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** There's also Poe. Not "Po," as in Po from WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda or Chien-Po from Disney/{{Mulan}}, or the similarly-pronounced "Pau," but "Poe," as in "Edgar Allen."

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** There's also Poe. Not "Po," as in Po from WesternAnimation/KungFuPanda or Chien-Po from Disney/{{Mulan}}, WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}}, or the similarly-pronounced "Pau," but "Poe," as in "Edgar Allen."



* RecycledSoundtrack: During her [[spoiler: death scene]], Katara manages to copy lyrics, nearly word for word, from Disney/{{Tarzan}}'s "You'll Be In My Heart." That's saying nothing of the [[Disney/TheLionKing Mufasa]] and [[Franchise/StarWars Obi-Wan Kenobi]] quotes that follow ''in the same text bubble.''

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* RecycledSoundtrack: During her [[spoiler: death scene]], Katara manages to copy lyrics, nearly word for word, from Disney/{{Tarzan}}'s WesternAnimation/{{Tarzan}}'s "You'll Be In My Heart." That's saying nothing of the [[Disney/TheLionKing [[WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994 Mufasa]] and [[Franchise/StarWars Obi-Wan Kenobi]] quotes that follow ''in the same text bubble.''



* ThemeTwinNaming: Ling and Poe both have names that sound [[Disney/{{Mulan}} suspiciously familiar.]]

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* ThemeTwinNaming: Ling and Poe both have names that sound [[Disney/{{Mulan}} [[WesternAnimation/{{Mulan}} suspiciously familiar.]]
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* ConspicuousCG: Not ''quite'' as bad as the first comic - more effort can be seen in the polar backgrounds, for example. However, the first panel is still quite obviously a photo of the Forbidden Palace.
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* LadyOfWar: Grown-up Azula is a little more elegant and ladylike than the DarkActionGirl she used to be, but no less threatening.
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Trope misuse and lots of YMMV potholes.


* ArmiesAreEvil: [[MalevolentMaskedMen Monster masks]], [[ShouldersOfDoom impossibly huge shoulder pads]], led by a {{Yandere}} DesignatedVillain and her [[EvilIsSexy sexy]], [[PsychoForHire psychotic]] brother? Yeah.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Zuko]]. The massive chest wound [[CaptainObvious probably has something to do with it]].

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* BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Zuko]]. The massive chest wound [[CaptainObvious probably has something to do with it]].it.
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* FantasticRacism: Katara's children suffer this from at least some of the natives in the Water Tribes, where they live as exiles after the revolt against their parents i the Fire Nation.

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* FantasticRacism: Katara's children suffer this from at least some of the natives in the Water Tribes, where they live as exiles after the revolt against their parents i in the Fire Nation.
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YMMV trope.


* WorldOfBuxom: Any girl old enough to have breasts has BIG breasts. [[BeautyEqualsGoodness Unless she's]] [[DesignatedVillain Mai]].

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* WorldOfBuxom: Any girl old enough to have breasts has BIG breasts. [[BeautyEqualsGoodness Unless she's]] [[DesignatedVillain she's Mai]].
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* SpinOffspring: The entire purpose of this comic.

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* SpinOffspring: The entire purpose original ''WebComic/HowIBecameYours'' was meant to conclude the story of this comic.the first-generation Avatar party. This sequel instead makes their children the main characters in a new adventure.
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* FantasticRacism

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* FantasticRacismFantasticRacism: Katara's children suffer this from at least some of the natives in the Water Tribes, where they live as exiles after the revolt against their parents i the Fire Nation.
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* BigBadDuumvirate: Mai and Sho.

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* BigBadDuumvirate: Mai and Sho.Sho still appear to be the villains, going by the cover, though they have yet to make an appearance in the comic itself.
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** The same could be said of Miracle as well, although there is precedent in the show, with the baby born in ''[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheSerpentsPass The Serpent's Pass]]'' being named Hope in light of birth circumstances. Perhaps one could also mention Toph's mother Poppy.

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** The same could be said of Miracle as well, although there is precedent in the show, with the baby born in ''[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheSerpentsPass The Serpent's Pass]]'' being named Hope in light of birth circumstances. Perhaps one could also mention Toph's mother Poppy.Poppy in this context.
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** The same could be said of Miracle as well, although there is precedent in the show, with the baby born in ''[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheSerpentsPass The Serpent's Pass]]'' being named Hope in light of birth circumstances.

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** The same could be said of Miracle as well, although there is precedent in the show, with the baby born in ''[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheSerpentsPass The Serpent's Pass]]'' being named Hope in light of birth circumstances. Perhaps one could also mention Toph's mother Poppy.
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The comic is located right [[http://www.myspace.com/47931544/photos/albums/album/3188421#mssrc=SitesPhotos_SP_AlbumCover_ViewAlbum here]]. It can also be found [[http://s762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/ here]], if and when Ms. Diaz friendslocks ''this'' comic too.

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The comic is located right [[http://www.myspace.com/47931544/photos/albums/album/3188421#mssrc=SitesPhotos_SP_AlbumCover_ViewAlbum here]]. It can also be found [[http://s762.photobucket.com/albums/xx265/ReneeLuvsZutara/ here]], if and when Ms. Diaz friendslocks ''this'' comic too.
too. Unfortunately, only the first installment has been completed, and by now it appears to be a DeadFic.

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* ArtisticLicenseMartialArts: Apparently Lilith's firebending training consists of stretching, randomly breathing fire, and doing slow-motion somersaults.



* MartialArtsDoNotWorkThatWay: Apparently Lilith's firebending training consists of stretching, randomly breathing fire, and doing slow-motion somersaults.
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* DeadFic: It has not been updated since 2010-ish, and may now be presumed dead, leaving fans with only the first chapter. Perhaps the online vituperation against the first series discouraged the creators.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: It bites {{Designated Hero}}es [[spoiler: Zuko and Katara]] in the ass with ancient curses and good old-fashioned knife work.
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* DeadGuyJunior: Kuzon is named after Aang's old friend, from before the war. [[spoiler: He's also named for his [[ConvenientMiscarriage conveniently miscarried]] elder brother, making him a twofer.]]

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* DeadGuyJunior: Kuzon is named after Aang's old friend, from before the war. [[spoiler: He's also named for his [[ConvenientMiscarriage conveniently miscarried]] stillborn elder brother, making him a twofer.]]
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Given the scene had important character-building material for several main characters, I don't think it was filler strictly speaking.


The comic starts off much as the first one did with a dream sequence flashback. In this, it shows an attack on the fire nation from the perspective of Lilith, Zuko and Katara's daughter. She wakes and after a short argument with her brother, Kuzon, they both leave to train. While training, they both experience flashbacks about the their time at the water tribe immediately following the attack. Once this ends, we move on to Poe, Aang and Toph's son, who is causing trouble. Ling, his twin sister, stops him and these two also have an argument before Ling buries him up to his neck in the ground and walks off. Then we get to see Miracle, Sokka and Azula's daughter, as she interacts with two children in the North Pole in a filler scene...which leads to another flashback sequence of the treatment Lilith and Kuzon received in the Water Tribes due to their unorthodox parentage.

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The comic starts off much as the first one did with a dream sequence flashback. In this, it shows an attack on the fire nation from the perspective of Lilith, Zuko and Katara's daughter. She wakes and after a short argument with her brother, Kuzon, they both leave to train. While training, they both experience flashbacks about the their time at the water tribe immediately following the attack. Once this ends, we move on to Poe, Aang and Toph's son, who is causing trouble. Ling, his twin sister, stops him and these two also have an argument before Ling buries him up to his neck in the ground and walks off. Then we get to see Miracle, Sokka and Azula's daughter, as she interacts with two children in at the North Pole in a filler scene...Northern Water Tribes capital... which leads to another flashback sequence of the treatment Lilith and Kuzon received in the Water Tribes due to their unorthodox parentage.
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It's ambiguous if Bong Sing Sai is really meant to be the same place as Ba Sing Se. The names are similar, but the Earth Kingdom has a lot of principalities.


** Amusingly, Ba Sing Se is spelled as '''''Bong''''' Sing Sai.
*** ...but not very surprising considering that Toph's surname "Beifong" was spelled "Befong" more than once in the predecessor.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Agni Army. May or may not be [[{{Narm}} corny]].

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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: Agni Army. May or may not be [[{{Narm}} corny]].
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* IdiotBall: Oh yes, making fun of two outsiders is probably something random Water Tribe children would do, if they were bitter enough. Making fun of two ROYAL kids, both of whom have dangerous elemental magic that reacts when they become emotional? Kinda stupid. Making fun of them within earshot of their insanely overprotective ParentalSubstitute who has even more powerfully destructive elemental magic than they do? [[TooDumbToLive Suicidal]].

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* IdiotBall: Oh yes, making fun of two outsiders is probably something random Water Tribe children would do, if they were bitter enough. Making fun of two ROYAL kids, both of whom have dangerous elemental magic that reacts when they become emotional? Kinda stupid. emotional? That’s asking for punishment from their society’s leaders, when Lilith is done with them. Making fun of them those two kids within earshot of their insanely overprotective ParentalSubstitute who has even more powerfully destructive elemental magic than they do? [[TooDumbToLive Suicidal]].Suicidal]], but for the grace of Azula’s AdaptationalHeroism. It really makes you wonder why the schoolyard bullies didn’t go for someone just a little less famous...
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* IdiotBall: Oh yes, making fun of two outsiders is probably something random Water Tribe children would do, if they were bitter enough. Making fun of two ROYAL kids, both of whom have dangerous elemental magic that reacts when they become emotional? Kinda stupid. Making fun of them within earshot of their insanely overprotective ParentalSubstitute who has even more powerfully destructive elemental magic than they do? [[TooDumbToLive Suicidal]].
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The sequel to the fan comic ''FanFic/HowIBecameYours'' based off of the show ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', ''How I Became Yours: Rise of the Agni Army'' is a fancomic created by Jackie Diaz and co-authored by a fellow named Patrick BP. Ms. Diaz was notorious for continuous tracing, stolen photographs, and bad Photoshops within the first comic. While only one partial chapter has been released so far, it seems that she's up to the same old shenanigans.

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The sequel to the fan comic ''FanFic/HowIBecameYours'' ''Webcomic/HowIBecameYours'' based off of the show ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', ''How I Became Yours: Rise of the Agni Army'' is a fancomic created by Jackie Diaz and co-authored by a fellow named Patrick BP. Ms. Diaz was notorious for continuous tracing, stolen photographs, and bad Photoshops within the first comic. While only one partial chapter has been released so far, it seems that she's up to the same old shenanigans.
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* DelusionsOfEloquence: Like the prequel, it is peppered with this trope. The most {{Egregious}} example is on the poster. [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evocation Evocation]] is not used that way, unless of course the commenter is saying this story is a demon brought out of the pits of hell. Considering the fact that he's the co-author of the sequel, it's reasonable to assume that is not what he meant at all.

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* DelusionsOfEloquence: Like the prequel, it is peppered with this trope. The most {{Egregious}} JustForFun/{{Egregious}} example is on the poster. [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evocation Evocation]] is not used that way, unless of course the commenter is saying this story is a demon brought out of the pits of hell. Considering the fact that he's the co-author of the sequel, it's reasonable to assume that is not what he meant at all.
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The sequel to the fan comic ''FanFic/HowIBecameYours'' based off of the show ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', ''How I Became Yours: Rise Of The Agni Army'' is a fancomic created by Jackie Diaz and co-authored by a fellow named Patrick BP. Ms. Diaz was notorious for continuous tracing, stolen photographs, and bad Photoshops within the first comic. While only one partial chapter has been released so far, it seems that she's up to the same old shenanigans.

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The sequel to the fan comic ''FanFic/HowIBecameYours'' based off of the show ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', ''How I Became Yours: Rise Of The of the Agni Army'' is a fancomic created by Jackie Diaz and co-authored by a fellow named Patrick BP. Ms. Diaz was notorious for continuous tracing, stolen photographs, and bad Photoshops within the first comic. While only one partial chapter has been released so far, it seems that she's up to the same old shenanigans.






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* IronicName: Lilith, in Hebrew mythology, is the name of Adam's wife before Eve, who disobeyed him and was cast out, becoming a demon. This has serious similarities ''Mai's'' story in ''Webcomic/HowIBecameYours'', so it's rather ironic that it's used for ''Katara's'' (who's more of a counterpart to Eve) daughter.


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* IronicName: Lilith, in Hebrew mythology, is the name of Adam's wife before Eve, who disobeyed him and was cast out, becoming a demon. This has serious similarities ''Mai's'' story in ''Webcomic/HowIBecameYours'', so it's rather ironic that it's used for ''Katara's'' (who's more of a counterpart to Eve) daughter.

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* AerithAndBob: Lilith? What is a Biblical name doing in a FantasyCounterpartCulture to East Asia?
** The same could be said of Miracle as well.

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* AerithAndBob: Lilith? What is a Biblical The name Lilith comes from Hebrew mythology. What's it doing in a FantasyCounterpartCulture to of East Asia?
** The same could be said of Miracle as well.well, although there is precedent in the show, with the baby born in ''[[Recap/AvatarTheLastAirbenderTheSerpentsPass The Serpent's Pass]]'' being named Hope in light of birth circumstances.


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* IronicName: Lilith, in Hebrew mythology, is the name of Adam's wife before Eve, who disobeyed him and was cast out, becoming a demon. This has serious similarities ''Mai's'' story in ''Webcomic/HowIBecameYours'', so it's rather ironic that it's used for ''Katara's'' (who's more of a counterpart to Eve) daughter.
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* DelusionsOfEloquence: Like the prequel, it is peppered with this trope. The most {{Egregious}} example is on the poster. [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evocation Evocation]] is not used that way, unless of course the commentor is saying this story is a demon brought out of the pits of hell. Considering the fact that he's the co-author of the sequel, it's reasonable to assume that is not what he meant at all.

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* DelusionsOfEloquence: Like the prequel, it is peppered with this trope. The most {{Egregious}} example is on the poster. [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evocation Evocation]] is not used that way, unless of course the commentor commenter is saying this story is a demon brought out of the pits of hell. Considering the fact that he's the co-author of the sequel, it's reasonable to assume that is not what he meant at all.



** [[spoiler: Zuko]] is nonresponsive and has a case of BloodFromTheMouth, with Lilith providing the typical PleaseWakeUp reaction.

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** [[spoiler: Zuko]] is nonresponsive non-responsive and has a case of BloodFromTheMouth, with Lilith providing the typical PleaseWakeUp reaction.
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