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* BladeOnAStick: The weapons for Hawk Maidens.
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* MagicStaff: Jakitza inherits one from her CynicalMentor, but immediately converts it to a magical BladeOnAStick.
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* BladeOnAStick: The WeaponOfChoice for Hawk Maidens.
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* ActionGirl: Half the cast.
* AloofAlly: Master Quitzam.
* ApparentlyPowerlessPuppetMaster: [[spoiler:Lord Oskardi Matsidari]]
* AloofAlly: Master Quitzam.
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* [[RapeAsBackStory Forced Prostitution as Backstory]]: Behari.
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* GoodShepherd: Larriki, priest of Zuze'en.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: [[spoiler: The governor of Beldatz.]]
* OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame
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* OurDwarvesAreAllTheSame
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* PowerGlows: Magic staves in particular.
* PowerLimiter: The Hawk Radiance Seal.
* PowerTattoo: Moonshade shadow tattoos.
* PowersViaPossession: [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/archive.php?comic_id=153 Xu're and Thunder are capable of pulling this off.]]
* PowerLimiter: The Hawk Radiance Seal.
* PowerTattoo: Moonshade shadow tattoos.
* PowersViaPossession: [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/archive.php?comic_id=153 Xu're and Thunder are capable of pulling this off.]]
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* TheSmartGuy: Jakitza Egoski. [[spoiler: Alias the Scroll Troll.]]
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* SmartPeopleWearGlasses: Jakitza.
* SophisticatedAsHell: Derrexi indulges in this a couple of times.
* SpiritAdvisor: Thunder to Xu're.
* SophisticatedAsHell: Derrexi indulges in this a couple of times.
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* [[TakingTheBullet Taking The Arrow]]: [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/archive.php?comic_id=231 Behari.]]
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* WarriorPoet: Derrexi, on occasion.
* YouAreNotAlone: Said multiple times, most notably to Behari.
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* BeastMan: The Quetzerri, fox people who can turn into humans. [[MorphicResonance They cannot, however, hide their tails.]]
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* PettingZooPeople: The Quetzerri, fox people who can turn into humans. [[MorphicResonance They cannot, however, hide their tails.]]
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* BigBadassBirdOfPrey: The hawk is the sacred animal of Zuze'en, goddess of the dawn, and the Hawk's Talon fighting style and the Hawk Maidens fighting order are both named for it. Also, the hawkfolk can be pretty fearsome.
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* NobleBirdOfPrey: The hawk is the sacred animal of Zuze'en, goddess of the dawn, and the Hawk's Talon fighting style and the Hawk Maidens fighting order are both named for it. Also, the hawkfolk can be pretty fearsome.
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* AloofAlly: Master Quitzam.
* ApparentlyPowerlessPuppetMaster: [[spoiler:Lord Oskardi Matsidari]]
* ApparentlyPowerlessPuppetMaster: [[spoiler:Lord Oskardi Matsidari]]
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Behari's {{Psychopomp}} thinks that killing her is more merciful alternative to letting her live. Given how messed up Behari's life has been, she may be right.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Behari's {{Psychopomp}} thinks that killing her is more merciful alternative to letting her live. Given how messed up Behari's life has been, is, she may be right.
* TheChessMaster: Lady Beltzane Matsidari.
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* HalfHumanHybrid Niriko. in addition to having the ears that identify her as a half-elf she also has blonde hair in part of the world where the only natural blondes are elves, so she is doubly identified and as such is subject FantasticRacism
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* HalfHumanHybrid TheGuardsMustBeCrazy: Subverted. The city guards leave Derrexi's cell unlocked and her possessions with plain view as a gesture of respect.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Niriko. in addition to having the ears that identify her as a half-elf she also has blonde hair in part of the world where the only natural blondes are elves, so she is doubly identified and as such is subject FantasticRacism
* MissingMom: Niriko.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Niriko becomes convinced that Behari is planning on betraying the hawk maidens after partially hearing a conversation. Most of the readership found this development rather bizarre as Behari had [[TakingTheBulet taken a poisonous arrow]] for Niriko not long before.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Niriko becomes convinced that Behari is planning on betraying the hawk maidens after partially hearing a conversation. Most of the readership found this development rather bizarre as Behari had [[TakingTheBulet [[TakingTheBullet taken a poisonous arrow]] for Niriko not long before.
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* EvilMatriarch: Lady Beltzane Matsidari.
* [[RapeAsBackStory Forced Prostitution as Backstory]]: Behari.
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* TheHermit: Master Quitzam, until the Hawk Maidens move in.
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Started in 2002, Nahast is a [[FantasyWebcomics Fantasy Webcomic]] by Alejandro Melchor which follows the story of a newly-created cadre of an order of female fighters called "Hawk Maidens". Despite the best efforts of their teacher, Derrexi Tzelan, the group garners little initial support from the people of the city of Beldatz. Worse, they end up caught in a power struggle between the factions in the city, at least one of which is determined to destroy them outright. Though the odds are stacked against them, the Hawk Maidens must pull together to protect each other and carve out a niche for themselves within the city.
Can be found [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/index.php here.]]
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Started in 2002, Nahast ''[[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/index.php Nahast: Lands of Strife]]'' is a [[FantasyWebcomics Fantasy Webcomic]] by Alejandro Melchor which follows the story of a newly-created cadre of an order of female fighters called "Hawk Maidens". Despite the best efforts of their teacher, Derrexi Tzelan, the group garners little initial support from the people of the city of Beldatz. Worse, they end up caught in a power struggle between the factions in the city, at least one of which is determined to destroy them outright. Though the odds are stacked against them, the Hawk Maidens must pull together to protect each other and carve out a niche for themselves within the city.
Can be found [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/index.php here.]]
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Can be found [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/index.php here.]]
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** SmartPeoplePlayChess: Jakitza may or may not actually play chess, [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/archive.php?comic_id=330 but it apparently looks like she does.]]
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* WarriorPoet: Derrexi, on occasion.occasion.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: [[spoiler: The governor of Beldatz.]]
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Can be found [[http://nahast.spiderforest.com/index.php here.]]
