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Sinkhole of a subjective trope. Opinions don\'t go in main pages
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--> '''Cute red-headed young woman [[OhCrap with horns]]:''' "[[ElfenLied N]][[NightmareFuel y]][[YankTheDogsChain N]] y[[YankTheDogsChain u]][[WhamLine ?]]"
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-->'''Sol''': (jokingly) Maybe they're Jovian!
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-->'''Sol''': (jokingly) Maybe they're Jovian!Jovian!
* The DoctorWho fanfiction ''Of More Value Than Many Sparrows'', in which [[spoiler: the Doctor takes a depressed Rose to visit New York.]]
-->"[[spoiler: She looked up and stared, her mouth hanging open, at buildings that should't be there.]]"
* The DoctorWho fanfiction ''Of More Value Than Many Sparrows'', in which [[spoiler: the Doctor takes a depressed Rose to visit New York.]]
-->"[[spoiler: She looked up and stared, her mouth hanging open, at buildings that should't be there.]]"
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--> '''Cute red-headed young woman [[OhCrap with horns]]:''' "[[ElfenLied N]][[HighOctaneNightmareFuel N]][[NightmareFuel y]][[YankTheDogsChain u]][[WhamLine ?]]"
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* ''{{Machinima}}/ClearSkies ''Machinima/ClearSkies 3''
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-->'''Gregory''': Here's the really unpleasant part Warwick. How many families do you know with that old photo on the mantle and the child who they don't talk about anymore?
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-->'''Gregory''': Here's the really unpleasant part Warwick. How many families do you know with that old photo on the mantle and the child who they don't talk about anymore?anymore?
* ''ClearSkies 3''
-->'''Sol''': (jokingly) Maybe they're Jovian!
* ''ClearSkies 3''
-->'''Sol''': (jokingly) Maybe they're Jovian!
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* NGE PeggySue fanfic ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' pulls a [[AdultFear nasty twist]] at the end of Chapter 5:
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: [[RetGone We had a child.]]]]
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: [[RetGone We had a child.]]]]
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* NGE PeggySue fanfic ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' pulls a [[AdultFear [[RetGone nasty twist]] at the end of Chapter 5:
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler:[[RetGone We had a child.]]]]]]
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler:
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* From chapter 7 of ''[[{{FanFic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]'':War]]'':
** Chapter 7
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-->'''Black Star''': ''(to Edge)'' I do not ask her (Firefly) for forgiveness or mercy, but... tell her that... [[spoiler: I feel regret for killing her parents]]. Let her know that.
-->'''Black Star''': ''(to Edge)'' I do not ask her (Firefly) for forgiveness or mercy, but... tell her that... [[spoiler: I feel regret for killing her parents]]. Let her know that.
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--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: We had a child.]]
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: We had a child.]]
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* NGE PeggySue fanfic ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' pulls a [[RetGone [[AdultFear nasty twist]] at the end of Chapter 5:
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: [[RetGone We had a child.]]]]]]
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: [[RetGone We had a child.
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* NGE PeggySue fanfic ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' pulls a [[RetGone nasty twist]] at the end of Chapter 5:
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: We had a child.]]
--> '''Shinji''': [[spoiler: We had a child.]]
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* ''AvatarsIIWhenQwaritchTakesRevenge'' In the third installment, when Quaritch hears about the Navi harem. ("His(sic) room on your left is the Navi harem.")
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* ''AvatarsIIWhenQwaritchTakesRevenge'' ''FanFic/AvatarsIIWhenQwaritchTakesRevenge'' In the third installment, when Quaritch hears about the Navi harem. ("His(sic) room on your left is the Navi harem.")
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totally heartwrenching moment
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-->'''Masaru, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Arashi no Sasuke/Sasuke Uchiha]]''': Uchiha Yumi...I swear by this blood that I will have my revenge for [[[spoiler:Sakura]]]. Every drop of blood that your spilled will be repaid ten times over. I denounce you, Uchiha Yumi, you and your entire family as hypocrites and murderers. From this day forth, I and my children will never eat with you and yours. I arm myself against you
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-->'''Masaru, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Arashi no Sasuke/Sasuke Uchiha]]''': Uchiha Yumi...I swear by this blood that I will have my revenge for [[[spoiler:Sakura]]]. Every drop of blood that your spilled will be repaid ten times over. I denounce you, Uchiha Yumi, you and your entire family as hypocrites and murderers. From this day forth, I and my children will never eat with you and yours. I arm myself against youyou
* [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?p=7640065#post7640065 The Shadow State]]:
-->'''Gregory''': Here's the really unpleasant part Warwick. How many families do you know with that old photo on the mantle and the child who they don't talk about anymore?
* [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?p=7640065#post7640065 The Shadow State]]:
-->'''Gregory''': Here's the really unpleasant part Warwick. How many families do you know with that old photo on the mantle and the child who they don't talk about anymore?
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-->'''Masaru, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Arashi no Sasuke/Sasuke Uchiha]]''': Uchiha Yumi...I swear by this blood that I will have my revenge for [Sakura]. Every drop of blood that your spilled will be repaid ten times over. I denounce you, Uchiha Yumi, you and your entire family as hypocrites and murderers. From this day forth, I and my children will never eat with you and yours. I arm myself against you
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-->'''Masaru, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Arashi no Sasuke/Sasuke Uchiha]]''': Uchiha Yumi...I swear by this blood that I will have my revenge for [Sakura].[[[spoiler:Sakura]]]. Every drop of blood that your spilled will be repaid ten times over. I denounce you, Uchiha Yumi, you and your entire family as hypocrites and murderers. From this day forth, I and my children will never eat with you and yours. I arm myself against you
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* {{Fanfic/Hakumei}}: (extra jarring considering he's essentially leveling a blood feud ''against his own clan'')
-->'''Masaru, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Arashi no Sasuke/Sasuke Uchiha]]''': Uchiha Yumi...I swear by this blood that I will have my revenge for [Sakura]. Every drop of blood that your spilled will be repaid ten times over. I denounce you, Uchiha Yumi, you and your entire family as hypocrites and murderers. From this day forth, I and my children will never eat with you and yours. I arm myself against you
-->'''Masaru, a.k.a. [[spoiler:Arashi no Sasuke/Sasuke Uchiha]]''': Uchiha Yumi...I swear by this blood that I will have my revenge for [Sakura]. Every drop of blood that your spilled will be repaid ten times over. I denounce you, Uchiha Yumi, you and your entire family as hypocrites and murderers. From this day forth, I and my children will never eat with you and yours. I arm myself against you
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* ''Harry Potter'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5930349/13/Pretending_To_Live]] has the main Original Character drop this one on a sixteen year old Tom Riddle:
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* ''Harry Potter'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5930349/13/Pretending_To_Live]] net/s/5930349/13/Pretending_To_Live Pretending to Live]] has the main Original Character drop this one on a sixteen year old Tom Riddle:
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* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Anthropology Anthropology]]: Fanfic/{{Anthropology}}: "You weren’t born here in Equestria, Lyra.”
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-->'''Lilly''': "I-I’m sorry, but Hisao... [[spoiiler:p-passed away ye-yesterday]]"
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-->'''Lilly''': "I-I’m sorry, but Hisao... [[spoiiler:p-passed [[spoiler:Hisao... p-passed away ye-yesterday]]"
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---> '''[[spoiler: Auror Komodo]]''': Hermione Granger, you're [[spoiler: under arrest for the attempted murder of Draco Malfoy.]]
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---> '''[[spoiler: Auror Komodo]]''': Hermione Granger, you're [[spoiler: under arrest for the attempted murder of Draco Malfoy.]]]]
* Fanfic/HowIBecameYours
-->'''Mai''': You see all those years ago, when I got to your letter, something had to be done. [[ConvenientMiscarriage You where not sick]]... like I wanted everyone to believe... I had made something just for you to eat so that little problem would go away... and yes, I took [[RougeAnglesOfSatin pleaser]] in doing it...
* {{Fanfic/Reconciliation}}
** Chapter 3
-->'''Lilly''': "I-I’m sorry, but Hisao... [[spoiiler:p-passed away ye-yesterday]]"
** Chapter 8
-->'''[[OriginalCharacter Sho]]: “[[spoiler:[[NotSoDifferent I’m an orphan, you know]]."
* Fanfic/HowIBecameYours
-->'''Mai''': You see all those years ago, when I got to your letter, something had to be done. [[ConvenientMiscarriage You where not sick]]... like I wanted everyone to believe... I had made something just for you to eat so that little problem would go away... and yes, I took [[RougeAnglesOfSatin pleaser]] in doing it...
* {{Fanfic/Reconciliation}}
** Chapter 3
-->'''Lilly''': "I-I’m sorry, but Hisao... [[spoiiler:p-passed away ye-yesterday]]"
** Chapter 8
-->'''[[OriginalCharacter Sho]]: “[[spoiler:[[NotSoDifferent I’m an orphan, you know]]."
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* ''DeathNote'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7292991/1/Xanatos Xanatos]] starts off with L reconsidering his method of catching Kira, and so striking a deal with Rem. We're made to believe that she went along with his plan after L fakes his own death, but then chapter nine gave us this:
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* ''DeathNote'' ''Manga/DeathNote'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7292991/1/Xanatos Xanatos]] starts off with L reconsidering his method of catching Kira, and so striking a deal with Rem. We're made to believe that she went along with his plan after L fakes his own death, but then chapter nine gave us this:
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* ''HarryPOtterAndTheMethodsOfRationality'': ''HarryPOtterAndTheMethodsOfRationality'':
---> '''[[spoiler: Auror Komodo]]''': Hermione Granger, you're [[spoiler: under arrest for the attempted murder of Draco Malfoy.]]
---> '''[[spoiler: Auror Komodo]]''': Hermione Granger, you're [[spoiler: under arrest for the attempted murder of Draco Malfoy.]]
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-->'''Shizune''': I hit 'Send' as I turned the handle and walked in on Shiina[[hottip:*:Misha's real first name]] and Hisao [[spoiler:fucking on my bed]].
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-->'''Shizune''': I hit 'Send' as I turned the handle and walked in on Shiina[[hottip:*:Misha's real first name]] and Hisao [[spoiler:fucking on my bed]].bed]].
* ''HarryPOtterAndTheMethodsOfRationality'': Hermione Granger, you're [[spoiler: under arrest for the attempted murder of Draco Malfoy.]]
* ''HarryPOtterAndTheMethodsOfRationality'': Hermione Granger, you're [[spoiler: under arrest for the attempted murder of Draco Malfoy.]]
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* In the popular and acclaimed WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender series Alone: From chapter eleven - [[spoiler:"Wait. The Leader can bend two elements?" and "I believe you will have been here four years in two weeks?"]] The second being a sudden revelation of a TimeSkip, akin to a certain scene from OrderOfTheStick.
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* In the popular and acclaimed WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender series Alone: From chapter eleven - [[spoiler:"Wait. The Leader can bend two elements?" and "I believe you will have been here four years in two weeks?"]] The second being a sudden revelation of a TimeSkip, akin to a certain scene from OrderOfTheStick.OrderOfTheStick.
*From the KatawaShoujo fic, [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2708#p45716 From Shizune's perspective]]
-->'''Shizune''': I hit 'Send' as I turned the handle and walked in on Shiina[[hottip:*:Misha's real first name]] and Hisao [[spoiler:fucking on my bed]].
*From the KatawaShoujo fic, [[http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=2708#p45716 From Shizune's perspective]]
-->'''Shizune''': I hit 'Send' as I turned the handle and walked in on Shiina[[hottip:*:Misha's real first name]] and Hisao [[spoiler:fucking on my bed]].
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* ''Fanfic/{{RE-TAKE}}'': "You are an Angel."
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-->'''Firefly''': You remember when I told you girls that I have a good reason to hate the griffins? Well, Black Star is that reason. Because... he... he...! [[spoiler: He killed my parents!]]
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-->'''Firefly''': You remember when I told you girls that I have a good reason to hate the griffins? Well, [[spoiler: Black Star Star]] is that reason. Because... he... he...! [[spoiler: He killed my parents!]]
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* From chapter 7 of [[{{FanFic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]:
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* From chapter 7 of [[{{FanFic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} ''[[{{FanFic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]:War]]'':
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* From chapter 7 of [[{{FanFic/AceCombatTheEquestrianWar}} Ace Combat: The Equestrian War]]:
-->'''Firefly''': You remember when I told you girls that I have a good reason to hate the griffins? Well, Black Star is that reason. Because... he... he...! [[spoiler: He killed my parents!]]
-->'''Firefly''': You remember when I told you girls that I have a good reason to hate the griffins? Well, Black Star is that reason. Because... he... he...! [[spoiler: He killed my parents!]]
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* "[[Fanfic/DoomRepercussionsOfEvil No, John. You are the demons.]]"
* ''Fanfic/{{RE-TAKE}}'': "You are an Angel."
* '''[[Fanfic/NobodyDies More than there were before.]]'''
* ''Fanfic/{{Forward}}'': "Inducer One-One-Nine. (...) Kathryn Wade. ''Katie.''"
* ''Fanfic/MassVexations'': "You don't fucking understand! I knew she was going to [[ClusterFBomb fucking]] die ''since I fucking arrived on the fucking Citadel!''"
* ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars'': "You can call me LEGION."
* ''Fanfic/FuckTheJesusBeam'': " Are you kidding me, girl? I've been in stasis for over a HUNDRED MILLION YEARS. If anyone threatens my domain, they -will- die. But first, I shall reclaim it."
** Chapter 8:
-->Kaminic: Thank you. [[NiceJobFixingItVillain If it hadn't been for you]], I would have remained a slave for the rest of my life."
-->O.B.A.M.A.: You, You're..."
-->Kaminic: "[[BadassBoast The only Absolution given form. The Former God of Water. The Aspect of Evolution. The Name of A Thousand Suns. I am the Alpha and Omega, Beginning and End, I am HE Who is CALLED I AM, you arrogant bastard. I am the Logos, the Garden, the Primal Meme. I am Kaminic. And, I am your death]]."
* ''Fanfic/RelationshipsSeries'': "I think...you need to break up with Wendi and Nove, now."
* ''Fanfic/{{Renegade}}'': "You can't kill the Messiah."
* ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'': "Very well [...] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Butt]] we cannot do this. We can’t close the school. There is only one person who is capable of killing Voldemort and she is in the school. And her name is…………………………………………………………………..Enony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way."
* In ''{{Fanfic/Derelict}}'', Lieutenant Mackie figures out what the [[HPLovecraft SD Nyarlathotep]] is trying to accomplish after forty-five missions of complete mystery.
-->'''Mackie:''' [[OhCrap Oh my god!]] I know where she's going! Home! The Nyarlathotep is ''[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt going home!]]''"
* ''Fanfic/KyonBigDamnHero'': "Not half as monstrous as that thing you're trying to kiss."
* ''[[{{Fanfic/PokemonXDEnigmaShadowSeries}} Pokemon XD^3: The Waves of Truth]]'': It becomes pretty clear early on that Chapter 21 is a Wham Episode, but you can literally ''feel'' the trajectory of the entire story change the moment the doctor tells Rich that Anabel just miscarried twins that he didn't know about.
* ''Fanfic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami'': Chapter 6:
-->'''Blud''': "THAT'S WHERE [[RougeAnglesOfSatin YOUR]] WRONG MY SHINY HAIRED APPRENTICE. YOU SEE I ONLY PRETENDED TO BE YOUR SHINIGAMI BUT IN FACT I WAS [[FakeDefector L'S ALL ALONG]]. I GAVE HIM A LIFE NOTE AND ALL I HAVE TO DO IS WRITE L'S NAME IN IT AND HE WILL COME BACK TO LIFE AS GOOD AS NEW AND YOUR PLANS WILL HAVE BIN FOILLED!"
** Chapter 14, after Dark finds some familiar age/sex/location information on a Talk to Dead Dudes Note.
-->'''Dark''': "r u l lol?"
-->'''L''': "yep"
* ''Fanfic/MGLNCrisis'' Chapter 25:
-->'''Fate''': "I'm sorry, I can't. Mother, did you know you had a split personality disorder?"
* ''[[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences Half Life Hero Beggining]]'': "Combines leave my son alone" John Freeman said.
-->'''Gordon Freeman''': John Freeman you let next boss step on me and made me headcrab zombie. Combines came and put science in me and made me live and strong and big now. I make you and Henry Freeman headcrab zombies. Prepair to die.
* The ''Literature/{{Coraline}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5840525/1/ Right Beside You]]'' has ''two'' WHAM lines:
** Chapter 9: "Yes Coraline, I ''am'' the [[LukeIAmYourFather boy's father]]."
** Chapter 12: "… No, Richard. I'm not satisfied… at all."
* ''[[Fanfic.TDWTReducksRedux TDWT Reducks Redux]]'': "It is within my power to remove you from the position of host."
* From the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''[=/=]''ProblemSleuth'' crossover [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/256661/chapters/400499 The Sapphire of Alternia]]:
** Chapter 15: But the realization you’re actually having is that this case is just like all your other cases: a quarrel between a married couple.
** Chapter 24: The Sapphire of Alternia is the White King’s Scepter.
* A crossover story between ''CodeGeass'' and ''MobileSuitGundam00'' on the Anime Addventure features this Geass command by Rai on Setsuna for an experiment: "Setsuna F. Seiei, I command you to believe in God!"
** [[http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/display_comment.php?episode=230039&n=1&m=0&d=0 It was such a shocking command that a reader commented that he jumped in his seat!]]
* ''FanFic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns'':
--> '''Raonar:''' Ladies and gentlemen… I have just made the Archdemon smarter, and if it was not self-aware before, it definitely is now.
* ''AvatarsIIWhenQwaritchTakesRevenge'' In the third installment, when Quaritch hears about the Navi harem. ("His(sic) room on your left is the Navi harem.")
* ''Fanfic/NarutoVeanganceRevelaitons'': "well, u c that was an anitdote 2 wake her up, but it also [[FaceHeelTurn terns hur...CHRISTIN!]]"
** Chapter 14
-->'''Madara''': [[FreudianSlip JA]][[AuthorAvatar KE]]! U MUST KNOWETH SOMETHING! TALIANA! [[LukeIAmYourFather SHE IS THOU MOTHER]]!"
** This exchange.
-->'''Madara''': "YES! U WILL NEVR MAKE IT 2 DA COUMCOLS ROOM!"
-->'''Ronan''': "THA COUNCIL? IM LOKING 4 SAKUR!"
-->'''Madara''': "OH WELL DEN UR IN 4 A SURPRIS... 4 U C DIS IS THJE CUNCILS HEADQURTES!"
** At the end of Chapter 49, the Council declares that they will resurrect Sakura if Ronan wins their tournament. What makes it a Wham line? Sakura ''isn't dead yet'', and is killed immediately after they say this.
** This line from Chapter 70, or even the presence of a Chapter 70 in a fic that was set to end after 69 chapters.
-->Hello. Do not adjust your computer screen... for it is I, Benji (that guy Jake bitches about all the time)!
* Fanfic/ThanksKyubey: "...Good. It looks like our experiment was a success."
* ''FanFic/HuntingTheUnicorn,'' chapter eleven:
-->[[spoiler: '''Blaine:''']] ...I'm not a virgin.
** And in the twentieth chapter:
-->'''[[spoiler: Greg:]]''' Having a rough patch, [[CodeName Tom]]?
* ''SoulChess'': "Aizen! Kill yourself!"
* ''Fanfic/WhenThereWasATomorrow'': We're given the line "For now simply know that your prior feelings when we first met were understandable and I do not think poorly of you for them." Now, what makes this apparent CharacterDevelopment laden line so surprising? [[spoiler:''[[MindHive ''Legion]]'' is the one saying it!]] What makes it even [[BuffySpeak Whammier]] is that when Tali points out this change in behavior [[spoiler: Legion]] insists it's not calling itself [[spoiler: "I"]] and seems genuinely unaware that [[spoiler: it's]] doing so. The exact significance of this line has yet to be seen, however.
* ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'' has two:
** “The biggest thing is that there really isn't a curse on Ketafa.”
** “It's all been a real game, hasn't it.”
* ''DeathNote'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7292991/1/Xanatos Xanatos]] starts off with L reconsidering his method of catching Kira, and so striking a deal with Rem. We're made to believe that she went along with his plan after L fakes his own death, but then chapter nine gave us this:
-->''Still, maybe she [Rem] was wrong about L...maybe she shouldn't have killed him...''
* ''Harry Potter'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5930349/13/Pretending_To_Live]] has the main Original Character drop this one on a sixteen year old Tom Riddle:
-->''I can help you...with your Horcruxes.''
* Two in rapid succession at the end of ''Fanfic/StarsAbove'' Chapter 4:
-->[[EverybodysDeadDave "We're the only ones left."]]
-->"Neither of us killed it... you did."
* ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'', "Playtime":
--> '''Applejack''': AH AIN'T SAY YA LYIN'! YA '''ARE''' A LIE!
* ''Fanfic/DontNameIt'': You once again try to be the Jade Blood. [[TheOmnipotent And fail spectacularly]].
* The NeonGenesisEvangelion {{Crossover}} fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7595530/1/Birth_of_a_God Birth of a God]]'' ends its prologue chapter with one of the most epic TemptingFate -> WhamLine combinations ever.
--> '''[[AGodAmI Shinji]]:''' (to himself) "Well, at least (the next world) can't be as [[CrapsackWorld bad]] as [[TheEndOfEvangelion the one I just left]], [[TemptingFate right]]?"
--> '''Cute red-headed young woman [[OhCrap with horns]]:''' "[[ElfenLied N]][[HighOctaneNightmareFuel y]][[YankTheDogsChain u]][[WhamLine ?]]"
* In ''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm'', [[VisualNovel/AceAttorney Phoenix]] needs to stall for time in order to get more evidence to clear [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Rainbow Dash]]'s name. So what does he do? This:
-->'''Phoenix''': [[spoiler: The suspect the defense accuses is the witness... '''Fluttershy'''!]]
* ''Fanfic/FutariWaPrettyCureBlueMoon'': "If you won't take my word as [[spoiler:Nakata Ami, homeroom teacher of the Lily Class]], then take it as [[spoiler:Cure Dusk]], alright?"
* Fanfic/ACompleteTurnabout
-->'''[[spoiler:Ema Skye]]''' "[[spoiler: [[CatchPhrase Scientifically]] [[SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay speaking]],]] she is right.
* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Anthropology Anthropology]]: "You weren’t born here in Equestria, Lyra.”
* In the popular and acclaimed WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender series Alone: From chapter eleven - [[spoiler:"Wait. The Leader can bend two elements?" and "I believe you will have been here four years in two weeks?"]] The second being a sudden revelation of a TimeSkip, akin to a certain scene from OrderOfTheStick.
* ''Fanfic/{{RE-TAKE}}'': "You are an Angel."
* '''[[Fanfic/NobodyDies More than there were before.]]'''
* ''Fanfic/{{Forward}}'': "Inducer One-One-Nine. (...) Kathryn Wade. ''Katie.''"
* ''Fanfic/MassVexations'': "You don't fucking understand! I knew she was going to [[ClusterFBomb fucking]] die ''since I fucking arrived on the fucking Citadel!''"
* ''Fanfic/TiberiumWars'': "You can call me LEGION."
* ''Fanfic/FuckTheJesusBeam'': " Are you kidding me, girl? I've been in stasis for over a HUNDRED MILLION YEARS. If anyone threatens my domain, they -will- die. But first, I shall reclaim it."
** Chapter 8:
-->Kaminic: Thank you. [[NiceJobFixingItVillain If it hadn't been for you]], I would have remained a slave for the rest of my life."
-->O.B.A.M.A.: You, You're..."
-->Kaminic: "[[BadassBoast The only Absolution given form. The Former God of Water. The Aspect of Evolution. The Name of A Thousand Suns. I am the Alpha and Omega, Beginning and End, I am HE Who is CALLED I AM, you arrogant bastard. I am the Logos, the Garden, the Primal Meme. I am Kaminic. And, I am your death]]."
* ''Fanfic/RelationshipsSeries'': "I think...you need to break up with Wendi and Nove, now."
* ''Fanfic/{{Renegade}}'': "You can't kill the Messiah."
* ''Fanfic/MyImmortal'': "Very well [...] [[RougeAnglesOfSatin Butt]] we cannot do this. We can’t close the school. There is only one person who is capable of killing Voldemort and she is in the school. And her name is…………………………………………………………………..Enony Dark’ness Dementia Raven Way."
* In ''{{Fanfic/Derelict}}'', Lieutenant Mackie figures out what the [[HPLovecraft SD Nyarlathotep]] is trying to accomplish after forty-five missions of complete mystery.
-->'''Mackie:''' [[OhCrap Oh my god!]] I know where she's going! Home! The Nyarlathotep is ''[[TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt going home!]]''"
* ''Fanfic/KyonBigDamnHero'': "Not half as monstrous as that thing you're trying to kiss."
* ''[[{{Fanfic/PokemonXDEnigmaShadowSeries}} Pokemon XD^3: The Waves of Truth]]'': It becomes pretty clear early on that Chapter 21 is a Wham Episode, but you can literally ''feel'' the trajectory of the entire story change the moment the doctor tells Rich that Anabel just miscarried twins that he didn't know about.
* ''Fanfic/LightAndDarkTheAdventuresOfDarkYagami'': Chapter 6:
-->'''Blud''': "THAT'S WHERE [[RougeAnglesOfSatin YOUR]] WRONG MY SHINY HAIRED APPRENTICE. YOU SEE I ONLY PRETENDED TO BE YOUR SHINIGAMI BUT IN FACT I WAS [[FakeDefector L'S ALL ALONG]]. I GAVE HIM A LIFE NOTE AND ALL I HAVE TO DO IS WRITE L'S NAME IN IT AND HE WILL COME BACK TO LIFE AS GOOD AS NEW AND YOUR PLANS WILL HAVE BIN FOILLED!"
** Chapter 14, after Dark finds some familiar age/sex/location information on a Talk to Dead Dudes Note.
-->'''Dark''': "r u l lol?"
-->'''L''': "yep"
* ''Fanfic/MGLNCrisis'' Chapter 25:
-->'''Fate''': "I'm sorry, I can't. Mother, did you know you had a split personality disorder?"
* ''[[FanFic/HalfLifeFullLifeConsequences Half Life Hero Beggining]]'': "Combines leave my son alone" John Freeman said.
-->'''Gordon Freeman''': John Freeman you let next boss step on me and made me headcrab zombie. Combines came and put science in me and made me live and strong and big now. I make you and Henry Freeman headcrab zombies. Prepair to die.
* The ''Literature/{{Coraline}}'' fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5840525/1/ Right Beside You]]'' has ''two'' WHAM lines:
** Chapter 9: "Yes Coraline, I ''am'' the [[LukeIAmYourFather boy's father]]."
** Chapter 12: "… No, Richard. I'm not satisfied… at all."
* ''[[Fanfic.TDWTReducksRedux TDWT Reducks Redux]]'': "It is within my power to remove you from the position of host."
* From the ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''[=/=]''ProblemSleuth'' crossover [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/256661/chapters/400499 The Sapphire of Alternia]]:
** Chapter 15: But the realization you’re actually having is that this case is just like all your other cases: a quarrel between a married couple.
** Chapter 24: The Sapphire of Alternia is the White King’s Scepter.
* A crossover story between ''CodeGeass'' and ''MobileSuitGundam00'' on the Anime Addventure features this Geass command by Rai on Setsuna for an experiment: "Setsuna F. Seiei, I command you to believe in God!"
** [[http://addventure.bast-enterprises.de/display_comment.php?episode=230039&n=1&m=0&d=0 It was such a shocking command that a reader commented that he jumped in his seat!]]
* ''FanFic/DragonAgeTheCrownOfThorns'':
--> '''Raonar:''' Ladies and gentlemen… I have just made the Archdemon smarter, and if it was not self-aware before, it definitely is now.
* ''AvatarsIIWhenQwaritchTakesRevenge'' In the third installment, when Quaritch hears about the Navi harem. ("His(sic) room on your left is the Navi harem.")
* ''Fanfic/NarutoVeanganceRevelaitons'': "well, u c that was an anitdote 2 wake her up, but it also [[FaceHeelTurn terns hur...CHRISTIN!]]"
** Chapter 14
-->'''Madara''': [[FreudianSlip JA]][[AuthorAvatar KE]]! U MUST KNOWETH SOMETHING! TALIANA! [[LukeIAmYourFather SHE IS THOU MOTHER]]!"
** This exchange.
-->'''Madara''': "YES! U WILL NEVR MAKE IT 2 DA COUMCOLS ROOM!"
-->'''Ronan''': "THA COUNCIL? IM LOKING 4 SAKUR!"
-->'''Madara''': "OH WELL DEN UR IN 4 A SURPRIS... 4 U C DIS IS THJE CUNCILS HEADQURTES!"
** At the end of Chapter 49, the Council declares that they will resurrect Sakura if Ronan wins their tournament. What makes it a Wham line? Sakura ''isn't dead yet'', and is killed immediately after they say this.
** This line from Chapter 70, or even the presence of a Chapter 70 in a fic that was set to end after 69 chapters.
-->Hello. Do not adjust your computer screen... for it is I, Benji (that guy Jake bitches about all the time)!
* Fanfic/ThanksKyubey: "...Good. It looks like our experiment was a success."
* ''FanFic/HuntingTheUnicorn,'' chapter eleven:
-->[[spoiler: '''Blaine:''']] ...I'm not a virgin.
** And in the twentieth chapter:
-->'''[[spoiler: Greg:]]''' Having a rough patch, [[CodeName Tom]]?
* ''SoulChess'': "Aizen! Kill yourself!"
* ''Fanfic/WhenThereWasATomorrow'': We're given the line "For now simply know that your prior feelings when we first met were understandable and I do not think poorly of you for them." Now, what makes this apparent CharacterDevelopment laden line so surprising? [[spoiler:''[[MindHive ''Legion]]'' is the one saying it!]] What makes it even [[BuffySpeak Whammier]] is that when Tali points out this change in behavior [[spoiler: Legion]] insists it's not calling itself [[spoiler: "I"]] and seems genuinely unaware that [[spoiler: it's]] doing so. The exact significance of this line has yet to be seen, however.
* ''Fanfic/WithStringsAttached'' has two:
** “The biggest thing is that there really isn't a curse on Ketafa.”
** “It's all been a real game, hasn't it.”
* ''DeathNote'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7292991/1/Xanatos Xanatos]] starts off with L reconsidering his method of catching Kira, and so striking a deal with Rem. We're made to believe that she went along with his plan after L fakes his own death, but then chapter nine gave us this:
-->''Still, maybe she [Rem] was wrong about L...maybe she shouldn't have killed him...''
* ''Harry Potter'' fanfic [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5930349/13/Pretending_To_Live]] has the main Original Character drop this one on a sixteen year old Tom Riddle:
-->''I can help you...with your Horcruxes.''
* Two in rapid succession at the end of ''Fanfic/StarsAbove'' Chapter 4:
-->[[EverybodysDeadDave "We're the only ones left."]]
-->"Neither of us killed it... you did."
* ''Fanfic/PonyPOVSeries'', "Playtime":
--> '''Applejack''': AH AIN'T SAY YA LYIN'! YA '''ARE''' A LIE!
* ''Fanfic/DontNameIt'': You once again try to be the Jade Blood. [[TheOmnipotent And fail spectacularly]].
* The NeonGenesisEvangelion {{Crossover}} fanfic ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7595530/1/Birth_of_a_God Birth of a God]]'' ends its prologue chapter with one of the most epic TemptingFate -> WhamLine combinations ever.
--> '''[[AGodAmI Shinji]]:''' (to himself) "Well, at least (the next world) can't be as [[CrapsackWorld bad]] as [[TheEndOfEvangelion the one I just left]], [[TemptingFate right]]?"
--> '''Cute red-headed young woman [[OhCrap with horns]]:''' "[[ElfenLied N]][[HighOctaneNightmareFuel y]][[YankTheDogsChain u]][[WhamLine ?]]"
* In ''FanFic/TurnaboutStorm'', [[VisualNovel/AceAttorney Phoenix]] needs to stall for time in order to get more evidence to clear [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Rainbow Dash]]'s name. So what does he do? This:
-->'''Phoenix''': [[spoiler: The suspect the defense accuses is the witness... '''Fluttershy'''!]]
* ''Fanfic/FutariWaPrettyCureBlueMoon'': "If you won't take my word as [[spoiler:Nakata Ami, homeroom teacher of the Lily Class]], then take it as [[spoiler:Cure Dusk]], alright?"
* Fanfic/ACompleteTurnabout
-->'''[[spoiler:Ema Skye]]''' "[[spoiler: [[CatchPhrase Scientifically]] [[SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay speaking]],]] she is right.
* [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/Anthropology Anthropology]]: "You weren’t born here in Equestria, Lyra.”
* In the popular and acclaimed WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender series Alone: From chapter eleven - [[spoiler:"Wait. The Leader can bend two elements?" and "I believe you will have been here four years in two weeks?"]] The second being a sudden revelation of a TimeSkip, akin to a certain scene from OrderOfTheStick.
