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* BadassBeard: Warlord Karlsen, a Beastman who looks like [[AsurasWrath Augus]] if he dressed up as a [[ThePaladin paladin]]. [[spoiler:Sure, he probably died just as fast as he appeared after Volaster blew the Beastman capital into ashes (making his total comic time 4 pages)]], but he is so far the only mortal character who has been seen causing significant damage against a demon. Not just any demon, but [[spoiler: [[DemonLordsAndArchDevils an Overfiend!]]]]
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* BadassBeard: Warlord Karlsen, a Beastman who looks like [[AsurasWrath [[VideoGame/AsurasWrath Augus]] if he dressed up as a [[ThePaladin paladin]]. [[spoiler:Sure, he probably died just as fast as he appeared after Volaster blew the Beastman capital into ashes (making his total comic time 4 pages)]], but he is so far the only mortal character who has been seen causing significant damage against a demon. Not just any demon, but [[spoiler: [[DemonLordsAndArchDevils an Overfiend!]]]]
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* BlondeGuysAreEvil: Slade. Even the other demons doesn't trust him!
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* HandsomeDevil: Royce, Asmodai, and also Goristro and Volaster to a certain degree.
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** Many characters' names harken to classic Sega. The family name Lashiec, for example, comes from the actual translation of the name "Lassic", the villain of the first PhantasyStar. Likewise, Lutz is named after the esper in the same game. Meanwhile, Teodora is named after a character from ''SkiesOfArcadia''. Then there is also the aforementioned Slade...
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** Many characters' names harken to classic Sega. The family name Lashiec, for example, comes from the actual translation of the name "Lassic", the villain of the first PhantasyStar. Likewise, Lutz is named after the esper in the same game. Meanwhile, Teodora is named after a character from ''SkiesOfArcadia''.''VideoGame/SkiesOfArcadia''. Then there is also the aforementioned Slade...
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** In reality, some incentives include bookmarks and stickers with ''Heartcore'' characters.
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* OhCrap: Almost anytime Ame gets pissed or scary, someone is bound to have this expression. Ame has also sported this reaction a few times when in trouble.
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** Almost anytime Ame gets pissed or scary, someone is bound to have this expression. Ame has also sported this reaction a few times when introuble.trouble.
** When Ame learns that Asmodai called in a favor to escort her to her court martial because the only alternative was [[TheFriendNobodyLikes Slade]], she has this look on her face, accompanied by a mushroom explosion in the background of the panel.
** Almost anytime Ame gets pissed or scary, someone is bound to have this expression. Ame has also sported this reaction a few times when in
** When Ame learns that Asmodai called in a favor to escort her to her court martial because the only alternative was [[TheFriendNobodyLikes Slade]], she has this look on her face, accompanied by a mushroom explosion in the background of the panel.
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* {{Revenge}}: A prevailing theme throughout the story; Ame's rebellion against her father is out of revenge for stealing her life force to complete a possession spell. [[spoiler:Same for Volaster, [[http://tlwelker.deviantart.com/art/heartcore-chp-08-page-342-342589659 as revenge played a large role in his becoming a demon.]]]]
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* {{Revenge}}: A prevailing theme throughout the story; Ame's rebellion against her father fathe
r is out of revenge for stealing her life force to complete a possession spell. [[spoiler:Same for Volaster, [[http://tlwelker.deviantart.com/art/heartcore-chp-08-page-342-342589659 as revenge played a large role in his becoming a demon.]]]]
r is out of revenge for stealing her life force to complete a possession spell. [[spoiler:Same for Volaster, [[http://tlwelker.deviantart.com/art/heartcore-chp-08-page-342-342589659 as revenge played a large role in his becoming a demon.]]]]
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*** [[spoiler:WordOfGod is Carval and Volaster are two big walking talking shout-outs to StephenKing. Volaster's line before beginning his incantation for the Blast Bomb spell, "My life for you", is another quote from ''The Stand'': in this case, the Trashcan Man's MadnessMantra from the TV series adaptation.]]
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*** [[spoiler:WordOfGod is Carval and Volaster are two big walking talking shout-outs to StephenKing.Creator/StephenKing. Volaster's line before beginning his incantation for the Blast Bomb spell, "My life for you", is another quote from ''The Stand'': in this case, the Trashcan Man's MadnessMantra from the TV series adaptation.]]
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* EyeScream: Slade doesn't hesitate to puncture one of Ame's eyes during his with her.
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* EyeScream: Slade doesn't hesitate to puncture one of Ame's eyes during his fight with her.
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* EyeScream: Slade doesn't hesitate to puncture one of Ame's eyes during his with her.
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* ContinuityReboot: Dissatisfied with how the comic was originally going, the author restarted the comic from the first chapter in 2014.
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* ContinuityReboot: Dissatisfied with how the comic was originally going, the author restarted the comic from the first chapter in 2014.2013.
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* ContinuityReboot: Dissatisfied with how the comic was originally going, the author restarted the comic from the first chapter in 2014.
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* SweaterGirl: Complete with DetachedSleeves and lots of cleavage. [[WordOfGod Life is amazing.]]
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* SweaterGirl: Complete with DetachedSleeves detached sleeves and lots of cleavage. [[WordOfGod Life is amazing.]]
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* WorldOfBuxom: Since demons have a competitive streak and appearance is treated as a kind of power, most of the female characters have breasts at least half as big as their heads. It helps that they know advanced magic and can eat the very source of life itself. Some girls are exceptions, but that's only because they have pre-pubescent bodies.
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** Sukina was originally designed by [[http://anoveltyspoon.deviantart.com/ "A Novelty Spoon"]]
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** Sukina was originally is based off of a character designed by [[http://anoveltyspoon.deviantart.com/ "A Novelty Spoon"]]
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** Ame's "Summon Suffering" spell takes its name from [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7T5225FCvQ a technique used by]] [[VideoGame/SoulSeries Ivy Valentine]].
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** WordOfGod says [[http://tlwelker.deviantart.com/art/heartcore-chp-08-page-288-301525807?q=gallery%3Atlwelker&qo=0 Carval's shirt]] is a three-way reference: one to Music/FrankieGoesToHollywood, the second to ''MalcolmInTheMiddle'', and the third to Carval's predecessor, Volaster's [[BiTheWay bisexuality]].
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** WordOfGod says [[http://tlwelker.deviantart.com/art/heartcore-chp-08-page-288-301525807?q=gallery%3Atlwelker&qo=0 Carval's shirt]] is a three-way reference: one to Music/FrankieGoesToHollywood, the second to ''MalcolmInTheMiddle'', ''Series/MalcolmInTheMiddle'', and the third to Carval's predecessor, Volaster's [[BiTheWay bisexuality]].
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FB 20 XL is dead, so is the link.
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** How about comparing [[http://www.fireball20xl.com/tms/?id=235 2002]] to [[http://tlwelker.deviantart.com/art/heartcore-chp-08-page-355-357013624 2013]]?
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Lashiecs, full-stop. Royce and Ame used to get along swimmingly, until Royce forcibly drained Ame's power and scarred her. Suko and Ame get along well, and Suko was Royce's favorite, but he forced a brainwashed Ame to nearly kill her, which did jack-diddly to improve Ame's opinion of him. Her mother, Lilium, is not a fan or Royce, either. [[spoiler:Not to mention, Carval is her half-brother, being created from Royce's union with Volaster; and he's certainly not above blowing Ame into smithereens.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Lashiecs, full-stop. Royce and Ame used to get along swimmingly, until Royce forcibly drained Ame's power and scarred her. Suko and Ame get along well, and but while Suko was Royce's favorite, but he forced doesn't quarrel with Royce like Ame does, he's doesn't care much for her either. He also forces a brainwashed Ame to nearly kill her, which did jack-diddly to improve Ame's opinion of him. Her mother, Lilium, is not a fan or Royce, either. [[spoiler:Not to mention, Carval is her half-brother, being created from Royce's union with Volaster; and he's certainly not above blowing Ame into smithereens.]]
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* DeadlyGas: The atmosphere outside of domed cities such as New Ayers is invariably lethal to humans.
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* DeadlyGas: The atmosphere outside of domed cities such as New Ayers is invariably lethal to humans. Demons and beastmen, however, are immune.
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* DeadlyGas: The atmosphere outside of domed cities such as New Ayers is tolerable to demons and beastmen, but invariably lethal to humans.
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* DeadlyGas: The atmosphere outside of domed cities such as New Ayers is tolerable to demons and beastmen, but invariably lethal to humans.
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* DeadlyGas: The atmosphere outside of domed cities such as New Ayers is tolerable to demons and beastmen, but invariably lethal to humans.
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: The biggest difference between the demons of Heartcore and most other demons in fiction can be seen above in BizarreAlienReproduction. Oh, and there is also the fact that they used to be mortal creatures at some point.
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: The biggest difference between the Demons are capable of BizarreAlienReproduction with one another, their exact demonic species notwithstanding. They can also be divided into one of three classes:
** First-class demonsof Heartcore and most other were once mortal, but shed their humanity by committing atrocities. Most demons in fiction can be seen above in BizarreAlienReproduction. Oh, and there is also the fact that they used to be mortal creatures at some point.story are first-class: Volaster, in particular, became a demon after razing his hometown.
** Second-class demons are children/reincarnations of past demons. Ame qualifies, being the child of Lilium.
** Third-class demons, like first-class demons, are former mortals who were converted into demons by another demon.
** First-class demons
** Second-class demons are children/reincarnations of past demons. Ame qualifies, being the child of Lilium.
** Third-class demons, like first-class demons, are former mortals who were converted into demons by another demon.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Lashiecs, full-stop. Royce and Ame used to get along swimmingly, until Royce forcibly drained Ame's power and scarred her. Suko and Ame get along well, and Suko was Royce's favorite, but he forced a brainwashed Ame to nearly kill her, which did jack-diddly to improve Ame's opinion of her. Her mother, Lilium, is not a fan or Royce, either. [[spoiler:Not to mention, Carval is her half-brother, being created from Royce's union with Volaster; and he's certainly not above blowing Ame into smithereens.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Lashiecs, full-stop. Royce and Ame used to get along swimmingly, until Royce forcibly drained Ame's power and scarred her. Suko and Ame get along well, and Suko was Royce's favorite, but he forced a brainwashed Ame to nearly kill her, which did jack-diddly to improve Ame's opinion of her.him. Her mother, Lilium, is not a fan or Royce, either. [[spoiler:Not to mention, Carval is her half-brother, being created from Royce's union with Volaster; and he's certainly not above blowing Ame into smithereens.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Lashiecs, full-stop. Royce and Ame used to get along swimmingly, until Royce forcibly drained Ame's power and scarred her. Suko and Ame get along well, and Suko was Royce's favorite, but he forced a brainwashed Ame to nearly kill her, which did jack-diddly to improve Ame's opinion of her. Her mother, Lilium, is not a fan or Royce, either. [[spoiler:Not to mention, Carval is her half-brother, being created from Royce's union with Volaster; and he's certainly not above blowing Ame into smithereens.]]
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* FryingPanOfDoom: Suko tries to use this against Slade when he is beating down Ame. It does nothing but a small cut on his face wile giving him a new target to attack.
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** In reality, recent incentives have included bookmarks and stickers with ''Heartcore'' characters.
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** In reality, recent some incentives have included include bookmarks and stickers with ''Heartcore'' characters.
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* VillainOverride: [[spoiler:VillainProtagonist Ame temporarily relinquishes control of her body to her mother, Lilium, in order to level the playing field between herself and Royce. Later, Carval does the same, letting Volaster take over during his fight with Ame.]]
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* NiceToTheWaiter: Unlike most demons, Suko seems to be rather kind to her servants, even protecting them from Ame when needed.
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* OfficialCouple: [=Ame/Syranon=], according to [[http://tlwelker.deviantart.com/art/valentine-s-melting-the-ice-for-me-514080247 Word of God]] (NSFW). Counts as TruthInTelevision, since the characters' creators are married.
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* ServantRace: The Balbons are a short race of servants who can best be described as satanic [[Franchise/StarWars Jawas]] or grimdark [[VideoGame/LeagueOfLegends Veigar]] cosplayers.
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** Lutz's given name is taken from [[Franchise/SuperMario Ludwig von Koopa]], the author's favorite Koopaling.
