* SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: When Anya comforts Dima.
Dima. It's actually very meaningful than it appears because, initially, Anya wanted nothing to do with him.
* IronWoobie: Dima. This kid gets bullied, his glasses broken, has a poorer family, and keeps to himself, all while being a nice, helpful little guy, yet he still keeps trucking.
* IronWoobie: Dima. This kid gets bullied, his glasses broken, has a poorer family, and keeps to himself, all while being a nice, helpful little guy, yet he still keeps trucking.
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* {{Adorkable}}:
** Dima, a kind and very smart, but subsequently very nerdy, little Russian boy who hasn't quite managed to get the hang of English yet.
** Emily as well, as she's small and mousy with hair like a dandelion, and though she means well she comes off a bit dorky in her excitement to learn more about the present. [[spoiler: This goes away as she begins showing her crueler nature, with even her appearance changing to make her look less mousy.]]
** Dima, a kind and very smart, but subsequently very nerdy, little Russian boy who hasn't quite managed to get the hang of English yet.
** Emily as well, as she's small and mousy with hair like a dandelion, and though she means well she comes off a bit dorky in her excitement to learn more about the present. [[spoiler: This goes away as she begins showing her crueler nature, with even her appearance changing to make her look less mousy.]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret (and more guilt), from finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then screwing that up too by trying to kill her and her family? Or just grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be?]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret (and more guilt), from Regret, at finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then screwing that up too by trying to kill her and her family? Or just grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be?]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: [[spoiler:After her final confrontation with Anya, and a last-minute TheReasonYouSuckSpeech, Emily has tears in her eyes just before her spirit floats up and off toward the sky. Could it be guilt, from finally realizing the true horror of her actions? Regret (and more guilt), from finally finding a friend in Anya after ninety years, and then screwing that up too by trying to kill her and her family? Or just grief at realizing that she's all alone and now always will be?]]
